cher
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 |  Subject: Random Poem.  Mon Nov 28, 2011 12:42 am | |
| Jamie’s life was ‘perfect’.
Everyone loved her.
She looked beautiful.
She was ever optimistic.
Jamie was the perfect student.
She never got into trouble.
She was loved by all.
Julie was the ‘average’ one.
She had many friends but one close one.
She looked ‘plain’.
Julie wasn’t the best student, but not the worst.
She was like a chameleon sometimes, blending in and going unnoticed.
Jemma was a ‘loser’.
Nobody wanted to bother with her.
She was ‘overweight’ and ‘short’.
She tried to mask her sadness.
Julie wanted to be like Jamie.
Jemma wanted to be like Jamie. But Jamie doesn’t exsist. | |
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Turtle
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| | Subject: Re: Random Poem. Mon Nov 28, 2011 1:08 am | |
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swimmer28
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| | Subject: Re: Random Poem. Mon Nov 28, 2011 9:36 am | |
| You critized my story.
but all I have is praise for yours. It is awesome, and it explains all of us.
We all wanna be perfect but we are all either average or below average.
I love that peom.......very good work Cherry. | |
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cher
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| | Subject: Re: Random Poem. Mon Nov 28, 2011 11:35 am | |
| Dude, at least you managed to write something that long XD Something at that lenght would've took me around what? 1100000000000 years. Yeah, i'm that slow. But thanks I guess.^^ | |
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swimmer28
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| | Subject: Re: Random Poem. Mon Nov 28, 2011 7:29 pm | |
| i took me forever to write that story....but that poem is about 100000000000000000000000 times better than my story.
youre welcome by the way. | |
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