Daughter of Aphrodite's Characters (Needs Approval)

Half-Blood

Name: Chloe Peterson
Age/Birthday: July 27, 1997
Gender: Female
God Parent: Aphrodite
Claimed: Yes
Mortal Family:
Nick Peterson-Dad
Kelley Peterson-Stepmom
Charlotte (Cherry) Peterson-Half-Sister
Years in Camp: 3
Brief History: Chloe ran away from home when she was 10. She thought she was a burden for her father, and wasn't getting enough attention, because of her new sister. Before she ran away she was always getting kicked out of some school or another. Usually fancy, elite boarding schools. During the time she ran away, she stayed in various parks. She was always on the run. Finally, a satyr found her and dragged her to CHB. She didn't encounter any monsters, because she isn't a very powerful force. Her fathers a very successful surgeon, so he can provide all the designer things Chloe likes. Usually, she goes home for about a week a year, to catch up with her family, and shop for a new wardrobe. She stays year-round, even though she's a kid of Aphrodite, and isn't in too much danger.
Physical Appearance: Chloe has waist-length wavy blond hair and eyes the color of the ocean. She is about 5 foot 4 inches, and is thin. She is extremely talented at makeup, so she wears a lot of it. Chloe usually wears her hair in a ballerina bun, on the top of her head.
Personality: Chloe is kind, but very self-centered. She rarely focuses on anyone else. She says hi to people, but never asks how they are doing. She always finds a way to lead the conversation back to her. Chloe does this because before-when she was living with her dad-she didn't get enough attention. Now, she wants all the attention she can get.
Fatal Flaw: Narcissistic
Pets: None
Talents:
Putting on makeup
Pegasus riding
Volleyball
Weapons: None
Year-Round or Summer: Year-round

Nice character, but you need another sentence for the personality. Welcome to the site, by the way! ^^

Oops. :O
Sorry about that, I fixed it. :)

Welcome to CHB! Like Tethys said, another sentence or two on her personality would help. Try describing how she acts towards certain people and how/why she's self-centered. Also, for brief history, maybe add a little more on her life before she ran away and her adventure for when she ran away.

Thanks so much for all the advice. :)
And for welcoming me.

Much better 8D

Thanks for all the help. :)

I hate to ask to revise one more thing, just one more sentence on Physical appearance and ya done!

Oh no that's ok! Thanks for the input! Hope I'm done now, LOL.

Yep it's good ^^

Acceptatated

Thanks! :)

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