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Half-Bloods
Name: Kenneth Rodriguez
Age/Birthday: 12 3/26/1999
Gender: Male
God Parent: Apollo
Claimed: Yes
Mortal Family: Fernanda Rodriguez
Years in Camp: 1
Brief History: When he was a little child, he had anger issues when he tried to go to mortal schools. He would always fight with his mother, who would try to control him but failed most of the time. He met his father once, when he went to the beach for a vacation on his 10th birthday. His father came to him when his mom left to go back to their cabin. He sat there an the beach and his father came and spoke to him. His mother took him to Camp Half-Blood soon after that.

Physical Appearance: A very scrawny boy, he never seemed to get any bigger, according to all of his friends. He is still 5 ft 3 and lets his black hair hang down over his shoulders. His dark blue eyes shine with a mischievous glint, and he is fairly strong for his size. He has cut across hand from an archery accident.

Personality: He can be very boring at times but is usually uplifting. He laughs with his friends and gets annoyed when he gets told off for not doing something right. He spends most of his time outside at the archery range, shooting arrows downhill for hours at a time. He has a short temper and gets mad easily but calms down pretty quickly. He has a pretty clean track record, marked in a few spots by small blotches.
Fatal Flaw: Anger Problems
Pets: Fish
Talents: Improvising
Weapons: Bow and Arrow, Knives, Short Swords
Year-Round or Summer: Year-Round
Color: Green

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Accepted!

Half-Bloods
Name: Jack Che
Age/Birthday:12 8/14/1998
Gender:Male
God Parent:Athena
Claimed:No
Mortal Family: Andrew Che
Years in Camp: 2
Brief History: He was born in Vietnam and moved to America when he was 6 years old. He moved in with his aunt and uncle who lived in Broomfield, Colorado. He was able to out smart everyone in his grade and was moved ahead so many grades that he had to go to 9th grade when he was 9 He was about to enter his junior year when the monsters started attacking. He had to travel across the country with his school's satyr to make it to New York. He made it there and stayed with his dads friend, Paul Rodriguez when he was ten. He came to camp in that same year as well.

Physical Appearance: He has dark hair and brown eyes. He wears glasses because he cannot see very well and never brushes his hair. He walks while his feet drag along the ground. He always carries a stack of books around and has a Stilleto knife in one sleeve with a full size dagger in the other. He walks in a stealthy manner as if he has something to hide.

Personality: He is a very quiet person, never talking unless he has to. He always walks as if he has a secret to keep but he really doesn't. He just doesn't trust anyone because his sister always tormented him as a kid. He is a very mild mannered kid but no one ever talks to him because he keeps his face hidden in a hood. He believes that violence is wrong and that the people of earth should stop fighting but he knows that's not gonna happen.
Fatal Flaw: Hubris
Pets: Golem
Pet History: After 2 years of being at Camp Half-Blood, he really wanted to have a pet but he didn't want to have to take care of it. Finally, he decided to make one of his own. He piled together mounds of clay into a vaguely human shape and slipped a roll of parchment with symbols written on it into the golem's mouth and pushed the eye into it's forehead. It rose from the ground in a wounded sort of nature and followed him ever since though he can control it with a special crystal he always carries with him.
Talents: Stealth, Silence
Weapons: Knives, Daggers (Concealable Weapons)
Year-Round or Summer: Year-Round
Color: Yellow

Accepted! Nice work!

Last edited by FearIsGood99 on Tue Jul 05, 2011 12:24 pm; edited 1 time in total

Half-Bloods
Name: Sheryll Kingsley
Age/Birthday: 14 4/9/1997
Gender: Female
God Parent: Apollo
Claimed: Yes
Mortal Family: Tatum Kingsley
Years in Camp: .5
Brief History: An incredibly easy going person, she almost never fights anyone and is very passive. Even though she doesn't fight many people, she can pepper anything with dozens of arrows in a matter of seconds. She was born in Manhatten, New York and traversed the country as a kid. She finally stayed in New York for 2 years and was going to stay for three more years but then the monsters started attacking. she finally found a satyr at her school and made it to camp.

Physical Appearance: She has long, unkempt blond hair that she dyed one red streak in. she always wears her favorite Yankies jersey and tucks her hair in a Yankies cap when she can. she has a bow and arrow set that collapses into a mechanical pencil and a case of pencil lead. She owns a katana that her dad bought for her when she was a kid but she doesn't use it because of sentimental value.

