Calle17's Characters

Subject: Calle17's Characters Sun Jun 26, 2011 12:36 pm

Halfbloods:
Jade- Jade grew up in an orphanage since she was 3 years old because her father couldn't support her. When she was 7 years old her dad took her out of the orphanage because he had found another wife. Her step-mom had Mikey, and the she left. Jade went back to the orphanage with Mikey, and raised him. Jade soon became very protective over Mikey and wouldn't let him out of her sight. Jade is now 12 years old. She has long black hair and grey eyes. Her Goddess mother is Athena.

Mikey- Mikey never knew his dad or mom. The only people he trusts are Jade, and the staff at the orphanage. Basically, the only people Jade trusts. He is 5 years old. He has blonde hair and blue eyes. His Goddess mother is Aphrodite.

I hope that's good!!! :D

Subject: Re: Calle17's Characters Sun Jun 26, 2011 12:45 pm

Hey and welcome to CHB!

You're very descriptive, but you need to fill out one of these templates from here.
Copy and paste it into this topic and fill it out 8D

Subject: Re: Calle17's Characters Mon Jun 27, 2011 4:16 pm

Subject: Re: Calle17's Characters Mon Jun 27, 2011 4:17 pm

Half-Bloods:

Jade- Jade grew up in an orphanage since she was 3 years old because her father couldn't support her. When she was 7 years old her dad took her out of the orphanage because he had found another wife. Her step-mom had Mikey, and the she left. Jade went back to the orphanage with Mikey, and raised him. Jade soon became very protective over Mikey and wouldn't let him out of her sight. Jade is now 12 years old. She has long black hair and grey eyes. Her Goddess mother is Athena.

Mikey- Mikey never knew his dad or mom. The only people he trusts are Jade, and the staff at the orphanage. Basically, the only people Jade trusts. He is 5 years old. He has blonde hair and blue eyes. His Goddess mother is Aphrodite.
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Subject: Re: Calle17's Characters Mon Jun 27, 2011 5:02 pm

...That's the exact same thing.
Calle you have to fill out this form:

Name: First and Last Name
Age/Birthday:
Gender:
God Parent:
Claimed: Yes or No
Mortal Family: First and Last Name/s
Years in Camp:
Brief History: At least 4 sentences. Be sure to include details!
Physical Appearance: At least 4 sentences. Be sure to include details!
Personality: At least 4 sentences. Be sure to include details!
Fatal Flaw:
Pets:
Talents:
Weapons:
Year-Round or Summer:
Other:

You click on the thin gray boxes to reveal what's inside them, incase that's what you were having problems with.

Subject: Re: Calle17's Characters Mon Jun 27, 2011 8:51 pm

Oh.
I thought you ment the other thing!!!

Name: Jade Stonehalk
Age/Birthday: 12 years old, born on June 22, 1998
Gender: Female
Goddly Parent: Athena
Mortal Family: Father- James Stonehalk (does not live with)
Years in camp: Never been there
Brief History: Jade's father put her in the orphanage when she was 3 years old because he couldn't care for her by himself. When she was 7 years old, he took her out of the orphanage because he had found a wife who was pregnant with her little brother. When Mikey, her little brother, was born the woman left. Jade's father put both Jade and Mikey into the orphanage where they stayed for five years.
Appearance: Jade has long straight black hair. Her eyes are stormy grey. She is tall and unusually skinny. Her skin in very pale.
Personality: Jade is very kind. She is also very protctive over her little brother. She is smart, often making her the laughs of the other orphans at the orphanage. She is also very brave.
Fatal Flaw: Way too protective over the things that she cares about.
Pets: None
Talents: Knife fighting, sword fighting
Weapons: A replica of Annabeth's dagger
Year-round or Summer- Year round
Other: Very, very, cery pretty

Subject: Re: Calle17's Characters Mon Jun 27, 2011 8:53 pm

Thank you for editing.

Jade is Accepted.

