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kenzie Buttface
Posts : 1813 Join date : 2011-12-01 Age : 26 Location : ontario
| Subject: Charity's Charries :) Fri Dec 23, 2011 1:28 pm | |
| WELCOME TO CHARITY'S HOME FOR INSANE DEMIGODS. BEWARE. HERE LAY THEE MOST WEIRD, EXCRUCIANTINGLY PSYCHO, DEMIGODS IN THEE UNIVERSE!
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Zan Mega Asshole Duo
Posts : 10035 Join date : 2010-05-04 Age : 27 Location : butthole PA
| Subject: Re: Charity's Charries :) Fri Dec 23, 2011 1:33 pm | |
| You could keep your character's in one topic. It makes them easier to find. :)
And, how could a fourteen year-old have worked at Denny's, McDonald's, and as a tattoo artist? Or did I misread that?
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kenzie Buttface
Posts : 1813 Join date : 2011-12-01 Age : 26 Location : ontario
| Subject: Re: Charity's Charries :) Fri Dec 23, 2011 1:36 pm | |
| Sorry I messed up. I'll fix it. | |
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Zan Mega Asshole Duo
Posts : 10035 Join date : 2010-05-04 Age : 27 Location : butthole PA
| Subject: Re: Charity's Charries :) Fri Dec 23, 2011 4:01 pm | |
| I stilll really think she shouldn't be a tattoo artist because I'm pretty sure you have to go to school for that. :p
But, accepted. | |
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kenzie Buttface
Posts : 1813 Join date : 2011-12-01 Age : 26 Location : ontario
| Subject: Re: Charity's Charries :) Fri Dec 23, 2011 4:20 pm | |
| My mom worked at a tattoo parlor when she was 15. and Thank you. | |
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kenzie Buttface
Posts : 1813 Join date : 2011-12-01 Age : 26 Location : ontario
| Subject: Re: Charity's Charries :) Mon Jan 02, 2012 6:18 pm | |
| Name: Florence Hunter Age/Birthday: August 18th 1997; 13 Gender: Female God Parent: Athena Claimed: no Mortal Family: Bash Hunter; father. Her father worked as a doctor at a college in Ludlow, Maine. He made them lots of money. Bash has cancer. Years in Camp: 0 Brief History: 1-6 years old: Florence was extremely smart for her age and was reading novels fit for a teenager. She was also mature and was skipping grades. When she turned 5 she was put in grade 3. The older kids teased her. 7-9 years old: Florence was skipping grades and skipping grades as her intelligence advanced to high-school level. 10-11 years old: Florence was in grade 9. She was advancing quickly still. Her intelligence was remarkable. She had tests done on her brain. She was almost inhuman(only say inhuman because shes a demigod). 12-13 years old: Florence dropped graduated high-school. At her age, this had been done only twice. She had been the thrid child her age to graduate high-school. Florence's father had told her about a special camp. Her father had told her that she would learn learn new skills and Florence imediately had said yes. Her father drove her to camp(they lived in Ludlow, Maine so it was quite the drive.) and talked to Chiron. Chiron had assured Florence would be safe and her father left. Florence is now at camp. Physical Appearance: Florence has brown hair and grey eyes. She stands at 5"1" and weighs 111 lbs. Florence wears denim shorts most of the time. She is skinny and pale. She eats tons but doesn't exactly gain the weight. Personality: Florence has a very distinct personality. She is Fearless yet embaressed easily. She Moody yet gentle. She is also, caring, smart clumsy and naive. She does not do sports. She is constantly concerned about family and friends. Shes ambitious and determined. She tends to have anger issues. She get angry at anyone who questions her work. Fatal Flaw: Her Fearlessness. She is fearless. She looks down on danger and sees it as no threat. She thinks nothing can hurt her. Boy, is she wrong. Pets: none Talents: Math, Piano, Snowboarding Weapons: Pocket Knife (celestial bronze/ stygian iron) Year-Round or Summer: Year-Rounder Other: Has a Maine accent Her Dyslexia is not as bad as others
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Charity's Charries :) Mon Jan 02, 2012 8:50 pm | |
| She looks good. She needs to be accepted. |
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kenzie Buttface
Posts : 1813 Join date : 2011-12-01 Age : 26 Location : ontario
| Subject: Re: Charity's Charries :) Mon Jan 02, 2012 8:52 pm | |
| I hope she get accepted quick, (: | |
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Crispy Bacon THE YODELMEISTER'S APPRENTICE
Posts : 1616 Join date : 2011-07-22 Age : 27 Location : 1800 got junk
| Subject: Re: Charity's Charries :) Mon Jan 02, 2012 9:32 pm | |
| Great character!
