Jake Fasarely's Characters

Name: Ayden Daterson
Age/Birthday: 13 years old; birthday: 24th November
Gender: Male
God Parent: Hermes
Claimed: Yes
Mortal Family: Jane Daterson
Years in Camp: 3
Brief History: Ayden was born at Central Hospital where Hermes revealed himself to Jane Daterson. Hermes left Ayden since he was 5, due to duties delivering mail on Olympus. Ayden learnt that he was a half-blood when he was 10 and asked his mother to take him to Half Blood Hill. He has always been in contact with his mother by Iris-Messaging, but he goes year-round at the camp.
Physical Appearance: He has blonde, spiky hair and a scar across his eye he got from fighting a Minotaur. He has blue eyes. Ayden alway carries a smile whether it's a crooked smile or a friendly smile. His right arm is always stiff. He isn't thin nor buff, his size is somewhere in between.
Personality: Ayden is a nice guy. But, he is easily annoyed and is known to attack people who crowd him. He hates being around with people and often sleeps at the roof of the Big House. Although he doesn't help much, he tries his best in battle. He loves teaching new campers in the arena. Ayden was never set on a quest in his life.
Fatal Flaw: Over-confidence.
Pets: None whatsoever.
Talents: A born swordsman and was taught smithing and crafting by the children of Hephaestus.
Weapons: Celestial bronze longsword
Year-Round or Summer: Year-Round
Other: None whatsoever.

I'm not a mod but you're appearance needs four sentences as does you're personality

Right, thanks. I didn't notice.

Welcome to Camp Half-Blood!

Looks good! Only thing is that Hermes wouldn't have stayed with Ayden until he was 5, so maybe change it so that he left the hospital pretty much immediately after Jane gave birth to Ayden?