Personality: She seems like a very nice girl and can listen to most people and doesn't fight much but she can be very aggressive at times. She has a fear of confined spaces and hyperventilates when she panics. She accepts that men are better than women in some ways but that doesn't stop her from being very competitive when she plays against boys. She has good temper control but sometimes gets carried away with her feelings and goes on a semi-maniacal rampage.
Fatal Flaw: Holding Grudges
Pets: None
Talents: Speed, Stamina
Weapons: Collapsible Bow and Arrow, Short Swords
Year-Round or Summer: Year-Round
Color: Red

She's good, but her personality needs one more sentence.

I edited it.

That men are better than women thing cracked me up. xD Accepted!

Last edited by FearIsGood on Wed Aug 24, 2011 10:37 pm; edited 1 time in total

Half-Bloods
Name: Brendon Tolar-Payne
Age/Birthday: 14 January 29, 1998
Gender: Male
God Parent: Athena
Claimed: Yes
Mortal Family: Adolfu Tolar-Payne (Deceased)
Years in Camp: 1 year
Brief History: He was born in London and grew up carving wood for the kids in his neighborhood. He made everything from wooden figurines to wooden weapons. Even when he moved to the U.S.A, he still kept carving wood for other kids. His father was killed in an accident with a monster attack as a kid. He found his way to Camp Half Blood with the help of the satyr at his school. When he fought anyone, he would use the wooden weapons that he creates though now he reinforces then by coating them with a layer of high quality celestial bronze.
Physical Appearance: He has bright blonde hair but highly contrasting skin which is as pale as a ghost. His deep grey eyes have the look of someone who could peer into your soul. His hands are blistered from constant time spent working on crafting and forging. He appears very weak with his scrawny arms and twig-like limbs but he has enough strength to use the weapons he makes. He loves to leave his hair hanging down whenever he can.
Personality: He has a very active personality, being very friendly to other people. He is a little violent but he is a good friend. He can trust anyone, no matter what kind of history they have with him. It is one of the good things about him but he can be annoying wit his constant chatterbox voice. He has many friends that he loves to talk to.
Fatal Flaw: Trust: He trusts everyone. He believes that everyone can change which may be his undoing.
Pets: None
Talents: Wood Carving
Weapons: Handmade Daggers, Handmade Swords, Handmade Bow, Wooden Arrows with Wooden Tips, Wooden Assasins Blade, Wooden Punching Gauntlets, Siege Weapons, Wooden Crossbows with Wooden Tips
Year-Round or Summer: Year-Round
Other: His weapons are usually meant to maim or injure, not kill.
Color: Orange

Looks good! Only thing is that you don't really describe his physical or personality traits, you focus on what he wears and what he's good at. Maybe try to describe his hair and eye colour, skin tone, height, and general personality traits? He's a great character though!

I edited it

Thanks for editing! He's accepted!

Half-Bloods
Name: Moses Rodriguez
Age/Birthday: 14 2/2/1997
Gender: Male
God Parent: Ares
Claimed: No
Mortal Family: Josephine Rodriguez (Mother), Brandon Rodriguez (Uncle)
Years in Camp: 1
Brief History: He was never a weak child. When he was 5 years old, his uncle started to teach him how to wrestle and fight like the gladiators did. He even let him use the weapons that he had created and forged in his own garage. At age 13, he was a hulking giant, 6 feet tall, towering over the rest of his friends. He was a wrestling champion and was only beaten once, by a boy who was much younger than him, maybe 7 years old. Only when he reached Camp Half Blood did he suspect that the boy who beat him might have been his father.

Physical Appearance: A brawler. That's what he looks like in a nutshell. A massive wall of meat and a fighter at heart, he has scars from accidents in the wrestling arena. He looks like a heavyweight boxer and can punch like one too. His pitch black eyes show no signs of fear or weakness and his hair grows out in a stringy mess. He wears a "Don't mess with Texas" t-shirt and wears jeans outside of the arena.

Personality: He is a person who wants to destroy you in combat. There is no retreat for him and yet he might destroy you before you get him. He fears nothing, not even his own death and this may be his downfall. He takes fighting very seriously and is opposed to the Apollo Cabin. His other personality is more of a passive form where he doesn’t want to kill you as much.
Fatal Flaw: Strength. He believes that strength can solve anything.
Pets: None
Talents: Fighting, Causing Destruction
Weapons: Fists, Sword, Spear, Shield, Cestus (Spiked Gloves), Battle Axe, Trident and Net, Halberd
Year-Round or Summer: Year-Round
Other: Very difficult to take down in combat unless you are behind him.
Color:Dark Blue

Nice! I'm not entirely sure if being 6 feet tall at the age of 10 is very realistic though, so maybe change that to 13?

I changed it. Thanks for the advice

No problem, thanks for editing! Accepted!

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