| coolawesomeme's Characters: APPROVED & UNAPPROVED | |
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Who should be my new Female Character's God Parent? | Aphrodite | | 38% | [ 5 ] | Khione | | 31% | [ 4 ] | Dionysus | | 31% | [ 4 ] |
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coolawesomeme
Posts : 227 Join date : 2011-07-18 Age : 25 Location : Right behind you...
| Subject: coolawesomeme's Characters: APPROVED & UNAPPROVED Thu Jul 21, 2011 5:45 pm | |
| Hi Guest, I am coolawesomeme and here are my characters;
Approved Characters:
Half-Bloods
Name: Jake Nightflare Age/Birthday: 15 - 7/5/1997 Gender: Male God Parent: Apollo Claimed: Yes Mortal Family: Selena Dawson (Mother) Years in Camp: 5 Brief History: Jake was dropped off at Camp Half-Blood at age 7 by his mom. His mom had gotten a message from Apollo himself to send him to Camp Half-Blood and let him be trained. He has defeated a cyclops when it was invited in by a rouge camper. He has since then become a great archer. Physical Appearance: Jake is a tall, tan teen. He is tan because of his ability to shoot sun-beams out of his hands. He has cocoa brown eyes and a sharp nose. He can usually be seen wearing the color red. Personality: Jake is a great guy, who loves to have fun and also is very friendly. He likes to play with his pet Blu. To most of the campers, he is a nice, fun loving guy. One thing he does not like, is getting a haircut. Fatal Flaw: Claustrophobic Pets: Blu (Mini Sun Serpent) Talents: The ability to be healed when in direct sunlight Weapons: Bow & Arrow Year-Round or Summer: Year Round Other:
Name: Bob Sapphiresword Age/Birthday: 17 - 8/3/1994 Gender: Male God Parent: Athena Claimed: Yes Mortal Family: James Morris (Father) Years in Camp: 2 Brief History: Bob arrived at the camp at age 15. He came there when his father worried about him because he was being hunted by monsters. Many new campers consider to to be one of the best at making plans. He is now a skilled swordsman and a valued Athena cabin member. Physical Appearance: Bob is an average height, handsome guy. He has a wide jaw and broad shoulders. He has emerald green eyes with a wide nose. He can usually be seen wearing the color green. Personality: Bob is a nice, friendly and smart guy. He is always friendly to new campers. He is nice to pretty much everyone. He has a few fears of spiders, snakes, alligators and the worst, CLOWNS! Fatal Flaw: Procrastinator, Fears Pets: NONE Talents: Makes really good plans Weapons: Sword Year-Round or Summer: Summer Other:
Name: Selena Magykfyre Age/Birthday: 14 - 2/9/1997 Gender: Female God Parent: Hecate Claimed: Yes Mortal Family: John Rider (Father) Years in Camp: 1 Brief History: Selena ran away from home when monsters started bothering her. She also ran away because because of her, monsters were also following her mom. Then Selena continued traveling until she met a satyr. Then, the satyr escorted her to Camp Half-Blood. Physical Appearance: Selena is an average height, tan teen. She has green eyes and long hair. She is a slim and curly haired teen. She usually wears the color purple. Personality: Selena is a great girl, who likes to have fun. She likes to hang out in/ near water. To the rest of the campers, she is a nice girl. She loves dogs and cats. Fatal Flaw: Pride, Ambition Pets: NONE Talents: Magic Powers from her Mom Weapons: Twin Daggers Year-Round or Summer: Year Round Other:
Unapproved Characters:
Half-Bloods
RESERVED SPOT FOR CHARACTER 4 Thanks, coolawesomeme
Last edited by coolawesomeme on Fri Sep 02, 2011 3:13 pm; edited 16 times in total | |
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Nico Chatbox Ruler
Posts : 5539 Join date : 2010-12-04 Age : 25 Location : your mom's house
| Subject: Re: coolawesomeme's Characters: APPROVED & UNAPPROVED Thu Jul 21, 2011 5:52 pm | |
| Jake: He doesn't appear to have any flaws. Both personality wise, and talent wise. I don't think he should be able to shoot sunbeams out of his hands, but maybe he can use the sun's rays to heal wounds? That sounds like a cool power I haven't heard of yet.
Bob: Could you give him some personality flaws? Maybe he's too laid back most of the time, or he has fears, or he can be annoyingly nice. It's up to you, really. | |
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coolawesomeme
Posts : 227 Join date : 2011-07-18 Age : 25 Location : Right behind you...
| Subject: Re: coolawesomeme's Characters: APPROVED & UNAPPROVED Thu Jul 21, 2011 5:53 pm | |
| - Nico wrote:
- Jake:
He doesn't appear to have any flaws. Both personality wise, and talent wise. I don't think he should be able to shoot sunbeams out of his hands, but maybe he can use the sun's rays to heal wounds? That sounds like a cool power I haven't heard of yet.
Bob: Could you give him some personality flaws? Maybe he's too laid back most of the time, or he has fears, or he can be annoyingly nice. It's up to you, really. Alright, I'll change it. Thanks for the feedback! EDIT: Changed it. I'll take any other feedback. | |
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Nico Chatbox Ruler
Posts : 5539 Join date : 2010-12-04 Age : 25 Location : your mom's house
| Subject: Re: coolawesomeme's Characters: APPROVED & UNAPPROVED Thu Jul 21, 2011 6:07 pm | |
| Bob is accepted.
