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sparkfeather43




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Join date : 2010-11-23

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PostSubject: sparkfeather43's Characters (waiting to be approved)   sparkfeather43's Characters (waiting to be approved) I_icon_minitimeTue Nov 23, 2010 8:30 pm
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Name: Celia Diamond
Age/birthday: February 14th, 1994
Gender: Girl
Years in camp: 0 (new member)
God parent: Aphrodite
Mortal parent: Marcus Diamond
Physical appearance: Auburn hair with dark blond and caramel highlights, bright blue eyes, tan skin, tall, thin, and perfect facial features
Personality: Graceful and elegant, but with a few cute quirks. Loves to dip her french fries in ranch dressing, and sometimes when she's not graceful she can be incredibly clumsy, she loves to dress up even if there isn't anywhere to go.
Pets: A majestic blue-black parrot named Onyx
Weapons: A celestial bronze knife with a ruby rose design on the side, extends into a sword
Talents: Can charm people with her good looks and melodic voice
Other: She went to boarding school in Connecticut, and eventually got kicked out because people thought she was the one who set the gym on fire, though it was really just some giants.


Last edited by sparkfeather43 on Wed Nov 24, 2010 2:43 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Is it too mary sue now?)
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Socialized Fireflies




Posts : 114
Join date : 2010-11-24
Age : 24
Location : In my house

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PostSubject: Re: sparkfeather43's Characters (waiting to be approved)   sparkfeather43's Characters (waiting to be approved) I_icon_minitimeWed Nov 24, 2010 5:50 am
Its kinda Mary-Sue, you need to add her flaws. Everything is fine in all, but she seems too perfect, even if she is a daughter of Aphrodite. An suggestion is that maybe you could put in some info about her life, where she lives, what had happen at her school, and what not.
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sparkfeather43




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Join date : 2010-11-23

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PostSubject: Re: sparkfeather43's Characters (waiting to be approved)   sparkfeather43's Characters (waiting to be approved) I_icon_minitimeWed Nov 24, 2010 2:45 pm
Ok... I had another account here but I forgot my password, so is it ok that I created a new one? If not I'll just try to figure it out. My old username was Tarus...
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Kendall


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Join date : 2010-03-01
Age : 24
Location : Up your butt and around the corner

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PostSubject: Re: sparkfeather43's Characters (waiting to be approved)   sparkfeather43's Characters (waiting to be approved) I_icon_minitimeWed Nov 24, 2010 5:53 pm
Accepted
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