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BlackWolf-03 Experienced Poster
Posts : 2446 Join date : 2011-06-04
| Subject: Re: Jade meets Mackenzie Mon Jul 04, 2011 9:22 pm | |
| Whoa! Where did the pink come from? | |
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colleen
Posts : 617 Join date : 2011-06-25 Age : 25 Location : I'm outside in your backyard. I'm surrounded by cows. You're jealous.
| Subject: Re: Jade meets Mackenzie Tue Jul 05, 2011 8:06 am | |
| It started working again!!! Mackenzie's colour is pink! | |
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BlackWolf-03 Experienced Poster
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| Subject: Re: Jade meets Mackenzie Tue Jul 05, 2011 10:49 am | |
| Alright! The show is back on!! | |
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colleen
Posts : 617 Join date : 2011-06-25 Age : 25 Location : I'm outside in your backyard. I'm surrounded by cows. You're jealous.
| Subject: Re: Jade meets Mackenzie Tue Jul 05, 2011 11:13 am | |
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BlackWolf-03 Experienced Poster
Posts : 2446 Join date : 2011-06-04
| Subject: Re: Jade meets Mackenzie Tue Jul 05, 2011 2:44 pm | |
| I quietly walked through the woods gripping onto my dagger. I heard my name called in the distance. I really hoped that they heard the tap signal. The two eyes looked so familiar, I noticed. I flashed back to the scene I had a few seconds ago. The two eyes were about 2 inches of a diameter. I quickly tried my best to remember anything with that size of yellow eyes. I slowly opened my eyes knowing the answer..."No.." I breathed out. I heard a roar behind me and an arm heading my way. I jumped back with a scream. | |
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colleen
Posts : 617 Join date : 2011-06-25 Age : 25 Location : I'm outside in your backyard. I'm surrounded by cows. You're jealous.
| Subject: Re: Jade meets Mackenzie Wed Jul 06, 2011 9:02 am | |
| Jade heard the scream the same time Mackenzie heard the tap signal. "Oh My God!!!!!" was all Jade could scream, while Mackenzie shoved her hand in front of Jade's face. "Shut Up!" she hissed. She pulled out her sword her real Dad had given her when she was just a little baby. It said Believe on it. "Jade! Get you weapon out, we're about to help Katro kick some Monster butt!" "What?!" Jade thought Mackenzie was being absolutley crazy, but she did as she said. Jade had never fought a Monster before, and was scared she would make a fool of herself. | |
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BlackWolf-03 Experienced Poster
Posts : 2446 Join date : 2011-06-04
| Subject: Re: Jade meets Mackenzie Wed Jul 06, 2011 1:59 pm | |
| All I remembered was something charging at me and me being thrown back. I slowly woke up to the sound of a voice in my head. You will be mine Katro. Just come with me and you will be a great person to me my dear. "Help!" I managed to shout out. I shook the thought out of my head and tried to get free. "Jade! Kenzie! Anyone!" I yelled once again! | |
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colleen
Posts : 617 Join date : 2011-06-25 Age : 25 Location : I'm outside in your backyard. I'm surrounded by cows. You're jealous.
| Subject: Re: Jade meets Mackenzie Wed Jul 06, 2011 2:16 pm | |
| "Did you hear that?" Jade asked Mackenzie. Jade was really freaking out now. She just got to Camp, and already she had to fight a monster to defend a friend. She was not going to get used to this. "Just hold on, Katro! We're coming!" Mackenzie yelled at the top of her lungs, hoping Katro would hear her. Jade and Mackenzie burst into a clearing. Lieing on the ground was Katro. In front of her was a Monster Mackenzie didn't reconize. "What is that?" Mackenzie asked. Then she remembered Katro and ran to her. "Are you ok?" | |
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BlackWolf-03 Experienced Poster
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| Subject: Re: Jade meets Mackenzie Wed Jul 06, 2011 2:29 pm | |
| I sat down with tiredness in my eyes. I felt a hand grab my shoulder. "It's going to kill you.." I muttered. I heard another roar to my right. "I feel all oozy right now.." I managed to say when one of my half-sister's asked me if I was alright. Come with me Katro. We can live away from this danger, the voice said once again. I shook the thought away but kept growing tired.
