Elijah Cross (Character)

Name: Elijah Cross
Age/Birthday: 17 April 15 1993
Gender: Male
God Parent: Demios
Claimed: No
Mortal Family: Jason Greene (Stepdad) Angela Cross Greene (Mother)
Years in Camp: 3
Brief History: Elijah spent many years in Hermes cabin and still awaits to be claimed by his father. When he was a boy he caused many animals and children to feel afriad of him but is trully a kind spirit. He came to camp after an encounter with a Drachanae and has ever since felt outcast by all those he sees. He only desires to know his father and control his powers.
Physical Appearance: Around 6' 1" and skinny, Elijah is not built for war yet he has shown a great deal of speed with the sword and dagger. He has short black hair and deep grey and blue eyes with a olive complection. There is a scar on his chest where he took a blow from Clarrise before using his powers in anger causing her to see him as a major threat.
Personality: Quiet and reserved, Elijah is a sweet young man with quite a temper. He loves to help others but he feels his powers are a curse as if he were hideous. He cares nothing for himself but will die for his friends in battle. In all aspects he is opposite of his father.
Fatal Flaw: His compassion
Pets: None
Talents: Swordarts, aura of fear, and chariot racing.
Weapons: A Celestial Bronze sword with a 2 3/4 fott blade and a 1 foot hilt.
Year-Round or Summer: After his parents abandoned him he became a year round.
Other:

Hey, ElijahCross!

You might want to take the brief history back a little further. What was life like at home? Did he make any friends? When did he run away to Camp?

I love how you put "Aura of Fear" in the talent catagory. Those are all his camp-learned talents, but what about his regular talents? Is it painting, or drawing? How about running or swimming?

Otherwise than those few tips, your character is great! Nice job! I'm nobody to accept characters, but I would if I could!