Ally321's character (ignore topic please--repose by accident)

Half-Bloods
Name: Avery Seed
Age/Birthday: 12: March 26 1999
Gender: female
God Parent: Athena (not claimed yet)
Claimed: no
Mortal Family: Alexis Arlow (runs home)
Years in Camp: (arriving now) 0
Brief History: Avery Seed's parents died in a car crash when she was five. She relocates to foster homes every so often but nobody will tell her why. Avery is able to see through Mist. Her last boarding school was destroyed by a Chimera. 
Physical Appearance: Avery has straight blonde hair with a single red highlight. She has gray eyes. Avery is 5'0  and she is skinny. 
Personality: usually excited, jumpy, talks a lot, likes to build, thinks she's crazy (because she can see through the Mist)
Fatal Flaw: holding grudges
Pets:none
Talents: Good at Archery
Weapons: Bow and Arrow, sword
Year-Round or Summer: year round 
Other: none

pretty good charrie, But you should expand more on the History, Appearance and Personality.

I changed it a tiny bitt. Half-Bloods
Name: Avery Seed
Age/Birthday: 12: March 26 1999
Gender: female
God Parent: Athena (not claimed yet)
Claimed: no
Mortal Family: Alexis Arlow (runs home)
Years in Camp: (arriving now) 0

Brief History: Avery Seed's parents died in a car crash when she was five. She relocates to foster homes every so often but nobody will tell her why. Avery is able to see through Mist. Her last foster home was destroyed by a Chimera, and the police thought it was Avery.   She now lives in a foster home for "special" kids. Obviously since she is a half blood she has dyslexia and ADHD. 

Physical Appearance: Avery has straight blonde hair with a single red highlight. She has gray eyes. Avery is 5'0  and she is skinny. She is 83 lbs and is pale. 

Personality: Avery is usually jumpy and alert. She thinks she is partially insane because she can see through the mist, but doesn't know what the mist is. She is usually happy. She doesn't trust many people because she thinks her family deserted her.  

Fatal Flaw: not trusting 
Pets:none
Talents: Good at Archery
Weapons: Bow and Arrow, sword
Year-Round or Summer: year round 
Other: none

Personality needs to be 4 complete sentences. Since it is currently only one incomplete sentence, I can't accept her. Fix that and I will, though!

I fixed it! (I used edit so it's on same post)

Am I accepted??

(sorry I posted it twice)