I'm not entirely sure how realistic her history is considering the fact that demigods have ADHD and Dyslexia, but I guess it's alright if you say that her Dyslexia is toned down.
Could you modify her personality so that it's in the form of sentences and possibly include a few more details? What do you mean by inactive? Does she not exercise very much or is she very withdrawn socially? Is it that she's easily embarrassed or is she always embarrassed due to a certain trait of hers? Is she concerned about friends and family or mainly about herself? | |
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kenzie Buttface
Posts : 1813 Join date : 2011-12-01 Age : 26 Location : ontario
| Subject: Re: Charity's Charries :) Mon Jan 02, 2012 9:46 pm | |
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RachieFizzy! Moderator
Posts : 1313 Join date : 2011-05-01 Age : 28 Location : Shiganshina District
| Subject: Re: Charity's Charries :) Tue Jan 03, 2012 12:36 am | |
| One; You need to describe more about her family.
Two; Put more descriptive sentences in to her appearance and personality.
Three; She needs an actual flaw. :p | |
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kenzie Buttface
Posts : 1813 Join date : 2011-12-01 Age : 26 Location : ontario
| Subject: Re: Charity's Charries :) Tue Jan 03, 2012 12:57 am | |
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RachieFizzy! Moderator
Posts : 1313 Join date : 2011-05-01 Age : 28 Location : Shiganshina District
| Subject: Re: Charity's Charries :) Tue Jan 03, 2012 1:07 am | |
| Fearlessness isn't a flaw.. Unless you explain how it is. And I don't see much change with her appearance or personality.
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That'll do. Accepted. | |
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kenzie Buttface
Posts : 1813 Join date : 2011-12-01 Age : 26 Location : ontario
| Subject: Re: Charity's Charries :) Tue Jan 03, 2012 1:29 am | |
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kenzie Buttface
Posts : 1813 Join date : 2011-12-01 Age : 26 Location : ontario
| Subject: Re: Charity's Charries :) Wed Jan 04, 2012 3:42 pm | |
| Ali-Lyn|Ameilia|Brunt ApolloName: Ali-Lyn Ameilia Brunt Age/Birthday: September 8th 1994; 15 Gender: Female God Parent: Apollo Claimed: No Mortal Family: Father: Riley Brunt, Step-mother: Sandi Brunt(Maiden name: Lyissa), Siblings: Twins; Mary & Kyle. Years in Camp: 0 Brief History: 1-6: Ali-Lyn was living in New Jersey with her father. She was in JK and had many friends. She was taking piano lessons and excelling at them for a matter of fact. 7-9: Ali-Lyn had fully learned how to play the piano and now she was learning drums. She was doing well in school and had many friends. 10-11: Ali-Lyn was still doing well in school and taking her drum lessons. Her father remarried when she was 10. Ali-Lyn loved her new mom and twin siblings. Although Mary and Kyle(twins) did not like Ali. They would torment her until she screamed. The twins were only 8. 12-13: Ali-Lyn's dad told her about camp when she was 12 and thats when the monsters started to "bother" them. Ali-Lyn was sent away to camp in August but didn't make it there until October. Physical Appearance: Ali-Lyn has deep brown hair and chocolate brown eyes. Her skin is pale and she has a soccer players body( Not to musculer but musculer). She stands at 5"2" and weighs 101 lbs. She wears Soccer or basketball shorts most of the time. She's fair, to say the least. Personality: Ali-Lyn is calm and down to earth. She does not get into fights often unless someone insults some she cares much about (ie. father). She's very extrovert and will most likely have lots of friends. She wouldn't hurt a fly, unless the fly insulted her family, then she would hurt it. She's not very good at showing her feelings. Not many people can really "read" her. She is very bad at holding back anger. Fatal Flaw: Loyalty Pets: none Talents: Drums and Piano Weapons: Bow and arrow with electric arrows. The arrows hit someone and then electrocute them. (440 volts; enough to through the person backwards.) Year-Round or Summer: Year-rounder. Other: She plays soccer and sings well, but doesn't yet realize it. Colour: #66FF33
