Daughters of apollo and Aphrodite

Name: Shakira Isios
Age/Birthday: 16/ April 27
Gender:female
God Parent: Apollo
Claimed: Yes
Mortal Family: Asiabella Isios
Years in Camp: 6
Brief History: Asiabella is a famous latin singer. She is known in America from movies like 'West side story' and other classics. She met Apollo at one of her concert, he arrived on stage and started singing with her. She didn't like it at first because he was taking her spotlight, but soon he charmed her and they fell in love. Asiabella was very young and soon they had a baby before the week was over. Apollo told her who he was because he knew she could handle it. Shakira was raised in a healthy enviroment. Instead of living in a rich house like her mom planned, she was actually singing and dancing by herself. And at five she already was invited to an arts school where her talent was used all the time. She was found by a satyr and sent to camp and claimed by Apollo as soon as she walked in.

Physical Appearance: Like Shakira. same golden hair color. Gorgeous complexion and lovely smile. She is gorgeous and she even looks young. She wears lots of silk dresses tha shows off the side of her waist. Eyes are brown, she is puerto rican(which explains her skin color). She is light weight and her body is a lovely figure. She has a five inch long scar across the side of her neck because of the first time she fought in camp and a big burn mark on her shoulder from when she was young. 5'7 and 99 pounds.


Personality: Shakira is such a sweetheart. She is also smart, a musical genius and calm. She is a sweetheart because of how open she is never letting anyone down or leaving anyone behind. Smart? Because she knows what to do in situations with monsters and can sometimes hang with the children of Athena because of how smart she is. She wrote her own songs at a young age and even helped her mom with songs, making her a musical genius. She is calm because of her ways... she does a lot of slow dancing which some how sooths her and helps her calm. But she can be stubborn at times. When she thinks she's always right. And she can be a little annoying and she talks a lot.

Fatal Flaw: Even though she is calm she has a big fear of dying.
Pets:
Talents: Singing and dancing
Weapons: Gitar that turns in CB Sword
Year-Round or Summer: Year around
Other: Nope :D besides her accent
her quote:

"Music shows who you really are."




Name: Jade Lopez
Age/Birthday: 15/ April 28
Gender: female
God Parent: Aphrodite
Claimed: No
Mortal Family: Juan Lopez
Years in Camp: Non yet
Brief History: Her dad is/ was a model. One of the best around. Aphrodite had to do a photo shoot with him once and they instantly fell in love. They dated for about two years before Juan proposed and of course Aphrodite had to turn him down. He wasn't okay with it... he loved her so much it hurt him. Aphrodite broke his heart and Juan soon left.. around the time Aphrodite was pregnant so Jade was raised by her Abuela. She was raised and taught to be a lady... and not the snobby kind even though she has her days Jade can be a charmer. And like all daughters of Aphrodite, eye candy. She didn't even know her own beauty until a boy approached her about it and told her how half the school wants her. But Jade never let that fill her head up. She's a modest girl. Her life was normal.

Physical Appearance: Her portrayer is Bodine Koehler Pena. She has the same style as her, same soft brown hair and dark brown eyes and she's puerto rican. She loves wearing dresses that are short and high heels. But she also loves wearing blue jeans, high top converse, jean jacket and a neon color shirt. She is like a feather, you can pick her up and throw her. Her body is a perfect hourglass figure. Her skin color is a light brown. she weighs 96 pounds and is 5'1.



Personality: Jade is modest, courageous, and charming. she is modest because of how she doesn't know her beauty, doesn't even brag about it. She's just so much fun to be around. Her smile draws you and makes you want her, and when she speaks its like an angel. She doesn't know she's charming. She does have her times where she is arrogant. And times where she shuts out the world

Fatal Flaw: she isn't open-minded this because she sometimes think she's untouchable and acts like she can't be bruised up or anything.
Pets:
Talents: beauty pageants
Weapons: Lip gloss, turns into a dagger and tiny mirror turns into a shield
Year-Round or Summer: Around
Other:
Her quote:

"All girls are beautiful, and it shouldn't take a man to prove that."

My opinion:

-Your physical appearance needs work. Try to add her eye color, skin color, body type, clothing style, and other things too.
-Gods arn't allowed to see their children before coming to camp, so please change that.

Oka did it, thanks for letting me know.... do yo think theres anything else I could fix? I really want these character sheets to be perfect. Well at least close enough.

Maybe take out the I say this parts??

Edited... those weren't really suppose to go there

Personally I find Shakia's appearance too perfect. It might be okay if she was Aphrodite, but since she is a child of Apollo she is way too good looking.

Is that bad? Should I change her appearance.