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Skye THE YODELMEISTER
Posts : 3654 Join date : 2011-06-25 Age : 28 Location : The Stratosphere
| Subject: Re: Lord_of_the_Sea's character Fri Jan 06, 2012 8:19 pm | |
| Under the Fatal Flaw section there's already a Pet section. :3 Also, I don't see much change in his personality section. | |
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| Subject: Re: Lord_of_the_Sea's character Fri Jan 06, 2012 8:30 pm | |
| Half-Bloods Name: Eragon Gray Age/Birthday:18 June 9 1993 Gender:Male God Parent:Ares Claimed: Yes Mortal Family: Elisa Gray (Mom) Jon Deka (Step Dad deceased cancer 1999) Jane Deka (Step Sister) Katrina Deka (Step Sister). Years in Camp:9 Brief History: He was born in London England. He flew over to Canada in 2001 with his family. He plays hockey in his spare that isn't filled with video games and Youtube. He ran away from home but he's always welcome back. He was captured by Luke Castellen and was forced to join the titan army. A few years later he ran away for them and made his way to camp half blood. He's dated 4 girls. Physical Appearance: He's 5'10". He has brown hair and Green eyes. He's very muscular. When he's angry his eye's flare like they're on fire(almost like his dad's. Personality:He is ADD. He's rude to guys not girls. He really hates allies dying. He detests the Titans. He gets angry pretty quickly. Fatal Flaw: Hubris Pets: He has a border collie named Victor Talents: Swordplay and Archery. Weapons:Broad sword, Quaterstaff, Bow and 1 Quiver (The Quiver contains 90 plus arrows)xcalibur hockey stick that turns into a cavalry sword. Summer Other: He owns a red MITSUBISHI Lancer (Mom's old car). He also has a driver's lisence.
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| | | Skye THE YODELMEISTER
Posts : 3654 Join date : 2011-06-25 Age : 28 Location : The Stratosphere
| Subject: Re: Lord_of_the_Sea's character Fri Jan 06, 2012 8:50 pm | |
| Again, his personality hasn't changed. Please add more details. | |
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| Subject: Re: Lord_of_the_Sea's character Fri Jan 06, 2012 11:11 pm | |
| Caleb sat motionless right inside the camp border. He stared outside, his pale green eyes locked on the road below. Does he dare to venture out? He had tried before. Caleb had left camp to search for his sister, but not long after leaving he would begin to be swarmed by monsters. 'It's not safe for me to leave...' he thought sadly. However, Caleb still stared at the road. It was obvious he was tempted to go. After all, this was his sister after all. Caleb shook his head with a sigh. 'What am I talking about? The odds of me finding her again are extremely slim..' he told himself. Caleb looked down at the ground, remembering his dear sister. Her long, red hair, round face, brown eyes. She was so familiar to him and yet so far away. Caleb lifted his head with a determined expression. "I'm still never giving up...I'll find you someday, June," he muttered, clenching his fists.
Name: Caleb Reven Goss Gender: Male Age: Sixteen years of ahe Birthday: August 24, 1993 Godly Parent: Chronos, god of Time. (Not Kronus, Titan god. Two different deities) Mortal Parent: Cecillia Goss. Years at Camp: First year History: Caleb was born and raised in New York City to his single, working mother Cecillia. Caleb did his share to help his mother keep everything in order. He went to school and was known as the kid without any money. Caleb and his little sister, June, were a close knit family. They had to be, since they lived pay-check to pay-check. Cecillia raised Caleb until he was eleven. At that time, she came down with a terrible case of breast cancer. Cecillia soon began to feel weak from her sessions of chemotherapy. Soon, she became to sick to care for Caleb. However, Caleb soon began taking care of his mother and his little sister as best he could. The two children spent most of the time they weren’t at the hospital cleaning the house. After Cecillia was unable to support them financially anymore, Caleb was forced to drop out of school. He began working jobs to try and raise money to pay to feed his sister. The two barely got by, but they did. When Caleb was fourteen, Cecillia died. With no suitable caretaker and no immediate family to keep them, the two children were sent into foster care. They were split up and adopted by different families. Caleb escaped, but he vowed he would one day