As for Jake, what I meant was, whenever he's in the sun, he gets a little stronger, and his minor wounds are healed. | |
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coolawesomeme
Posts : 227 Join date : 2011-07-18 Age : 25 Location : Right behind you...
| Subject: Re: coolawesomeme's Characters: APPROVED & UNAPPROVED Thu Jul 21, 2011 6:08 pm | |
| - Nico wrote:
- Bob is accepted.
As for Jake, what I meant was, whenever he's in the sun, he gets a little stronger, and his minor wounds are healed. Oh, ok. UPDATED | |
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Nico Chatbox Ruler
Posts : 5539 Join date : 2010-12-04 Age : 25 Location : your mom's house
| Subject: Re: coolawesomeme's Characters: APPROVED & UNAPPROVED Thu Jul 21, 2011 6:32 pm | |
| Accepted! Thanks for editing! Welcome to CHB! | |
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coolawesomeme
Posts : 227 Join date : 2011-07-18 Age : 25 Location : Right behind you...
| Subject: Re: coolawesomeme's Characters: APPROVED & UNAPPROVED Thu Jul 21, 2011 6:34 pm | |
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Nico Chatbox Ruler
Posts : 5539 Join date : 2010-12-04 Age : 25 Location : your mom's house
| Subject: Re: coolawesomeme's Characters: APPROVED & UNAPPROVED Sat Jul 23, 2011 12:38 am | |
| Jake was accepted in that acceptance. | |
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coolawesomeme
Posts : 227 Join date : 2011-07-18 Age : 25 Location : Right behind you...
| Subject: Re: coolawesomeme's Characters: APPROVED & UNAPPROVED Tue Jul 26, 2011 3:39 pm | |
| New Character: Selena Magykfyre | |
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Kendall Experienced Poster
Posts : 2603 Join date : 2010-03-01 Age : 24 Location : Up your butt and around the corner
| Subject: Re: coolawesomeme's Characters: APPROVED & UNAPPROVED Tue Jul 26, 2011 3:51 pm | |
| You could use a few more flaws.
Other than that, accepted. | |
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coolawesomeme
Posts : 227 Join date : 2011-07-18 Age : 25 Location : Right behind you...
| Subject: Re: coolawesomeme's Characters: APPROVED & UNAPPROVED Tue Jul 26, 2011 3:52 pm | |
| - Koala wrote:
- You could use a few more flaws.
Other than that, accepted. Thanks, I'll add a few. | |
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Zan Mega Asshole Duo
Posts : 10035 Join date : 2010-05-04 Age : 27 Location : butthole PA
| Subject: Re: coolawesomeme's Characters: APPROVED & UNAPPROVED Tue Jul 26, 2011 4:01 pm | |
| Uhm, I looked through your statistics and out of 183 posts you have roughly 15 posts that are RPing. The rest of your posts are in the games part of our forum, so you won't be getting a son of Poseidon anytime soon.
Just saying.
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coolawesomeme
Posts : 227 Join date : 2011-07-18 Age : 25 Location : Right behind you...
| Subject: Re: coolawesomeme's Characters: APPROVED & UNAPPROVED Tue Jul 26, 2011 4:06 pm | |
| - Princess Emzan wrote:
- Uhm, I looked through your statistics and out of 183 posts you have roughly 15 posts that are RPing. The rest of your posts are in the games part of our forum, so you won't be getting a son of Poseidon anytime soon.
Just saying.
Yes, I know. That's why I listed him as Planned. | |
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Nico Chatbox Ruler
Posts : 5539 Join date : 2010-12-04 Age : 25 Location : your mom's house
| Subject: Re: coolawesomeme's Characters: APPROVED & UNAPPROVED Tue Jul 26, 2011 7:59 pm | |
| Selena is accepted, I guess. Just include more detail on your next character. | |
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coolawesomeme
Posts : 227 Join date : 2011-07-18 Age : 25 Location : Right behind you...
| Subject: Re: coolawesomeme's Characters: APPROVED & UNAPPROVED Sun Jul 31, 2011 11:29 pm | |
| I deleted Bob because I wanted to change his age and then listed him as Unapproved. Except for that he is the same. | |
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Crispy Bacon THE YODELMEISTER'S APPRENTICE
Posts : 1616 Join date : 2011-07-22 Age : 27 Location : 1800 got junk
| Subject: Re: coolawesomeme's Characters: APPROVED & UNAPPROVED Sun Jul 31, 2011 11:35 pm | |
| Looks good! He's just missing a birthday and a few more flaws would be great! | |
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coolawesomeme
Posts : 227 Join date : 2011-07-18 Age : 25 Location : Right behind you...
| Subject: Re: coolawesomeme's Characters: APPROVED & UNAPPROVED Sun Jul 31, 2011 11:55 pm | |
| Updated. I can't think of anymore flaws except for the one I added. | |
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Crispy Bacon THE YODELMEISTER'S APPRENTICE
Posts : 1616 Join date : 2011-07-22 Age : 27 Location : 1800 got junk
| Subject: Re: coolawesomeme's Characters: APPROVED & UNAPPROVED Mon Aug 01, 2011 12:01 am | |
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