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colleen
Posts : 617 Join date : 2011-06-25 Age : 25 Location : I'm outside in your backyard. I'm surrounded by cows. You're jealous.
| Subject: Re: Jade meets Mackenzie Wed Jul 06, 2011 3:32 pm | |
| "How do you kill it?" Mackenzie asked. "Stay with me long enough to tell me how to kill it." "Oh My God!!! She's going to die!!!" Jade shrieked. "Wait, I'm not helping am I? I'll go get some help!" And with that, Jade was gone, yelling at anyone to get help. She even yelled at Thalia's Pine Tree, until she noticed that it was, in fact, a tree. "Don't worry Katro. I'm here. Just relax, and fall asleep. And the next thing you know, poof, you're safe." Mackenzie said, patting Katro on the sholder. | |
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BlackWolf-03 Experienced Poster
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| Subject: Re: Jade meets Mackenzie Wed Jul 06, 2011 4:31 pm | |
| "It's a Minotaur. You can kill it in many ways, but it's deadly.." I said as tired grew deeper into my eyes. "No, I can't fall asleep. If that happens, then the Minotaur would just throw you somewhere, and leave with me in his hands. That can't happen. I can't fall asleep. You have to slap me Kenz. You gotta slap me.." I said as clutching my sister's shoulder. | |
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colleen
Posts : 617 Join date : 2011-06-25 Age : 25 Location : I'm outside in your backyard. I'm surrounded by cows. You're jealous.
| Subject: Re: Jade meets Mackenzie Wed Jul 06, 2011 4:55 pm | |
| "Minotaur? I remember now! Ok, fine, I'll slap you, but this was you're idea!" Mackenzie slapped Katro in the face. "Ok, now, Mr Minotaur. I hear you're deadly. Well, that doesn't scare me!" Mackenzie charged the Minotaur and stabbed it in the leg with her sword. Nothing happened, except she made the Minotaur mad. Jade finally made it to the Big House. She opened the door and yelled out: "BIG MONSTER NEAR THALIA'S PINE TREE!!!! HELP!!!!!!!" Then, she ran to the Infirmary and burst inside. She was surrounded by hundreds of injured heroes. "Ummm... I kinda need some help with this big monster, and my half-sister is injured, and my other one is fighting it, so yeah." At least, ten heroes and 2 satyrs came running to her aid. She couldn't help but smile. "Come on, everybody!" Jade shouted as she led the other campers and satyrs to where Katro was lying. | |
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BlackWolf-03 Experienced Poster
Posts : 2446 Join date : 2011-06-04
| Subject: Re: Jade meets Mackenzie Wed Jul 06, 2011 5:11 pm | |
| You can't do that.. you can't control other people.. that's not how it works.. | |
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colleen
Posts : 617 Join date : 2011-06-25 Age : 25 Location : I'm outside in your backyard. I'm surrounded by cows. You're jealous.
| Subject: Re: Jade meets Mackenzie Wed Jul 06, 2011 5:28 pm | |
| ok. I'll change it. *Everybody just stared at Jade like she was crazy. "Fine, don't help!" she huffed, pulled out her dagger and ran like a mad woman towards the place where the Monster is.* | |
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BlackWolf-03 Experienced Poster
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| Subject: Re: Jade meets Mackenzie Wed Jul 06, 2011 5:37 pm | |
| You know you can just edit it right? | |
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colleen
Posts : 617 Join date : 2011-06-25 Age : 25 Location : I'm outside in your backyard. I'm surrounded by cows. You're jealous.
| Subject: Re: Jade meets Mackenzie Wed Jul 06, 2011 5:39 pm | |
| Yeah, I knew that....... I just forgot..... | |
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BlackWolf-03 Experienced Poster
Posts : 2446 Join date : 2011-06-04
| Subject: Re: Jade meets Mackenzie Wed Jul 06, 2011 5:44 pm | |
| "You can't kill it by yourself Kenz!" I yelled as my tired eyes watched my half-sister charge towards the Minotaur. I watched as the Minotaur just became angrier with everything and came towards me and roared right in my ears. I clamped my hands over my ears to keep more pain from coming into my ears. Come now, or your friends die, the voice said in my thoughts. I squeezed my eyes tight, wanting this to end. | |
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colleen
Posts : 617 Join date : 2011-06-25 Age : 25 Location : I'm outside in your backyard. I'm surrounded by cows. You're jealous.