find his sister. Caleb began living on the streets, ducking into homeless shelters when he needed food and a place to sleep. One day, however, he began getting attacked by monsters. First they were small and by sheer luck, Cal was able to stay alive. However, the monsters soon became more and more of a threat. He was found in a homeless shelter by a satyr named Thine. Thine took Caleb to camp and told him who he was. Not long after Caleb’s arrival, he was claimed by Chronos. Caleb still goes out and searches for his sister. However, once the threat of monsters begins breathing down his neck, he returns to camp. Physical Appearance: Caleb stands at about 5’8” in height. He has an average build with broad shoulders, gangly limbs, and a rather thick torso. Caleb isn’t thin, but he isn’t fat either. He has some muscle in his arms, but a six back and built body is simply a dream for him. Caleb has a round, heart shaped face. He has a strong jaw line and slightly larger chin that has grown some stubble on it as he’s aged. Caleb’s nose is slightly large and sit above his thin, pink lips that are often turned up in a grin. Caleb has a rather thick neck, which causes him to wear v-neck shirts most of the time. Caleb’s eyes are set slightly closer to his nose, but aren’t too close together. They are thin and framed in short, blonde lashes that are hardly visible. His irises are a light shade of pale green with hints of brown around the pupil. Above his eyes are his slightly thick, almost non visible, reddish blonde eyebrows. Because of Caleb’s pale skin and light hair, most of his facial hair is almost not visible. Caleb’s hair is a bright, fiery shade of red. It flips about his head wildly, showing that he doesn’t really put much thought into styling it. The tips of his hair gently brush the tops of his ears while his bangs swoop across his forehead in a curled, unruly way. He lets his hair get generally long before he cuts it again, continuing this cycle every few months as his hair reaches past his ears. Caleb tends to wear rather simple clothing. He prefers t-shirts, jeans, jackets and converse over anything. His sense of style isn’t exactly very grand, he just sort of throws together what he has and calls it an outfit. Personality: Caleb can be described as one word. Goofy. He has a strange sense of humor and loves to make people laugh. He enjoys being funny and making jokes when things begin to get awkward. It’s so second nature to him, he doesn’t even know he’s doing it sometimes. Caleb has a very expressive face. You can almost always tell what he’s feeling just by looking at him. He doesn’t always know he’s making strange facial expressions, its jsut how he feels at the moment. Caleb is very brave and self sacrificing. Once he is trusts you as a friend, he is loyal to you forever. Caleb will do almost anything for people. He puts others before himself almost at all times. However, because of this, he often neglects himself. Caleb has a bit of a temper. It’s difficult to reach its breaking point, but once it is reached he goes into a rage of blind fury. He’ll give out hurtful remarks and not realize anything he’s said or done often until the next day. It takes him a while to cool down after his temper flares up, so he often goes out alone and lets out his anger. Caleb is stubborn and a bit hard-headed. Once he has something in his mind it is very difficult to convince him otherwise. Caleb is often confronted with the hurt of losing his beloved little sister and his mother. However, he bottles up these feelings and keeps them in the back of his mind. He lets himself be goofy and funny and simply waits until the emotions of sadness and pain are simply too much for him to bare anymore. At that time, he will go somewhere where he’s alone and let out his emotions in frustration, sadness, fury, and anything else that lets him release his bottled up feelings. Fatal Flaw: Caleb tends to get rather jealous. He jumps to conclusions when he seems something and once he has that conclusion his stubbornness makes it impossible to convince him otherwise. Because Caleb puts others before himself, he neglects caring for himself more often than he should. He’ll forget to eat or forget that he has to finish the same thing he’s helping someone else with. Or, he’ll try and help someone in battle and set himself out to be completely vulnerable. Pets: None. Caleb has thought about getting a dog before, but has