Battles in the battlefield.

Hai! I'm here to talk about the battles.(Not the battle system but the big fights in the battlefield.)

If you haven't noticed, the three previous fights have started like this.(not excactly but you get it.)


"Trah la la walking in the forest is so fun. OMG Look is Kronus, YOU DIEZ TODAY!"

Which was okay, but can't we do better than that? First of all how do 100s, if not 1000s of monster plus a bunch of baddie demigods walk through a forest filled with Nymphs and Satyrs and all the other magical creatures surrounding camp with out one seeing them and being like. "OHNOE I gotta warn camp!!!"

We can do so much better than that. Like..This.

Tommy sat atop his war horse. The sun was just coming into view, dawn. This time of day was perfect for war, not to hot, not to cold, many men all through history had died in wars just like this. He klicked, and his horse, Rex, moved further up. Pulling his reigns to the right, he turned and looked to the small, but elite army behind him. He could see cabin leaders giving speeches to the demigods. Muttering under his breath, he knew no Ares kid needed a speech, this was all part of the Ares kids DNA, war that is.

Silence went through the army behind him as the Kronus army war drums started pounding. The fight was apon them. Time for talk was over, the work they had put in for the past week was going to be tested, the battleground was litered with traps set by the demigod army.

The point is, the past two battles have gone on for 15-16 pages, and have lacked detailed information over both armys. We can should do better.

That is such a good idea. I was thinking that myself but didn't know how to word it.