| Subject: Re: Jade meets Mackenzie Wed Jul 06, 2011 6:50 pm | |
| "Get away from her!" Mackenzie yelled as the Minotaur roared at Katro. I have to get its attention, Mackenzie thought. So, she did the stupidest thing she could think of. She jumped on the Minotaur. Jade got to the clearing just in time to see Mackenzie jump on the Minotaur. "What the heck are you doing?" Jade yelled as she ran into the battle. She stabed the Minotaur's legs a couple of times but it did nothing. | |
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BlackWolf-03 Experienced Poster
Posts : 2446 Join date : 2011-06-04
| Subject: Re: Jade meets Mackenzie Wed Jul 06, 2011 7:26 pm | |
| "No! Don't make him even madder!" I yelled as opening my eyes. I watched as both of my half-sisters attacked the minotaur. I listened as screams went on, as the two of them kept on attacking. I watched as the minotaur just stood there roaring, not even flinching as the two kept slashing their weapons at him. Come now Katro. It is time to go home, the voice boomed into my head. I stopped from the struggling, and slowly stood up. I sighed and looked at my feet. "This ends now.." I muttered. | |
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colleen
Posts : 617 Join date : 2011-06-25 Age : 25 Location : I'm outside in your backyard. I'm surrounded by cows. You're jealous.
| Subject: Re: Jade meets Mackenzie Thu Jul 07, 2011 9:34 am | |
| "What are you doing Katro?!" Jade screamed, "Sit down NOW!!!!!!!" "Katro, please sit down. You're going to get killed and I won't forgive myself. So, SIT DOWN!!!!" Mackemzie yelled at her half-sister. | |
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BlackWolf-03 Experienced Poster
Posts : 2446 Join date : 2011-06-04
| Subject: Re: Jade meets Mackenzie Thu Jul 07, 2011 3:25 pm | |
| I sighed once again as my two half-sisters told me to stop. "I'm ending this. Just go behind me a few yards." I said as turning to them where the minotaur couldn't see my face. I quickly gave them a twitch in my left eye. 'Oh please see it', I thought. "We leave now.." I said to the Minotaur. I walked into the dark woods clutching the handle of my bronze spear with the Minotaur right behind me. | |
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colleen
Posts : 617 Join date : 2011-06-25 Age : 25 Location : I'm outside in your backyard. I'm surrounded by cows. You're jealous.
| Subject: Re: Jade meets Mackenzie Thu Jul 07, 2011 3:45 pm | |
| Jade saw the twitch of Katro's eye. She looked and saw that so had Mackenzie. She walked to where Katro had told her to stand. So did Mackenzie. | |
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BlackWolf-03 Experienced Poster
Posts : 2446 Join date : 2011-06-04
| Subject: Re: Jade meets Mackenzie Thu Jul 07, 2011 8:56 pm | |
| "Don't kill anyone alright? I'm here with you now, and that's all that maters." I said with a sly smile. I listened as the Minotaur changed into a human form I think. "Marcus, don't be like this.." I softly said. "Come on! I was just having some fun!" Marcus said with a big smile. I turned away and sat against a tree. I grabbed one of the spare daggers that were on my belt and instantly threw it at Marcus. "Ah!" I heard. "Katro!" I heard in a deeper voice. I ran quietly through the trees, trying to get back to camp. I quickly glanced around me to find if he yet found me. I sighed as I found nothing near me. Yet. | |
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colleen
Posts : 617 Join date : 2011-06-25 Age : 25 Location : I'm outside in your backyard. I'm surrounded by cows. You're jealous.
| Subject: Re: Jade meets Mackenzie Thu Jul 07, 2011 9:25 pm | |
| "Woah, what just happened?" Jade asked as the minotaur turned into a human. "Don't just stand there! Find Katro!" Mackenzie yelled at Jade, who had just stopped. | |
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