never acted upon it. Talents: Because Caleb hasn’t been at camp very long, he has only started to begin dabbling into his powers. His father being the god of time has given Caleb the ability to pause time for a moment. But only for about a second. Doing this drains his energy. He is unable to move just as everyone else is, but he can still think. He can plan out something quickly while the time is paused. However, he hardly ever uses this power, since it drains him so much. Caleb believes that he may be able to travel through time. He believes this because when he dreams, he finds himself placed in different times. Its as if he ventures through the ages when he’s dreaming. However, he has been unable to tap into this potential power at all. Weapons: Caleb has a spear that he uses during battle. Its the weapons he finds the most natural for him to use. However, because he hasn’t had a lot of time at camp to train his skills, he is still rather new at fighting and battling. He has a natural ability with a spear, but he hasn’t really trained with it yet, so he’s still not the best fighter. Other: Caleb is a year-rounder at camp. Character created by Angel © |
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| Subject: Re: Lord_of_the_Sea's character Fri Jan 06, 2012 11:12 pm | |
| Half-Bloods Name: Eragon Gray Age/Birthday:18 June 9 1993 Gender:Male God Parent:Ares Claimed: Yes Mortal Family: Elisa Gray (Mom) Jon Deka (Step Dad deceased cancer 1999) Jane Deka (Step Sister) Katrina Deka (Step Sister). Years in Camp:9 Brief History: He was born in London England. He flew over to Canada in 2001 with his family. He plays hockey in his spare that isn't filled with video games and Youtube. He ran away from home but he's always welcome back. He was captured by Luke Castellen and was forced to join the titan army. A few years later he ran away for them and made his way to camp half blood. He's dated 4 girls. Physical Appearance: He's 5'10". He has brown hair and Green eyes. He's very muscular. When he's angry his eye's flare like they're on fire(almost like his dad's. Personality:He is ADD and ADHD. He's rude to guys not girls. He really hates allies dying. He detests the Titans. He gets angry pretty quickly. Fatal Flaw: Hubris Pets: He has a border collie named Victor Talents: Swordplay and Archery. Weapons:Broad sword, Quaterstaff, Bow and 1 Quiver (The Quiver contains 90 plus arrows)xcalibur hockey stick that turns into a cavalry sword. Summer Other: He owns a red MITSUBISHI Lancer (Mom's old car). He also has a driver's lisence. |
| | | Nico Chatbox Ruler
Posts : 5539 Join date : 2010-12-04 Age : 25 Location : your mom's house
| Subject: Re: Lord_of_the_Sea's character Sat Jan 07, 2012 1:06 pm | |
| STOP POSTING IT MORE THAN ONCE. o.e Just click the edit button and edit the post with what the Mods and Admins are telling you to do! This is getting ridiculous.
Caleb is accepted. (Duh. xD) I guess Eragon is accepted as well, but next time you make a character, include more detail. | |
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| Subject: Re: Lord_of_the_Sea's character Sun Jan 08, 2012 11:44 pm | |
| Half-Bloods Name: Rory Williams Age/Birthday:16 September 14 1995 Gender:Male God Parent: Ares Claimed: Yes Mortal Family: Martha Williams & Matt Darkness (Step dad) Years in Camp: 3 Brief History: About three years ago he ran away from home and found his way to CHB where he found people who accepted him for who he was. Physical Appearance: Personality: At least 4 sentences. Be sure to include details! Fatal Flaw:Hubris Pets:None Talents: Swordplay Weapons:Cavalry Swords, Katanas, Broad Swords, Daggers Year-Round |
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| Subject: Re: Lord_of_the_Sea's character Sun Jan 08, 2012 11:49 pm | |
| Half-Bloods Name: Rory Williams Age/Birthday:17 September 14 1994 Gender:Male God Parent: Ares Claimed: Yes Mortal Family: Martha Williams & Matt Harkness (Step dad) Years in Camp: 3 Brief History: He was born in Ireland but flew over to Canada in 1999. Three years after leaving Ireland he ran away to Los Angoles. About three years a after that he ran away from L.A and found his way to CHB where he met people who accepted him for who he was. As time flew by and the years went on he grew stronger and more powerful. His Training is taught by His father Ares. Physical Appearance: Rory stands 5' 10" like the character Rory Williams from Doctor who. Brown hair, Blue eyes. He wears Black metal combat pants. Punk shirt and ripped jean jacket (no sleeves) and Blue sport shades over his eyes. Personality: He is ADD, ADHD and Dyslexic. He's rude to guys and certain girls. He hates allies dying. He want to destroy the Titans. He gets angry extremely quick. Fatal Flaw:Hubris Pets:None Talents: Swordplay Weapons:Cavalry Swords, Katanas, Broad Swords, Daggers Year-Round