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Skye THE YODELMEISTER
Posts : 3654 Join date : 2011-06-25 Age : 28 Location : The Stratosphere
| Subject: Re: Charity's Charries :) Wed Jan 04, 2012 7:12 pm | |
| Can you give her some more flaws personality-wise? Also, can you expand a little on how much the arrows electrocute? Fix that, and I'll accept her. | |
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kenzie Buttface
Posts : 1813 Join date : 2011-12-01 Age : 26 Location : ontario
| Subject: Re: Charity's Charries :) Wed Jan 04, 2012 7:31 pm | |
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Skye THE YODELMEISTER
Posts : 3654 Join date : 2011-06-25 Age : 28 Location : The Stratosphere
| Subject: Re: Charity's Charries :) Wed Jan 04, 2012 7:33 pm | |
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kenzie Buttface
Posts : 1813 Join date : 2011-12-01 Age : 26 Location : ontario
| Subject: Re: Charity's Charries :) Wed Jan 04, 2012 7:36 pm | |
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kenzie Buttface
Posts : 1813 Join date : 2011-12-01 Age : 26 Location : ontario
| Subject: Re: Charity's Charries :) Wed Jan 18, 2012 8:25 pm | |
| Nola|Elizabeth|ParksName: Nola Elizabeth Parks Age/Birthday: 15/ April 9th Gender: Female God Parent: Athena Claimed: Yes Mortal Family: Lawrence Parks[Father]: He is a Lawyer and lives with Nola is Vancouver. He's 40. Amy Brooklyn[Lawrence's Girlfriend]: She only dates Lawrence because he buys her anything she wants, no matter the price. Nola hates her. She's 28. Sarina Parks[Older Sister]: Sarina lives in Boston, shes in college. She comes home whenever she can though just to see Nola, who once bought a plane ticket without her dad knowing and flew to Boston to see Sarina. The sisters care very much about each other. Years in Camp: 0 Brief History: Nola lived in a condo with her dad. Lawrence and her older sister Sarina. They were rich, due to they're father being a world reknown lawyer. Nola was 12 when she won The Nobel Prize in Physics. She broke the world record. Nola excellarated in school, she scored all A+'s and got perfect in all subjects. She discovered the accelarating expansion of the universe through observasions of distant supernovae in 2011. She is currently in college. She graduated high-school when she was 14. Her Nobel Prize got her accepted into Harvard University. She travelled from Vancouver to Harvard. Her sister was also in college at Harvard. Physical Appearance: Nola's hair slides slightly over shoulder length and is bloonde with light pink bangs. Her eyes are cereulean blue and sparkle and shimmer in the sunshine. Her skin is delicate, smooth and pale. She doesn't wear make-up. She stands at 5ft. She weighs 116 lbs. Most of the time she wears outfits like this: http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=42408241Personality: Nola is very "sunshiney". She's always cheerful. She doesn't like it when people fight, other than swordfighting. She has a strong opinion on most things and always believes she's right. Nola hates the colour green with a passion. She also dislikes Aphrodite girls. Nola hates it when people are being immature. She tends to act "smiley" when shes mad, to cover up her anger. Fatal Flaw: She has no respect for others opinions. She is not bossy though. Pets: Jake, a Beauceron dog. He's very loyal and is fully trained. He listens to Nola, most of the time. He is very friendly when Nola tells him to be, but, if tells him to "Adgredere!"(attack in latin) he runs and tears their arm to pieces. Talents: Best Chemist in her class(hence the Nobel Prize), Sketching. Weapons: An owl ring that her mother gave her father to give to her when she left him. It turns into a 3 ft long cylestial bronze sword. Year-Round or Summer: Year-rounder Other: Fave food: Baked Penne Fave band: Foo Fighters Fave Song: Let It Die-Foo Fighters Fave Colour: Aqua Fave Activity: Reading Weirdest Aspect?: She can touch her tongue to the bottom of her chin, also she can do yoga first-class. | |
