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PostSubject: Going to my doom (private to Odie and maybe wolf)   Going to my doom (private to Odie and maybe wolf) I_icon_minitimeMon Jun 20, 2011 10:32 am

Tori walked onto the beach. It was cold and the wind was blowing like crazy. 'What a lovely day to die' she thought. Tori turned around and looked at camp one last time. She would miss it so much. More like the people in it. Amazing what one day with friends can do to a person. One day with Devin had changed her life forever. Now her life would be over soon, all to soon. Tori's brown hair was wet from the rain. Her eyes were dark and sad.
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PostSubject: Re: Going to my doom (private to Odie and maybe wolf)   Going to my doom (private to Odie and maybe wolf) I_icon_minitimeMon Jun 20, 2011 1:15 pm

I walked on the side of the beach awaiting for Tori's arrival. I felt the chill of the wind blowing at me. I had my hands in my shorts. I had dried of tears on my face. It was just two days ago when I had met her. Now she's leaving. I'll find her, I thought. I'll see her everyday. I pushed the thought out of my head when I found Tori standing there in front of me looking at the ground. "I don't want you to leave." I softly said feeling tears building up once more. I walked towards her finding that she was getting cold. I took off my shirt and wrapped it around her. "It's not as best as a jacket, but it'll do I guess." I said with a smile.


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PostSubject: Re: Going to my doom (private to Odie and maybe wolf)   Going to my doom (private to Odie and maybe wolf) I_icon_minitimeMon Jun 20, 2011 1:48 pm

Tori looked at Devin. "I told you not to come. I don't want you to see this. Please? I can barely stand this much less you." she said taking his shirt. "Now we're both going to freeze." Tori said with a faint smile. "I'm sorry to see you hurt. I didn't want this, but you had to know. I couldn't live with myself if I hadn't told you." she said looking at the ground.
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PostSubject: Re: Going to my doom (private to Odie and maybe wolf)   Going to my doom (private to Odie and maybe wolf) I_icon_minitimeMon Jun 20, 2011 3:01 pm

"I wanted to see one last time. I couldn't stand it without seeing you." I whispered. I smiled when she had wrapped her arms around my shirt that I gave her. I smiled once again. "Nah, I don't get too cold easily." I said with a grin trying to cheer her up. "Here." I said giving Tori a necklace of my own. It had a winged sandal. "To always remember me." I whispered.


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PostSubject: Re: Going to my doom (private to Odie and maybe wolf)   Going to my doom (private to Odie and maybe wolf) I_icon_minitimeMon Jun 20, 2011 3:56 pm

Tori took the necklace with tears in her eyes. "Oh Devin I could never forget you." she said standing up to hug him. "Can you help me put it on?" Tori asked putting her hair to the side of her.
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PostSubject: Re: Going to my doom (private to Odie and maybe wolf)   Going to my doom (private to Odie and maybe wolf) I_icon_minitimeMon Jun 20, 2011 4:04 pm

I smiled when she wanted me to put it on. I motioned behind her and unscrew the necklace. I gently layed it around her neck and tighten the necklace. "You'll always be a part of me now.." I said going back in front of her. I wrapped my arms around her for another hug. "I'll never forget you." I whispered.


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Tori hugged Devin back. "Don't think of it as goodbye Devin. Just a um... a vacation. Sure I'm going on a vacation. I will miss you though. I love you." she said waving. Tears streaked her face and soaked her shirt. This was too much, way too much. Tori thought of running after Devin and leaving this mess behind, but she stayed still.
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I walked away feeling like my heart's been ripped. I turned around when I had reached the Amphitheater. I saw that Tori was still standing their awaiting for something to happen. I noticed that people were staring at me with my shirt off. I didn't care. That shirt was given to Tori. I yelled aloud so everyone could hear me, "I love you!" I smiled when she had turned around to look at me once more. I started to cry. Tears were coming down my cheeks. The wind was still blowing. Why did a day like this have to come, I thought.


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PostSubject: Re: Going to my doom (private to Odie and maybe wolf)   Going to my doom (private to Odie and maybe wolf) I_icon_minitimeMon Jun 20, 2011 6:51 pm

Marcos had been informed of a possible leak in information. As commander of Kronos' spies here at camp while Kyle was away, it was his duty to locate and neutralize the threat. He wasn't sure if there was any truth, but he could spy. Taking a couple of other campers with him, the son of Hecate walked down to the beach in full armor with his sword, Charmsaber, by his side.