Subject: Re: Calle17's Characters Mon Jun 27, 2011 9:06 pm

Name: Mikey Stonehalk
Age/Birthday: 5 years old, born on May 30, 2006
Gender: Male
Goddly Parent: Aphrodite
Mortal Family: Father- James Stonehalk (does not live with)
Years in camp: Never been there
Brief History: Mikey never knew any of his parents. He had always lived in the orphanage with Jade raising him. Jade taught him to hate his father and his mother. Mikey only trusted the people Jade trusted. Mikey love Jade as much as he would have loved his mother if she had stayed with his father.
Appearance: Mikey has cropped blonde hair that is uneven. He has blue eyes the colour of the sky. He is short for his age. He still has some baby fat left. His two front teeth are missing.
Personality: Mikey is very deternined. If he cares about someone and they're in trouble, he will find them. He is not very brave. He is very kind.
Fatal Flaw: Dependent on others
Pets: None
Talents: Getting what he wants
Weapons: A replica of Riptide
Year-round or Summer- Year round
Other: Mikey is very senstive about hurtful words

Subject: Re: Calle17's Characters Mon Jun 27, 2011 9:07 pm

Oh, thanks for accepting Jade!
Please accept Mikey too!

Subject: Re: Calle17's Characters Mon Jun 27, 2011 9:17 pm

I'm not sure about the replica of Riptide thing. xP Annabeth's knife was just a knife...but Percy's sword was very unique. I don't think that you can duplicate his sword. You could just say "Just a plain, celestial bronze sword". But...actually now I'm a little hesitant about the replica of Annabeth's knife. Could you possibly change those two things? (Sorry about not really noticing that before.)

Subject: Re: Calle17's Characters Tue Jun 28, 2011 3:49 pm

sure
They both just have regular celestial bronze weapons!
Jade has a dagger and Mikey has a sword!
Does that mean Mikey's accepted?

Subject: Re: Calle17's Characters Tue Jun 28, 2011 3:57 pm

Yep. ^^ They're both Accepted.

Subject: Re: Calle17's Characters Tue Jun 28, 2011 4:21 pm

thank you so much!!!

Subject: Re: Calle17's Characters Thu Jun 30, 2011 6:04 pm

Name: Mackenzie Smith
Age/Birthday: 12 years old, born on June 22, 1998
Gender: Female
Goddly Parent: Athena
Mortal Family: Sister- Jade Stonehawk, Brother-Mikey Stonehawk, Father- James Stonehawk, Adoptive Parents- Mary and George Smith
Years in camp: None
Brief History: Mackenzie was taken away when she was a baby. Her father never told her siblings about her. She grew up with adoptive parents. When her adoptive parents told her she was adopted Mackenzie ran away from home. She has battled many monsters and finally found her way to Camp Half Blood with the help of her mom, Athena, who guided her and told her about Camp Half Blood and how she was a half-blood and all that important information.
Appearance: Makcenzie has straight black hair. She also has eyes the colour of a storm. She is tall. She is skinny.
Personality: Mackenzie is very independent. She feels uncomfortable when all the attention is on her, or when she is in a crowd because there is no where to run if she needs to. Mackenzie is clausthraphobic. She does not trust just any one.
Fatal Flaw: Never accepts help when she needs it.
Pets: One pet rat named Lulu.
Talents: Very smart, good with kids, and good at distracting
Weapons: Sword her Dad gave her that turns into a keychain when she's not using it.
Year-round or Summer- Year Round
Other: Jade Stonehawk is actually her twin!

Subject: Re: Calle17's Characters Thu Jun 30, 2011 6:53 pm

Athena shouldn't have had made contact with her, so that means she shouldn't have a sword from her, and Athena couldn't tell her directly about being a half blood.

Subject: Re: Calle17's Characters Thu Jun 30, 2011 7:07 pm

Ok. Her dad told her about it and gave her the sword.

Subject: Re: Calle17's Characters Thu Jun 30, 2011 9:17 pm

Accepted!

Subject: Re: Calle17's Characters Thu Jun 30, 2011 9:22 pm

Thanks!!

