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 |  Subject: Zelly27's Character(s)  Fri May 13, 2011 4:12 am | |
| My Accepted Characters
- Hamish Smide, Son of Athena:
Hamish Smide, Son of Athena Name: Hamish Smide. Age/Birthday: 11, but nearly 12 Years Old, Born on the 23rd of May. Gender: Male. God Parent: Athena. Claimed: No. Mortal Family: Father - John Smide, Architect. Maori. Years in Camp: None. Brief History: Hamish was born in the New Zealand city of Dunedin. He lived with his father. Hamish was never told much about his mother. At the age of 9, he searched all records he could find for traces of his mother, but gave up, and has never searched since. Due to his fathers work, Hamish was forced to move to New York a few months before his twelfth birthday. It was there, that strange things really started happening... Physical Appearance: Hamish has light-ish dark skin (If that makes sense DX), black hair, and brown eyes. He looks just like his father. He is slightly taller than your average 11/12 year-old, but not by much. He wouldn't be considered super strong, but not super weak, somewhere in the middle. Personality: Hamish is quite serious most of the time. School will mostly come before fun for Hamish. He can stand most people, but when he finds someone he finds very annoying, rude, or mean to him or his friends, he might just snap. Not in visible way, like attacking the person, but inside. If he sets his mind to it, he will find a way to get his revenge without anyone being able to tell he had done a thing. Hamish is very intelligent, and often will suddenly get an idea in his mind, and Google it thousands of times until he is happy with his infomation. This is never easy, as he has Dyslexia, making it hard to read. Fatal Flaws/Bad Traits/Isues: - With some things, Hamish would stop at nothing to get his revenge. - Dyslexia - ADHD Pets: None. Talents: Hamish took Taekwon-Do classes for a year, where he excelled a self-defense, sparring, and had a lot of trouble with Step-Sparring. Weapons: None, as of yet. Year-Round or Summer: ... Other: ...
- Jimmy Lance, Son of Apollo:
Jimmy Lance
Full Name: Jimmy Joseph Lance
Nickname: J.J (Given by Satyr)
Age/Birthday: 6 Years Old, Born 15th June
Gender: Male
God Parent: Apollo
Claimed: Yes
Mortal Family: Anita Lance (Deceased)
Years in Camp: ...
Brief History: Jimmy was born to Anita Lance, a musician. After his mother was killed by an ABUSIVE STEPFATHER, he ran away, and was lucky enough to meet a satyr. He developed a very close relationship with the satyr on their journey to Camp Half-Blood.
One night, they made a fire on the banks of the Mississippi, and to cheer Jimmy up on that cold night, John, the satyr, played his pipes, and Jimmy started singing (he is an excellent singer). It was then, when the boy’s spirit was at its best, he was claimed by his father.
It was also then, that John gave him his first weapon: a celestial bronze dagger, in a perfect size for Jimmy.
Physical Appearance: Jimmy is about a metre tall, with blond hair, and bright blue eyes. He never tries to, but often has older girls marvelling at his cuteness. He is not very skinny, but definitely not fat, he is a healthy weight. Clothing doesn’t matter to him, so he is usually found in anything he can find in his pile of clothes.
Personality: Jimmy is a very bubbly boy, who loves to play and laugh. He is often wearing a huge grin. A real smile. He is not one of the people who smiles half-heartedly, he smiles with his whole face. His eyes, his mouth, his ears…
He loves sporty things, especially soccer, and swimming. He is frightened of heights. Well, not really heights. More of falling.
Fatal Flaw: Trust - Jimmy tends to trust most people, though it might be because of his age. It could quite possibly be the end of him.
Other flaws: He, like all boys of his age, loves lolly-type-things, especially Ice-Cream. Say no, and you'll be sorry.
When Jimmy throws a tantrum, it is a tantrum. With the screaming and the crying and the banging and the hitting stuff with his head... Kinda like a toddler...
Pets: Jimmy has no pets, but longs for a puppy.
Talents: Singing, Doing his Michael Jackson dance moves, Soccer, Swimming, and making people laugh.
Weapons: Celestial Bronze Dagger
Year-Round or Summer: Year-
Round
- Mitch Harvard, Son of Aphrodite:
Mitch Harvard, Son of Aphrodite
Full Name: Mitch Josh Harvard
Nickname: None
Age/Birthday: Born 25th May, 2011, Robert is aged 12.
Gender: Male
God Parent: Aphrodite
Claimed: Yes
Mortal Family: Robert 'Robbie' Harvard
(Father)
Years in Camp: Two - Mitch has been at Camp since he was ten.
Brief History: Robbie Harvard caught the eye of Aphrodite in his first month of being on the New Zealand rugby team. Together, the pair created the life form known as Mitch. The baby appeared on Robert's doorstep in a cradle coloured to look great against the child's eyes.
