Jade meets Mackenzie

Jade walked around the Camp for a while, thinking. Would Mikey feel welcome here? Would he miss her too much?
Jade bumped into a girl. She looked up. The girl looked exactly like her, exept the clothes. The girl was wearing a ripped green shirt, jeans with holes everywhere. Strapped to her belt was a sword.
"Sorry," Jade muttered turning around.

"Wait!" Mackenzie called after the girl who looked exactly like her. The only differev=nce was the clothes. The girl was wearing a pink tank top, and jean shorts.
The girl turned around, "I'm Mackenzie, I just got here."

"Hello. I'm Jade Stonehawk,daughter of Athena.I've been here about an hour.How about you?" Jade wanted to impress her new half-sister. Jade shook Katro's hand.

"Hey, Katro. I'm Mackenzie Smith, also a daughter of Athena. I've been here about 1 minute. I killed a hell hound, and then walked into the camp. I've been on my own since I was 8 years old, ever since my "parents" told me I was adopted. Is that normal for a half blood?"

"I'm sorry..." Jade said quietly. She had known alot of kids whos parents had been killed, seeing as she lived in an orphanage.

"A tour would be nice," Mackenzie said, glaring at Jade. How did she not tell that Katro didn't want to talk about her dad? "How many monsters have you killed?" Mackenzie kept talking. She was good at that, distaracting people, or monsters, usually so she could strike them, but not this time.

"Over a hundred? Wow! That's awesome!" Jade said, astounded. She hoped she could be like Katro some day. She doubted she'd ever be able to kill that many monsters.

"Same. I used to just run from them because I was younger, and didn't know what I was doing. I didn't grow out of that habbit until last year." Mackenzie wasn't as surprised at how many monsters Katro had killed as Jade was. "You said you didn't go on as many quests as the other campers, how many do the other campers usually go on?"

"You've killed as many monsters as Katro has?!" Jade asked Mackenzie.

Mackenzie glanced at Jade and nodded, then went back to face Katro.

(just a heads up. I'm getting quite confused. You need to color them. Because in the last post you just had, I didn't know who and who was talking.)

"Impressive.." I muttered to my half-sister as she just noted that she killed more monsters than me. "I don't really know that I should say. I'm not really a people person. The main people I usually hang out with is my group and some other friends. Not really anyone else. So, with that question, I wouldn't know that answer to." I said as rubbing the back of my head. "Alright, this is the gate to Camp Half-Blood as you can see. If you would just walk down the hill, to your right you can see Thalia's Pine Tree. It's a nice place to relax I would say.." I said with a smile.

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"Whos in you're group? I'd like to meet them." Jade wasn't that interested in the camp. It looked cool and all, but she was definatley a people person.

"Why is it called Thalia's Pine Tree?" Mackenzie asked. She was vaguely aware of Jade asking a question about Katro's group, but she wasn't really listening. She was too busy taking the camp in. It was truly amazing. And, just like Katro, she wasn't a people person either. She used to be, before she ran away. Since then, she learned that it's best not to make too many friends, otherwise, you're just going to end up getting back stabbed over and over again.

"What do you mean for another two days? What are they doing in there?" Jade asked, completley surprised.

"There used to be a girl inside that tree? Cool!" Mackenzie loved how her day kept getting wierder and wierder.

"Is you're head ok?" Jade asked, noticing that Katro was rubbing her head hard. She hoped Katro hadn't been hit by another camper. Jade hated bullies.

"There are campers who have been here longer than you?!" Mackenzie asked, astounded.

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Oh. Wait. That was three sentences... Oh no!

Well, can you edit it please? Before you get in trouble?

Sure. I'm glad you're concerned. Do all of my posts have to be 4 sentences? Or just the role playing ones?

Just the RPing posts. Thanks! I like to warn people before they get into trouble. XD

Thanks! I was scared for a second there!

Jade thought about what Katro had said. When she really thought about it, she felt kind of nervous too. "Me too," she told Katro, scratching her nose like she did when ever she was nervous. "I wonder why. Do you feel nervous too, Mackenzie?"

"Hmm? Me? I dunno. I'm always nervous, feeling like someone's watching me. But, that's because I've been running most of my life. But, I do feel a little more nervous than usual. Can you see any eyes looking at us?" Mackenzie looked around for any eyes peering out at them.

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"I don't think so. If there were any eyes on it I would have felt the presence a whole long time ago." I said with a smile. I slowly closed my fist and banged the tree, trying to do the old tap signal, the Greeks would do in old days. "Notice, just please hear it!" I muttered to myself. My breathed in and out as usual, and watched as two eyes appeared to my left. I ignored it, hoping that it would ignore us. Quietly, without anyone noticing, I took my dagger out. I looked up and once again quietly slipped into the shadows of the woods, disappearing from the other two.

"Where'd she go?" Jade asked, looking around for Katro. "She diasapeared!" Jade started fantacly searching for Katro, panic bubbling up inside of her. "KATRO!! KATRO!!!"

"Dude, shut up. We have to handle this calmly. She probably did see eyes, and didn't want to scare us, so she went to go send it back to Tartarus herself. All we have to do now is find where she diasapeared."