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| | | Skye THE YODELMEISTER
Posts : 3654 Join date : 2011-06-25 Age : 28 Location : The Stratosphere
| Subject: Re: Lord_of_the_Sea's character Mon Jan 09, 2012 4:55 pm | |
| Can you create actual sentences instead of fragments, please? :3 Just saying "5'10"." isn't a real sentence. Saying something like, "Rory is an average size guy. He stands at about 5'10"... yada yada yada." See the difference? Please fix that in his personality section and I can accept him. | |
| | | Skye THE YODELMEISTER
Posts : 3654 Join date : 2011-06-25 Age : 28 Location : The Stratosphere
| Subject: Re: Lord_of_the_Sea's character Mon Jan 09, 2012 5:19 pm | |
| See, blue sport shades and punk shirt don't tell me anything. He can look like blue sport shades and I wouldn't even know. Please make those physical appearance sentences flow better. :3 | |
| | | Skye THE YODELMEISTER
Posts : 3654 Join date : 2011-06-25 Age : 28 Location : The Stratosphere
| Subject: Re: Lord_of_the_Sea's character Mon Jan 09, 2012 6:31 pm | |
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| Subject: Re: Lord_of_the_Sea's character Tue Jan 10, 2012 8:38 pm | |
| * Justus James Flynn * Son of Dionysus- Spoiler:
Name: Justus Fylnn Age/Birthday:16, March 14th Gender: Male, do you think he's a girl? God Parent: Dionysus, God of wine Claimed: Yes, since he was 12 Mortal Family: Melissa Fylnn Years in Camp: 4 Brief History: Justus grew up in Arizona with his mom. His mother loved him dearly and treated him well. Justus went to a public school and everyone seemed to get along with him. He always asked who his dad was, and where he went. His mom eventually became upset with his constant begging, so she told him. Justus was shocked to hear that he was a demigod, he wanted to tell all of his friends. His mother became scared for his safety and sent him to camp at the age of 12. There he was lazy, to say the least. Justus doesn't train much, if at all. He just walks around making new friends. Justus doesn't get drunk, but he will sip wine now and then. Physical Appearance: Justus is about 5ft 10 in. , give or take a few inches. He has bleach blonde hair and deep green eyes. His eyes have purple mixed into them as well. Justus also has a scar above his left eye, no one knows how he got it... not even his mom. He is fairly muscled, even if he doesn't train. Instead he plays basketball a lot. Justus is usually in causal wear, unless a situation demands something else. He also smiles Personality: Justus is a very open person. He is also a party person. When ever there was a dance at his school, Justus would always be there! Justus was really popular at his school, that doesn't mean he is at camp. He likes to make people smile and laugh. Justus has a good sense of humor. He doesn't get drunk like some of his other siblings. Fatal Flaw: Justus isn't very good at fighting... he's very lazy. Justus won't fight unless he really has to. Pets: no pets Talents: baseball & basketball, making people laugh and have a good time. Weapons: Dagger that has a purple-ish tinge to it. Year-Round or Summer: Year- round Other: nothing else
Character created by Moon
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| Subject: Re: Lord_of_the_Sea's character Tue Jan 10, 2012 8:44 pm | |
| - Spoiler:
Half-Bloods Name: Moses Rodriguez Age/Birthday: 14 2/2/1997 Gender: Male God Parent: Ares Claimed: No Mortal Family: Josephine Rodriguez (Mother), Brandon Rodriguez (Uncle) Years in Camp: 1 Brief History: He was never a weak child. When he was 5 years old, his uncle started to teach him how to wrestle and fight like the gladiators did. He even let him use the weapons that he had created and forged in his own garage. At age 13, he was a hulking giant, 6 feet tall, towering over the rest of his friends. He was a wrestling champion and was only beaten once, by a boy who was much younger than him, maybe 7 years old. Only when he reached Camp Half Blood did he suspect that the boy who beat him might have been his father.