Staying in the trees, so as not to be caught, he watched the scene unfold with the Aphrodite and Apollo camper with him in their armors as well.
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Tori heard a rustle in the woods. She turned around to stare at the countless trees. Tori looked back at the ground and sighed deeply. "Hi Marcos..." she said staring at the ground. After working with the same people for a while you know their faces, actions, and regrets.
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Marcos sighed, and shook his head at the other campers. They had been too loud. "What are you doing, here, Tori? Shouldn't you be enjoying some time to yourself, or something?"

He remained in the woods, hidden. He wasn't actually too far, so he could talk to her, and he ignored the other guy. It didn't matter, he could always make himself invisible with an invisibility charm. The other guy would never see him, anyway, so it did not matter.
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PostSubject: Re: Going to my doom (private to Odie and maybe wolf)   Going to my doom (private to Odie and maybe wolf) I_icon_minitimeMon Jun 20, 2011 9:00 pm

Tori laughed a little. "Or something... I'm just here thinking. Not many people are around. It's a nice place to think, quiet and peaceful." she said. Tori fingered the necklace Devin gave her only minutes ago. Thinking about him made her tear up.
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PostSubject: Re: Going to my doom (private to Odie and maybe wolf)   Going to my doom (private to Odie and maybe wolf) I_icon_minitimeMon Jun 20, 2011 9:21 pm

"So, why are you crying? Is something wrong," he asked. He was seriously worried. She seemed visibly upset, and he hated it when girls cried. It made him feel horrible.

He sat down, but stayed where he was. He couldn't allow himself to be caught in full armor. The last thing he needed was to make other enemies, especially, angry boyfriends out for revenge. It could end his life, and he was too young to die.

"Seriously, is there something I can do?"
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Tori shook her head. "No, nothing I'm fine just fine..." she said. If Marcos asked questions she was doomed. "Fine stop it! Okay I told Devin, my boyfriend, about me being a spy.Just kill me now! Put me out of this! Please!" she said. Oops...
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PostSubject: Re: Going to my doom (private to Odie and maybe wolf)   Going to my doom (private to Odie and maybe wolf) I_icon_minitimeMon Jun 20, 2011 9:42 pm

It was about two hours already since I walked away from the girl I met just two days ago. I walked around, paced in my cabin. I couldn't do anything else. What can I do!!! I thought. Cal, Katro, and Hunter were doing daily things, so they were out of the picture. All of my other friends were off doing something in the arena. I guess I'll go out for a jog at the beach. The beach, I thought. The last spot where I had left her. I noticed that the rain had stopped and the sun was coming out. So yeah the beach, I thought. I sprinted off to the Camp Hill and jogged towards the beach. A few seconds later I noticed a girl standing there. I walked up to her. Tori. I slowed down my pace. "Tori... is that you?" I asked nervously.


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Tori spun around to see Devin. 'Crap, crap, crap, this is really really bad.' she thought. "yes, yes it is. How did you know? the necklace or the uh something else?" Tori said smiling. She really hated this now. What could she say now?
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I smiled and walked slowly towards her. "I thought you said you said you were leaving a while ago?" I said as wrapping my arms around her. I noticed that she was still holding my shirt I had given to her earlier. I buried my face into her shoulders. Why did she have to be so amazing, I thought.


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"You what," the Aphrodite camper exclaimed,"You betrayed us, and for what, some guy who's not even that good looking? Trust me, honey, you could have done so much better than him with a guy in Kronos forces. Most of them are so much better looking."

Marcos stood up, shook his head, and said,"No, no, a good leader doesn't execute his soldiers whenever there is a leak. There is another way." He grinned mischievously, and waved his hands to show that he could still erase her memory, and her boyfriend's as well.

"What," the Nemesis camper exclaimed,"come on, stop sounding like Kyle. I'm tired of protecting our people, and finding other routes besides death. That was Kyle's stupid thing. Just because he's still the leader, he won't be for long. That Solania girl is changing him, and you know it. He is going to get himself killed. The Titan Lord doesn't forgive treachery. So, let's kill her, and get it over with. If you kill her, you will become the new leader of Kronos forces. We will all rally behind you."

