Howza bout you take a look at my story?

Subject: Howza bout you take a look at my story? Wed Oct 27, 2010 9:12 pm

Well, Quizilla is being crappy and won't let me publish stories, so I was just passing time and wondering if you guys could take a look at my story. Whatever "She" (Main charrie) says is in lightblue but any other character is in lightgreen. (The main charrie has no name yet, I haven't decided on one...)

Hey, here I am, just a normal teenage girl going to a normal high school. I had friends, I had crushes, yeah I guess life was perfect back then. But when the clock stroke midnight on September 19, everything changed.

Chapter One

It was hard to resist, the sweet smell just tempted me too much. I couldn't control myself, I just had to do it. But she was my friend, I couldn't just suck her blood. I would lose her forever then... Unless I changed her. That would be a convenient way to get what I wanted. Hey, she read all that "Twilight" crap and stuff, she wanted to be a vampire more or less. I couldn't do it during school, I don't know what my excuse would be if they caught me biting somebody's neck. After I found out I was a vampire, people started acting weird and awkward around me. And for myself, I think I changed a whole lot, too. Instead of leaving my long blonde hair just the natural color it is, I dyed it black, leaving blonde streaks where my cheerful blonde hair was. I got a nose piercing and a cartilage piercing. I wore strange clothing and I did my hair in odd ways.

I guess you could call me a freak.

I don't know what I would've done if I hadn't killed her. I wasn't capable of "changing" people. Once I started to taste the blood, it was like I couldn't control my senses. Not that I didn't like the taste of it, I wanted to stop. I wanted to be able to save her life, but all that was left of her was her pale dead body on the cold, hard wood floors of the Gymnasium.

Being a vampire was cool, too. You could run faster than the other kids. When it was time for PACE, I stayed in the longest. I didn't have to breathe because I'm already dead. I could see long distances and I had amazing hunting skills. It was hard to think that being dead wasn't awesome.

"Ms Luminn, what's the answer for question 8?"

"1,532 remainder 81." I answered, smirking and leaning back in my chair.

"Correct" Mr Hoppir nodded.

Just as the students gathered up their textbooks and stood up, the bell rang. Thank god school was over. Time flew when you were dead.

A boy with side swept jet black hair approached me. Probably asking me out on a date or something like that. I never went out on dates without killing somebody. I didn't like human food very much, dull tasting. Hospital blood wasn't very appetizing either. It was stale and gross, always coming from somebody with diseased blood.

"I know what you are."

Subject: Re: Howza bout you take a look at my story? Fri Oct 29, 2010 7:38 pm

I <3 it!!!

Subject: Re: Howza bout you take a look at my story? Fri Oct 29, 2010 8:25 pm

Subject: Re: Howza bout you take a look at my story? Fri Oct 29, 2010 9:15 pm

*ish trying to get this damn cup off her face* luv it!!

Subject: Re: Howza bout you take a look at my story? Mon Nov 01, 2010 9:15 pm

Its great Kendall!

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