Marissa, daughter of Aphrodite

Accepted
Half-Bloods
Name: Marissa Rose
Birthday: The 28th of December 1995
Gender: Female
God Parent: Aphrodite
Claimed: No
Mortal Family: Father: Royce Rose Step-Mother: Karen Rose Half-Sister Robin Rose
Years in Camp: 0 (Just Starting)
Brief History:
Royce Rose seemed to find the love of his life, a beautiful woman who seemed interested in him. Aphrodite and Royce started dating, for him it was like a dream, she was the one. Before long, they had a daughter together, Marissa. Aphrodite left and Royce had a hole in his heart. He cared for Marissa and wanted the best for her, so he married Karen. Karen was nice enough, a good mother figure but Royce did not love her. Soon enough they had a daughter, Robin. It seemed like a happy family but Royce longed to see Aphrodite again. He could never repair from the heartbreak- of Aphrodite.
~Marissa was failing her classes at school, she didn't want to tell anyone but she couldn't read. She didn't understand how. For her writing was just a jumble of random letters and symbols- it gave her a headache. One day she was late - which was unusual because she was always early to school. She saw a little bird lying on the floor- she instantly freaked out, was is dead, injured? She picked it up and it moved slightly. She breathed a sigh of relief, it was alive. But as she examined it, she saw that it had a claw mark on its wing. "Marissa," the bird said her name, "get on my back! They are after you!" Marissa was confused, "What, how, huh? You are a bird and you are talking am I crazy? How do I get on your back? Who is after me?" The bird whistled in reply and turned into a majestic horse with wings, "I have no time to explain just get on!" She jumped on the horses back and they flew into the air. Marissa looked down, there was this strange beast looking up at her it was like a bull- but it stood up right. Marissa was in shock. What just happened? (Will right more when I join)
Physical Appearance: Marissa has long wavy blond hair and light blue eyes. She has a kind face, almost always smiling. She has a bit of a curvy figure but it suits her. She is not perfect, but pretty.
Personality: She is a kind girl, but very shy. She does not like getting involved in arguments. She gets clumsy when she is nervous, so she is not very good at battle. She is very careful about what she says and does, she hates it when people dislike her. Being disliked is her greatest fear. She loves seeing other people happy. She likes to please everyone; is a pushover.
Fatal Flaw: She is too trusting in people, she always believes what people tell her.
Pets: A Pegasus named Princess who appears in the form of a dove.
Talents: A good singer but only with Pop and slow songs, a good ballet dancer and can speak French. Has not yet learned any Aphrodite-powers.
Weapons: A make up bag with contents like a lipstick that opens into a sword, ect.
Year-Round or Summer: Year-Round
Other: Has some family problems (with her step-mum/sister)

Hey, Nice character:]
And Welcome to camp!
Just going to point out that she needs more of a back story. Like how she came into camp? How did she get a pegasus that's a pet? Yeah, things like that.And she can't already charm speak. It takes years of practice for Aphrodite kids to do that. And being born with that is really, really, really rare. The fatal flaw is supposed to be more fatal. Like, super loyal, arrogance or something along those lines. Just a question, is her appearance, the perfect, super model body?

And, try to keep all your characters in one thread. Like 'Marissa's Characters'. Wait for an Admin to approve her and then you'll be able to rp!

Is that better?
Oh, and this is going to be my only character.
The avatar and signature is just what I based my character off of, found it on a dress up site. She sort of looks like that just less skinny.

Welcome to camp! I'm also new here. I'm awaiting approval from the admins too...Its sooo long... Nice character though! Death gave you all the advice already... :( well good luck! :)

Thanks and I hope your character gets approved soon, maybe we can rp together? :)

LOL Blaze. I know they might not be so active in approving characters at the moment, but don't lose faith guys! You'll be able to rp in no timeXD

As for Marissa, that seems to lighten things up a bit. The history part was a bit confusing now. You could add the last history, the one with her dad, and then this one. Make them 'fit', like what happened after they went to camp and stuff, and how was her family in the real world. Other than that. Wonderful!XD

Oh yeah,we could rp together,like maybe we get to camp together?

Ok I added the other part of the history back in :)

--I used to have a Marissa, spelled Marisa for me, but I killed her/retired her. She was a Hades girl.

Nice character, though! Good detail!--

Woo! Thank you!

Hey Marissa,your character's approved right? We can role play together now. My character's approved too.

Blaze, go in the courtyard.

Yeah,i'll meet you and Marissa there.