Physical Appearance: A brawler. That's what he looks like in a nutshell. A massive wall of meat and a fighter at heart, he has scars from accidents in the wrestling arena. He looks like a heavyweight boxer and can punch like one too. His pitch black eyes show no signs of fear or weakness and his hair grows out in a stringy mess. He wears a "Don't mess with Texas" t-shirt and wears jeans outside of the arena.
Personality: He is a person who wants to destroy you in combat. There is no retreat for him and yet he might destroy you before you get him. He fears nothing, not even his own death and this may be his downfall. He takes fighting very seriously and is opposed to the Apollo Cabin. His other personality is more of a passive form where he doesn’t want to kill you as much. Fatal Flaw: Strength. He believes that strength can solve anything. Pets: None Talents: Fighting, Causing Destruction Weapons: Fists, Sword, Spear, Shield, Cestus (Spiked Gloves), Battle Axe, Trident and Net, Halberd Year-Round or Summer: Year-Round Other: Very difficult to take down in combat unless you are behind him. Color: Blue
Character created by Eternal God of Happiness
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| Subject: Re: Lord_of_the_Sea's character Sat Mar 10, 2012 10:11 pm | |
| - Spoiler:
Half-Bloods Name: Leo David Jordan Teller “DJ” Age/Birthday: He is 19 and was born on July fifteenth 1991. Gender: Male God Parent: Apollo Claimed: Yes Mortal Family: Laura Elizabeth Teller (Mother. Missing) Years in Camp: 2 Brief History: Leo was born in Canada. He has been constantly on the move ever since his mom went missing. On his first day of his trip, Leo grabbed a cup of coffee at the Tim Horton’s. He ordered an extra large coffee 1 cream 2 sugar and met on of his grade school friends who said “’Leo haven’t seen you around lately” ‘ “’Yeah I know . Look I need to tell you something”’ “’what is it bro?”’ “’I’m the son of a Greek god “’ “’what?”’ “’I know I know now I have to get going and you should to”’ As Leo left for the USA, he felt out of breath and feel to the ground but little did he know he was at least five feet away from camp entrance. Two minutes later or so, Leo arrives at Camp Half-Blood. Physical Appearance: He has Steel-Blue eyes and Brown hair. He is 5’6”. He wears Blue metal combat pants, a Punk shirt and a Denim Blue ripped jean jacket (no sleeves) a good luck charm, Sports shades. Personality: Leo is Adhd. He is also Add. he can be OCD at times. He is also autistic. Fatal Flaw: Personal loyalty Pets: A Hawk named Striker Talents: Archery Weapons: Bow and 1 Quiver (The Quiver Contains 90 plus arrows’) Year-Round Other: He can Drive
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Posts : 1813 Join date : 2011-12-01 Age : 26 Location : ontario
| Subject: Re: Lord_of_the_Sea's character Sat Mar 10, 2012 10:44 pm | |
| I don't think demigods are allowed to interact with their god parent before camp... | |
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| Subject: Re: Lord_of_the_Sea's character Sun Mar 11, 2012 1:30 pm | |
| Name: Ethan Wiebe Age/Birthday: Ethan is 14. 10/15/1997. Gender: Ethan is a Male. God Parent: Athena Claimed: Yes. Mortal Family: Eric Wiebe (Dad son of Apollo). Years in Camp:5 Brief History: Ethan has been at CHB for 5 years. Physical Appearance: He wears Blue metal combat pants, a Punk shirt and a Denim Blue ripped jean jacket (no sleeves) a good luck charm, Sports shades. He has Steel-Blue eyes and Brown hair. He is 5’6”. Personality: Fatal Flaw: Hubris Pets: none Talents: Swordplay and Archery Weapons: Twin Katanas (comes from an ipod nano rotate click wheel twice), Broad sword, Quarterstaff, Bow, Cavalry Swords, Daggers Year-Round
ETHAN IS NOT YET COMPLETE! |
| | | Crispy Bacon THE YODELMEISTER'S APPRENTICE
Posts : 1616 Join date : 2011-07-22 Age : 27 Location : 1800 got junk
| Subject: Re: Lord_of_the_Sea's character Sun Mar 11, 2012 9:11 pm | |
| In Leo's history, it says "little did he know he was at least five feet away." What was he five feet away from?
He needs one more sentence for his appearance and a few more details for her personality. Try to explain more of his personality traits. | |
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