Marcos stood up, again, and said, angrily,"No! I am the leader here, and I have spoken with Lord Kronos. We need all the infiltrators we can get, especially since the attack on the camp is about to begin. Thalia has nearly completed her training, and my Mother has prepared something to weaken the magic borders of the camp. I will give her the choice, now silence."

Marcos went silent when the other boy returned. He couldn't afford to be caught.
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Tori hugged Devin back .'This isn't good not at all.' she thought. "Devin! I thought I told you not to come!" Tori whispered. She couldn't help but let the tears fall. "Devin you have to leave!" Tori said crying.
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Marcos watched silently. This wasn't the way it was supposed to be. He had come back, and that complicated things. He turned to the Nemesis Camper, and said, silently,"Look, take him out, but don't kill him. We don't need dead campers, yet. We can kill them when the time comes. Just make sure you disarm him, if he has any weapons, and knock him unconscious. I will make you invisible with one of my charms, but it will only last for about four minutes, so knock him out fast."

The Nemesis camper, sighed, but nodded. He moved around quietly, and Marcos started murmuring the spell silently. This was going to be easy. There was no way to make noise. In a few seconds there would be a grunt, and he would fall harmlessly to the ground unconscious. It would hurt later, however, but for now he just waited.
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I backed away from Tori. "They're going to erase my memory aren't they?"I asked. Tori made no reply. "They're watching me right now." I said as looking around. "Then so be it." I whispered. I heard something behind me, but made no actions. I smiled once more at Tori. "I love you." I mouthed and closed my eyes.


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Marcos waited a moment, and watched. All of a sudden, the boy's head jerked forward as if he had been hit with some force. The boy blacked out, and fell to his knees before falling face first to the ground. The son of Hecate quit murmuring, and the Nemesis camper reappeared in full Greek armor. He looked at Tori, but said towards the trees,"I hit him pretty hard, sir. He'll be out for quite awhile. That will be plenty of time for you to erase his memory, so that he won't even know it's been erased. Not even his emotions will get in the way with him out."

Marcos yelled back with a shake of his head,"I know all about how those spells work. I am the one who has been using them. I am giving you a choice, Tori daughter of Aletheia. I can permanently erase your memory to the point that you will not even remember you are a spy for Kronos and we will not recruit you, again, though I do not know why you were recruited in the first place. A child of the goddess of truth is never a good idea for a spy. Look, Tori, unlike the others. I have never had anything against you even all the times I erased your memory I did it to protect my family. This is my family, now, and I must keep them safe. You see, you are a liability, but I do not want to kill you. You are so young, and it would not be fair to end your life when you have so much to live for. You have a long future ahead of you, I am certain, a boyfriend, and many friends. You would throw that all away?"

He paused a moment, and the Aphrodite camper, threw in,"Look, hon, none of this has to go away. Most of us may not like you in Kronos Army, but it's only because you are a liability. It's not like we want to kill you."

The Nemesis camper looked toward the wood with a mischievous glint in his eye, but the Aphrodite camper, just said,"Oh, shut up. You just want to kill someone, it doesn't matter who."

Marcos continued,"So, this is my last offer. A somewhat normal life as a camper, or death? The choice is yours. Please, choose life. I do not want to have to shed anymore blood for now. We will have plenty more blood to shed when Lord Pallas returns to camp with Lord Kronos' new ultimate weapon."

He waited for her answer, but he was sure he knew what it would be. Why would she want to throw it all away for some mistake that could easily be corrected. They had the solutions right in front of them. This could all be cleared up without any bloodshed. All she had to do was say the word. So, until she did, he would wait. As he waited, he thought he saw her weighing the options. What is there to weigh, he asked himself. If I were her, I would choose life.
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Tori shook her head. "As much as I love life, I can't take it anymore. Please just end it. Please." she said sadly. This was just too much for her, way to much. Too hard.
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"Look, just because life is hard doesn't mean you have to die. We really don't need anymore deaths, than necessary, and yours isn't. Look, I give you a choice one more time. Do you wish to die, or not?"

He really didn't want to kill anyone who didn't have to die, that was the reason he was offering her life. She didn't have to die if there was another way, which there was. He waited for her answer.


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Tori looked at the smooth white sand with tear filled eyes. "Well-" she said before taking her last breath. An arrow was shot from the woods by an unknown attacker. Tori's body lay dead on the sand her eyelids closed forever.
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