Subject: Re: Calle17's Characters Mon Jul 04, 2011 3:31 pm

Jack Wilson
Son of Ares
Name: George Jack Wilson (Goes by Jack)
Age/Birthday: 14, June 27
Gender: Male
God Parent: Ares
Claimed: Yes
Mortal Family: Jackie Wilson (Mom), Jack Wilson (Step-Dad), Jackie Jr. Wilson (Step-sister)
Years in Camp: 4
Brief History: Jack had a horrible childhood. When he was 5 his mom married Jack Wilson, who was delighted to find out that his new step-son went by the name Jack, because she was pregnant with his daughter. The younger Jack soon became Junior in his household. He almost decided to go by George. Almost.
Even before his mom got married, Jack led a pretty bad life. He was kicked out of every school he went to, including pre-school. Trouble seemed to follow him.
Jackie was never around much, although she was unemployed. She would leave during the nights, and Jack's grandparents would come down from Scotland (to England), sometimes for weeks. Jack would enjoy these small visits with his grandparents.
After his mom got married and had another child, whom they named Jackie Jr, Jack was forgotten. After a while so was Jackie. Sometimes Jack would hear Jackie crying in the middle of the night from a nightmare, and Jack Sr. would come in and yell at her. Then Jack would go in and yell at his step-dad until Jackie Sr yelled at everyone to shut up. She would then find some way to punish her two children. After that, Jack would take Jackie into his room and she would sleep with him.
When Jack was ten, he made the decision to run away. He couldn't leave Jackie so he took her to Scotland to live with their grandparents, who had stopped speaking to Jackie Sr after she got married. He knew he could trust them to take care of their granddaughter.
Jack wanted to stay, but he had a feeling in his gut that he needed to go to Brooklyn, New York, America. He asked his grandparents for a plane ticket, and they gave it to him.
After that, he made it to Camp Half-blood. He goes back to Scotland to visit his grandparents and Jackie every Christmas.
He still has is English accent.
Physical Appearance: Jack has blue eyes. His hair is brown. He has no freckles, and fairly tanned skin. His arms somewhat bulge from muscles, but not really. He isn't really built like most children of Ares. His shoulders aren't very broad, and his face doesn't look as though it was smashed in. He is fairly tall (around 5'7/5'8 ) and skinny.
Personality: Jack is a rebel. When he is told to do something, he will not do it. He hates doing what other people are doing, and usually prefers to be alone. However, there are those few people who he enjoys being around.
Jack loses his temper easily, and he usually isn't a very happy person. However, he is very loyal to his friends and family.
Fatal Flaw: Jack will do anything for a friend or family member (except maybe Jackie Sr and Jack Sr)
Pets: None
Talents: Jack is very fast, strong and skilled with a sword.
Weapons: Jack uses a sword that can fit into his back pocket. No matter what size the pocket is, or what pants he's wearing, the sword will contract into the space. His sword always comes back to him when he drops it.
Year-Round or Summer: Year-Round, but leaves for Christmas
Other: Jack's Playby is Louis Tomlinson (<3). His colour is Maroon

Subject: Re: Calle17's Characters Mon Jul 04, 2011 5:05 pm

Actually, the history is great. I ignore brief, too! Accepted!

Subject: Re: Calle17's Characters Mon Jul 04, 2011 6:11 pm

Thanks!!! I can never make the history brief!

Subject: Re: Calle17's Characters Wed Jul 06, 2011 5:26 pm

Name: Amika Williams
Age/Birthday: 15 years old, March 1, 1995 (I'm pretty sure!)
Gender: Female
God Parent: Hermes
Claimed: Yes
Mortal Family: Mom- Sara Williams
Years in Camp: None
Brief History: Amika lived in Scotland until she came to Camp Half Blood. She went on vacation in Brooklyn, where she was first attacked by a monster. She defeated the monster, but was sepparated from her mom. She soon found out she had a talent at stealing things. So, she stole food until she found her mom again. That was when her mom decided to take her to Camp Half Blood. She hasn't seen her mom since.
Physical Appearance: Amika is very short for her age. She is also very skinny, making it easy to fit into small places. She has long blonde hair that goes down to her waist. She wears black "nerd" glasses.
Personality: Amika is very independent and likes to keep to herself. She is very good at comforting people. She enjoys going on hikes in the forest. She hates the indoors.
Fatal Flaw: Very independent
Pets: A beagle puppy named Jack
Talents: Good at stealing things
Weapons: Normal Sword
Year-Round or Summer: Summer
Other: I think I made the history brief this time!

Subject: Re: Calle17's Characters Wed Jul 06, 2011 5:35 pm

You need one more sentence of Physical appearance, and two more sentences of Personality, please. ^^

Subject: Re: Calle17's Characters Wed Jul 06, 2011 5:39 pm

ok
Ill edit it

Subject: Re: Calle17's Characters Wed Jul 06, 2011 5:41 pm

I edited it!

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