My Characters

Sarah McSouthers-Daughter of Athena

Er, can you read the rules please?

I did read the rules. What did I do? I put Sarah McSouthers.

You need to fill out this form for your character:

Name:
Age/Birthday:
Gender:
God Parent:
Mortal Parent:
Years in Camp:
Brief History:
Physical Appearance:
Personality:
Pets:
Talents:
Weapons:
Other:

No, you didn't read them carefully.

Name: Sarah McSouthers
Age/Birthday:15/June 2 1995
Gender:Female
God Parent:Athena
Mortal Parent:Robert McSouthers
Years in Camp:6
Brief History:Stepmom was rude to her,left to camp. Good student and teachers liked her.
Physical Appearance:Blonde,tall,grey eyes,hair is always in a ponytail
Personality:Nice, funny, smart, wise
Pets:Dog and owl
Talents:Strategy, sword-fighting, architecture
Weapons:Knife
Other:Necklace says her name

Right, umm...if I were you, I'd put in more detail, you don't have to put in lots but this isn't enough, I'm sorry.

Check out some of the character templates of these people:

Dean's Creations
Dan's Characters
Crispy Bacon's Characters
Zan's Characters
ChivanChang's Characters
Pink's Characters
Angel's Characters

*coughcoughmoo'schars* Sorry, I have a cough :]

I would suggest checking out some of the templates that Demon has said just above me.

As of now, you have a good base for your character, but I would suggest expanding everything (Brief History, Physical Appearance, Personality, and Talents). You don’t have to have heaps of detail, but a sufficient amount so we can really get a feel of the character. In addition to adding in more detail, it’s necessary for your characters to have flaws so the roleplay is more realistic. You can have a few significant flaws here and there, or have one major fatal flaw. Make sense? (:

Also, as a sidenote, before I or another admin can accept your character (once it has been tweaked to fit regular standards), have you sent in the codeword? Without that, we cannot accept characters. Thanks, and I’ll check back in to make sure you’re on the right track.