Nadda's Characters [needs acceptance]

Half-Bloods
Name: Anastasia Hale
Age/Birthday: Twelve/19th February
Gender: Female
God Parent: Athena
Claimed: Yes
Mortal Family: Gary Hale
Years in Camp: One year
Brief History:
Anastasia was raised with her Father, going along with him whenever he went somewhere out of the state, country, or even out of the house that they lived in. Her Father was a businessman that used to go around making deals everywhere, and he always took Anastasia with him, knowing the truth about her and how if she was left alone there was a possibility that she could be attacked. Her Father decided to send her to a school, and she lasted for a year there before a monster appeared and then, her Father told her the truth, and after that, her and her Father went to camp.
Physical Appearance:
Like the rest of the Athena kids, Anastasia has blonde hair and stormy gray eyes. Her blonde hair is medium length that reaches her shoulders, and her hair is usually let loose. Before camp, she used to wear glasses. Anastasia has a lean body, though it's more of an average sized, seeing as she's not thin but she's not fat either. She has fair complexion, and she's short for her age.
Personality:
When you first meet Anastasia, usually your first impression will be that she is a harmless little girl, but the truth is, she hates it when people underestimate her. Anastasia isn't arrogant- she knows that she's not the best fighter in her cabin, but sometimes she can have a case of a bad temper every time somebody insults her, or underestimates her. Anastasia can first be seen as a sarcastic girl, but she's actually caring, though she just likes to show her sarcastic side more often. She's witty, and thinks fast also. Even if she is wise, sometimes Anastasia can get a little carried away by her thinking and becomes too proud of herself.
Fatal Flaw: Being too proud
Pets: None
Talents: Thinks quickly.
Weapons: Celestial bronze dagger
Year-Round or Summer: Year-Round
Other: If I need to fix anything, then please just tell!

Accepted! Great work for a first character!

Name: Katy Grant
Age/Birthday: 17/4th June
Gender: Female
God Parent: Ares
Claimed: Yes
Mortal Family: Marie Grant
Years in Camp: Five
Brief History:
Katy is a very normal girl, who lives in a very normal world. Yeah right. Even she wished that she had the regular life, but no. Katy is a half-blood, and one that have been attracting many monsters ever since she moved to San Francisco with her Mother. Originally, Katy was raised in a ranch in a small town somewhere far away from a city, but then her Mother had urged the two of them to move away. And a few years ago, exactly five years ago, Katy used to live in the dangerous place.

Marie, her Mother, had enrolled her in a private school for the troubled kids. It wasn't really a boarding school, but her Mother had made her think that it was one. The students were only allowed to go home once every three weeks, and for the first few months, she stayed safe and made some new friends, not realizing the aura that would make monsters look for her.

But her safety disappeared as soon as she turned twelve years old on her birthday, and it was when a one-eyed man, a cyclops, had attacked her during her birthday. She barely escaped the battle, but the battle gave her some new strengths that she didn't know she ever had in her. Since then, her Mother had made Katy to go and live in Camp Half-Blood, saying that it was the best choice for the both of them.
Physical Appearance:
Unlike the stereotypical type of the other Ares kids, at first, Katy may manage to look like a normal, harmless girl, and she is often mistaken as a daughter of Aphrodite because of her looks. Her height is 5'75", and she has a lean figure that makes her look very un-brutal, when she isn't inside a battle field. Katy has 'unique lips', as people would call it, and light brown hair with blue eyes. She inherits her looks from her Mother, and usually she seems as a gullible opponent because of her looks and how people usually underestimate her as weak only because of her looks.
Personality:
A very rash person was the complete opposite to what Katy was. Katy is a very calm girl, who can stay calm and quiet despite any situation that she's put in, which makes her the outcast in the Ares cabin. She likes to make good first impressions by being nice to everyone, though usually that image is broken when people see her on the battlefield. Outside the battlefield, Katy may seem to be just a regular, sweet girl who won't pass for an Ares child, but on the battlefield, Katy likes to not give mercy to any monsters that cross her path. She is also very sarcastic, and instead of smiling, she has made it a habit to smirk. She is also a very arrogant person, which is her biggest flaw.
Fatal Flaw: Arrogance
Pets: Biter, a rottweiler dog.
Talents: Good battle reflexes
Weapons: A CB sword
Year-Round or Summer: Year-Round
Other:
Well, she basically looks like this,