welshy out of town girl
Posts : 3630 Join date : 2011-11-22 Age : 26 Location : burning in the underworld
| Subject: The sacrifice - Poem Wed Nov 30, 2011 2:58 pm | |
| Sitting out on the warm grass, holding his hand. Watching the clouds as they pass. It feels like home.
The rain falls as you wave gooodbye, The sky inside you turns grey. He made you a promise but it was a lie. You are suddenly scared.
Reading about it all over the news, Crying as his name is called. His king has been check-mated. You all lose.
Silent tears streak down, a rose in your hand, He passes you, wrapped in the union Jack. You place the flower on top of him, rubbing your bloated stomach. You whisper "Daddy is finally home."
A girl sits out on the porch, Holding his dog-tags in your hand. Her Mother hugs her, saying it will be alright. Yet the girl feels all alone.
He watches up from the clouds at every acheivment and mistake. He smiles at every step his daughter takes. When the time comes, they'll be reunited, Finay at peace. | |
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Ninja Poet
Posts : 1722 Join date : 2010-11-05 Age : 26 Location : IN THE HARSH NORTH
| Subject: Re: The sacrifice - Poem Wed Nov 30, 2011 3:08 pm | |
| DUUUDE AMAZING. It's so beautiful. =') | |
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welshy out of town girl
Posts : 3630 Join date : 2011-11-22 Age : 26 Location : burning in the underworld
| Subject: Re: The sacrifice - Poem Wed Nov 30, 2011 4:10 pm | |
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KaySpyGirl
Posts : 1132 Join date : 2011-02-01 Age : 26 Location : I don't know.
| Subject: Re: The sacrifice - Poem Wed Nov 30, 2011 8:04 pm | |
| Awesome. Don know a better word for it. Almost made me cry. I never cry. | |
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cher Experienced Poster
Posts : 2315 Join date : 2011-09-19 Age : 24 Location : I have no idea. I just woke up here, dude.
| Subject: Re: The sacrifice - Poem Wed Nov 30, 2011 9:57 pm | |
| This is beautiful *tear* You even got it past me. The very, very picky and harsh critic. *bows down* | |
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welshy out of town girl
Posts : 3630 Join date : 2011-11-22 Age : 26 Location : burning in the underworld
| Subject: Re: The sacrifice - Poem Thu Dec 01, 2011 4:59 pm | |
| Haha, thanks guys. You all rock! | |
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