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kenzie Buttface
Posts : 1813 Join date : 2011-12-01 Age : 26 Location : ontario
| Subject: Re: Charity's Charries :) Thu Jan 19, 2012 5:37 pm | |
| New Character! Nola Parks! :P | |
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kenzie Buttface
Posts : 1813 Join date : 2011-12-01 Age : 26 Location : ontario
| Subject: Re: Charity's Charries :) Thu Jan 19, 2012 9:07 pm | |
| Name: Brady Lancaster Age/Birthday: 15/ August 18th Gender: Male God Parent: Apollo Claimed: Yes Mortal Family: Calle Lancaster: Calle was 27 when she adopted Brady. She is now 40. Calle has grown very close to Brady. She never wanted a husband, but she did seek a child. She is very "upbeat". She enjoys going on trips and also she makes the best food ever. Years in Camp: 1 Brief History: 1-4: Brady was in foster care. He never really liked all the kids. Unlike them, his biological mother was a celebrity. She couldn't handle Brady, and gave him up for adoption. Brady always thought about what she was like. She gave him up when he was 14 months. She barely had time for him then. Then, Calle came. She adopted Brady and he was the happiest child in the world. He smiled so much, his jaw hurt. 5-9: Brady was in school. He was a basic genius. He got all A's and never did one bad thing. He was the best student in his class.He thought this had all come from his mom. It certainly did not. 10-14: Brady started to make some friends. He had never had friends, even when he was in school already. No one had seemed to like Brady until grade 5. He was always that hot kid no one talked to. He had all the stuff the popular guys did (ie. six pack, tan skin, shining personality.) but, the girls and guys still didn't like him. That year (14), Brady got peer pressured into trying drugs(pot). He ran home after and slammed his door, trying to find some water or something to get that taste out of his mouth. Brady never again did drugs. 15: Brady's biological mother visited him. She took him out for lunch and they spoke about their lives. She then told him about his father. He was told by her to go to camp. 2 weeks later he left for camp, leaving a note for his adopted mother. Physical Appearance: Brady has Short, tousled black hair. His eyes a striking deep brown. His skin is always tan. He works out and has a six pack.He stands at 5"8" and weighs 160 lbs. He wears things like this: http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=42492011Personality: Brady is one of those careless, surfer guys. He takes everything for granted also. He most of the time has a girlfriend. He doesn't really get attached to most because they just date him because he's "hot". He only really cares about his mom. She is everything to him. He takes his school work seriously and is very smart. He believes that if you don't try your best than your aiming for your worst. Fatal Flaw: Takes everything for granted. Pets: He has a Border Terrier named Emily. She trained and will obey him, most of the time. She surfs with him. She like the dog on the Air Buddy movies(if you haven't seen them, the dog can do anything it desires. ie. play soccer, basketball.). Brady loves Emily like she is his own child. Talents: Surfing, skateboarding, BMX, he can control the light in a room for about a minute. Weapons: A 2 ft. celestial bronze sword he named Calle; after his mom. Year-Round or Summer: Year rounder Other: | |
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kenzie Buttface
Posts : 1813 Join date : 2011-12-01 Age : 26 Location : ontario
| Subject: Re: Charity's Charries :) Fri Jan 20, 2012 2:23 pm | |
| New Character! Brady Lancaster! | |
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kenzie Buttface
Posts : 1813 Join date : 2011-12-01 Age : 26 Location : ontario
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Angel The Puppet Master
Posts : 4752 Join date : 2010-07-10 Age : 30 Location : in zans belly huhuh
| Subject: Re: Charity's Charries :) Wed Jan 25, 2012 11:00 am | |
| Both characters are Accepted! | |
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