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kenzie Buttface
Posts : 1813 Join date : 2011-12-01 Age : 25 Location : ontario
| Subject: Re: Score!{Kyle} Sat Mar 03, 2012 9:26 pm | |
| -2 hours later- Charity shook Timmy awake. She hoped he was still concious. The Apollo campers had fallen asleep. She didn't want to wake them. They had a hard job. Charity took Timmy's health into consideration right then. He could die. She had been giving him a tiny little cube of Ambrosia every 4 hours. Still nothing. Charity walked quietly over to the boy who had been helping Timmy earlier. "Dude? Wake up..." | |
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Justin
Posts : 1206 Join date : 2011-09-30 Age : 24 Location : in your closet
| Subject: Re: Score!{Kyle} Sun Mar 04, 2012 9:21 am | |
| I dreamt of nothing.. just watching scenes of my life pass by as I felt my body relax a little. the next scene was me watching my self. I walked around watching everyone and every thing. I was watching myself when I tasted sugar cookies and the next thing I knew. I was staring up at the cieling from my body. | |
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kenzie Buttface
Posts : 1813 Join date : 2011-12-01 Age : 25 Location : ontario
| Subject: Re: Score!{Kyle} Sun Mar 04, 2012 12:45 pm | |
| The Apollo kid, shoved another small piece of Ambrosia in Timmy's mouth before checking his breathing. "He might go into a coma. I'm not very sure but, its a possibility." The boy said. Charity was terrified. A coma? He could die! | |
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Justin
Posts : 1206 Join date : 2011-09-30 Age : 24 Location : in your closet
| Subject: Re: Score!{Kyle} Sun Mar 04, 2012 1:25 pm | |
| I turned my head torawds them, hearing everything he said. "whats a coma?" I asked softly looking confused while being very soar. "am I going to die?" I asked sadly but bravely. | |
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kenzie Buttface
Posts : 1813 Join date : 2011-12-01 Age : 25 Location : ontario
| Subject: Re: Score!{Kyle} Sun Mar 11, 2012 9:53 pm | |
| The Apollo kid, Elliot was his name. He walked over to Timmy's bedside and layed a hand on his forehead. "He has a high fever." He then knelt down and opened the drawer next to the bed. He pulled out an IV bag and a needle. "Timmy, this is going to sting a little okay?" Elliot stuck the plastic tube into the hole in the IV bag and connected it to the needle. Charity gave an encouraging smile to Timmy before Elliot stuck the needle in. The medicine poured through the plastic tube and into Timmy's veins. Charity motioned for Elliot to meet her in the hall after she talked to Timmy. | |
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Justin
Posts : 1206 Join date : 2011-09-30 Age : 24 Location : in your closet
| Subject: Re: Score!{Kyle} Sun Mar 11, 2012 10:14 pm | |
| I flinched a little but ignored the pain, trying to stay strong. "you dident awnser me, whats a coma and am I going to die?" I asked firmly, sadly and scared. I looked up at her confused and could only look at her. | |
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kenzie Buttface
Posts : 1813 Join date : 2011-12-01 Age : 25 Location : ontario
| Subject: Re: Score!{Kyle} Mon Mar 12, 2012 1:56 am | |
| Charity took a seat on his bed. "Timmy a coma is when you fall into a wake less sleep. Timmy, it's a possibility that you could die if you went into a coma. Most of the time, people die after three months. Let's just hope you don't go into a coma." She gave a sympathetic looked before rubbing his shoulder and walking out of the room. She needed to speak with Elliot. | |
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Justin
Posts : 1206 Join date : 2011-09-30 Age : 24 Location : in your closet
| Subject: Re: Score!{Kyle} Mon Mar 12, 2012 8:39 am | |
| I sighed an stared at the wall thinking how much a coma dosent suck that much. I stayed staring at the wal for a while then I fell aslrrp from to much stress. | |
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kenzie Buttface
Posts : 1813 Join date : 2011-12-01 Age : 25 Location : ontario
| Subject: Re: Score!{Kyle} Mon Mar 12, 2012 10:10 am | |
| OOC: Remember to write 4 sentences Kyle
BIC:
Charity walked out of the room as Timmy fell in and out of sleep. "Elliot. What exactly are supposed to do? He can die!" Charity whispered. Elliot sat quietly in one of the lounge chairs. "Well, what do you expect me to do?" Elliot unscrewed the lid of his vitamin water and took a swig. Charity gave him her death and now he started talking. "Well, first we need to get Chiron in here. I think this is a pretty big problem. He's only 4. His heart and lungs are very weak." | |
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Justin
Posts : 1206 Join date : 2011-09-30 Age : 24 Location : in your closet
| Subject: Re: Score!{Kyle} Mon Mar 12, 2012 10:16 am | |
| ((sorry I thought it was))
I wple up and looked around for Charity, "I have to go to the bathroom" I said loud enough for her to hear but no loud enough to make a scene. I could feel my bladder expanding a little from alot of urine in it. | |
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kenzie Buttface
Posts : 1813 Join date : 2011-12-01 Age : 25 Location : ontario
| Subject: Re: Score!{Kyle} Mon Mar 12, 2012 11:00 am | |
| Charity walked over to Timmy. She picked him up and carried him to a bathroom for the workers in the corner of the infirmary. "K, here. Go to the bathroom." She waited outside the door. She couldn't help thinking about what it would be like for this little boy to go into a coma. What if he died? She snapped out of her daze when she saw the bathroom door open. | |
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Justin
Posts : 1206 Join date : 2011-09-30 Age : 24 Location : in your closet
| Subject: Re: Score!{Kyle} Mon Mar 12, 2012 11:09 am | |
| I walked out while holding on to the wall so I wouldent fall over, "I threw up once in there." I said rubbing my head then stomache. "can you carry me back?" I asked reaching an arm up. | |
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kenzie Buttface
Posts : 1813 Join date : 2011-12-01 Age : 25 Location : ontario
| Subject: Re: Score!{Kyle} Mon Mar 12, 2012 1:55 pm | |
| Charity nodded and picked him up. He felt lighter than when she had carried him to the infirmary. She walked quietly back to his room and layed him down on the bed. Elliot was working on something in the far corner. Charity walked over to Elliot and layed a hand on his shoulder. "What are we going to do when he goes into a coma? Huh?" | |
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Justin
Posts : 1206 Join date : 2011-09-30 Age : 24 Location : in your closet
| Subject: Re: Score!{Kyle} Mon Mar 12, 2012 2:07 pm | |
| I felt as though I was quickly getting weaker and weaker. I turned over a vomited into the trash can as more blackness consumed me. I could feel my body weakining alot. I couldent feel anything. "is this a coma?" I asked myself. | |
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kenzie Buttface
Posts : 1813 Join date : 2011-12-01 Age : 25 Location : ontario
| Subject: Re: Score!{Kyle} Mon Mar 12, 2012 3:46 pm | |
| Elliot turned around, looking at Timmy. Timmys eyes looked weird and unresponsive. Elliot rushed to his bedside. "Charity go get Chiron! Now!" Charity ran out of the room. Was he going into a coma? Elliot knew it was coming. Charity wouldn't be back for at least 10 minutes. "Stay with me Timmy. Don't close your eyes!" | |
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Justin
Posts : 1206 Join date : 2011-09-30 Age : 24 Location : in your closet
| Subject: Re: Score!{Kyle} Mon Mar 12, 2012 7:38 pm | |
| "im so tired." I said to no one in general. "im going to sleep." I said about to close my eyes. "its getting darker and darker." I said finally closing my eyes as my body went limpish and I was in a dream like area. | |
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kenzie Buttface
Posts : 1813 Join date : 2011-12-01 Age : 25 Location : ontario
| Subject: Re: Score!{Kyle} Mon Mar 12, 2012 8:45 pm | |
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Justin
Posts : 1206 Join date : 2011-09-30 Age : 24 Location : in your closet
| Subject: Re: Score!{Kyle} Mon Mar 12, 2012 8:49 pm | |
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kenzie Buttface
Posts : 1813 Join date : 2011-12-01 Age : 25 Location : ontario
| Subject: Re: Score!{Kyle} Mon Mar 12, 2012 11:22 pm | |
| Elliot tried to shake Timmy awake. Thats when Charity rushed in. She was panting and sweating. "Did you find Chiron?" He ran over to her. She glared at him. "Yes, I found Chiron. Hes right beside me." She said sarcasticly. Charity spotted Timmy behind Elliot. She started to heaving and she had to take a seat. "Is he alright?" She asked looking up with puppy dog eyes are Elliot. Elliot looked down at his feet. | |
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Justin
Posts : 1206 Join date : 2011-09-30 Age : 24 Location : in your closet
| Subject: Re: Score!{Kyle} Mon Mar 12, 2012 11:29 pm | |
| all I could do was watch the inmages in my head like many mini dreams. "wait if I cant feel anything what about my bladder?" I asked myself. if I could feel it I was pretty sure my cheeks would have been pink. | |
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kenzie Buttface
Posts : 1813 Join date : 2011-12-01 Age : 25 Location : ontario
| Subject: Re: Score!{Kyle} Tue Mar 13, 2012 12:05 am | |
| Charity started to cry. "He could die." She kept on mumbling and shaking her head. She couldn't stop the tears. Elliot was sitting next to her with his arms around her, rubbing her shoulder. She hung her head in her hands. Elliot looked at her, "He's not going to die. Not on my watch." | |
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Justin
Posts : 1206 Join date : 2011-09-30 Age : 24 Location : in your closet
| Subject: Re: Score!{Kyle} Tue Mar 13, 2012 12:11 am | |
| It felt like only a couple seconds sience i ebterd the coma but I knew it was a vouple hours. I fought for control of my brain. I could feel it not wanting to work. I kept trying and trying the suddenly my eyes opend and I was staring up at a cieling, I couldent remeber anything that happend but i felt refreshed. | |
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kenzie Buttface
Posts : 1813 Join date : 2011-12-01 Age : 25 Location : ontario
| Subject: Re: Score!{Kyle} Tue Mar 13, 2012 12:46 am | |
| Timmys eyes opened and Elliots head shot up. He shook Char awake. She had fallen asleep on his shoulder. "Char, Timmys out..." Charity struggled to stand up. She was exausted. But, when she saw Timmy, she ran to him. It was just before she got to his side that his eyes fluttered closed again. | |
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Justin
Posts : 1206 Join date : 2011-09-30 Age : 24 Location : in your closet
| Subject: Re: Score!{Kyle} Tue Mar 13, 2012 12:56 am | |
| I felt my body return to its other state of coma. I sighd defeatedly and continued trying to fight my brain for control. I stayed doing that for a couple minutes but finally juest fell asleep using the time to refresh my body and try again later. | |
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kenzie Buttface
Posts : 1813 Join date : 2011-12-01 Age : 25 Location : ontario
| Subject: Re: Score!{Kyle} Tue Mar 13, 2012 1:22 am | |
| Charity collapsed to the floor, weeping. "We, almost...h-had him.."She was on her knees, head in her hands. Elliot was standing behind her, looking at Timmy. He picked charity up from under her arms. Then he picked swung her back putting his arms under her legs and back. He carried her to an empty cot. "Get some rest. You've been up for 48 hours straight." Charity closed her eyes and was out like a light. | |
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