During his time with his father, Mitch followed his father to all his games. Robbie, not wanting to put his son through the thing called 'Fame', kept him in the background. During games, he would watch his father play on a TV, at the Stadium, but not in the stands. During this time, he would kick around a rugby ball of his own, often to the displeasure of the owners of the stadium.
He first started playing rugby from a young age, it being his passion.
When Mitch was at the age of 10, Aphrodite contacted Robbie through a dream, and told him about Camp Half-Blood - a subject never spoken of in their very brief union. She said that Mitch was now at the age a lot of the campers were at when they entered camp. So, for a holiday, Mitch's father took him to the United States, where Robbie revealed to Mitch his true parentage. Reluctantly, the ten year-old agreed to go to Camp, where he met his siblings.
Physical Appearance: Mitch has dark hair, and straight, black eyebrows to go with it. His eyes are a deep brown colour, the home-y colour of earth. In height, he is about average for his age group, if not a little bit taller. His skin is olive-shaded.
Unlike a lot of his Aphrodite siblings, he is not strikingly beautiful, or handsome, nor does he care for fashion. In many ways, he is the opposite his siblings physically - he prefers to go out and do things, and has a body made for going out and doing things, instead of having a body made for sitting around and fixing up make-up.
Personality: Mitch's personality is a outgoing one - he has no problem socializing or saying, "Yes," to new opportunities. He gets annoyed quite easily, and has a super-glare ready for those people that annoy him. It's a full-on, steady, super-emotional stare. It has a similar affect to charmspeak - but it doesn't make people do what he wants, it forces the, to do what he wants with emotion. They remember everything they've done.
Mitch is loyal to his friends. Super, super loyal. (More on this later)
He is in love with rugby, a love passed on by his father. Because of this, he doesn't care about a little bit of mud here, or a little bit of grass growing there...
Mitch is a sport-lover. So, naturally, even though he isn't the best at it, he loves it at the arena at Camp. He loves it just because it is fun, not because it's something he's really good at (in fact, most people could beat him in a fight while he's at his current skill level. But that doesn't mean he can't fight. He is best at defense, and dodging swipes - this is due to his rugby playing, and ADHD. But he still isn't that good, and most people can beat him.)
He has never dated anyone, but he's the sort of person where if he loves someone, he would never cheat on them. It ties in with his loyalty thing. True, unwavering love.
Fatal Flaw: Loyalty - Mitch is loyal to his friends and family in a very powerful kind of way. To get
family member or friend back, he would do anything.
Pets: None.
Talents: Mitch has his super-glare, and is also a excellent rugby player. He also has ADHD and Dyslexia, like most Demigods.
Weapons:
Year-Round or Summer: Year-Round.
- Jacob Hoffer, Son of Dionysus:
goodbye, goodbye to all of this
jacob hoffer
i've got this golden ship; oh say it can save me
Full Name: Jacob John Hoffer
Age: Born 16th of October, Jacob is aged eleven.
Godly Parent: Dionysus, God of Wine.
Years at Camp Half-Blood:
History: Jacob Matthew Hoffer was born to to Laura Hoffer, a young party animal. She was unstable, she had money troubles, and was always going out partying. She caught the attention of Dionysus, God of Wine. They were together for a week, and during that time, Laura got pregnant. Then Dionysus, under the name of Jacob Clark, disappeared. Laura had a nervous break down. She went mad. Jacob Hoffer was born in a mental institute.
He was, of course, taken away from his mother at once, and placed in a orphanage, where he caught the attention of a Satyr, who took him to Camp Half-Blood, where Jacob was claimed by his father, the moment he stepped over the boundary line. He was eight at the time. He met his father for the first time.
After two years at Camp, Jacob began to feel weak, dizzy, and sick. He was diagnosed by mortal doctors to have Leukaemia, a cancer of the blood cells. It made him sad, and he ended up hiding in his cabin a lot. But then his siblings took (though they had to force him to let them take him) him to the beach, where they had tried to make him happy again by just giving him a good time. They were successful.
But now, he doesn't let it let him down. He hasn't died. His siblings are party animals who always manage to cheer him up. His disease has given him a new look on life. It has made him one of the most optimistic people you can find.
Physical Description: Jacob wouldn't be described as fat, but stubby. He isn't that tall, because of his fathers genes, but quite short. He has short blond hair (short because of chemotherapy) and deep-blue eyes, almost purple. A grin is usually found on his face. Jacob is a optimist (see history section).
Personality: Jacob is a outgoing person, who loves to go out and fun. He doesn't let his disease get the better of him (though he did once - see history section). He inherited many traits from his father, including his love of partying and social occasions. He is quick to get annoyed, but when he is, it isn't that visible. He isn't the 'I'm gonna beat you up' annoyed type, but the 'I'm gonna stare at you and say stuff type.
Talents/Powers: Jacob has the power over vines common in most of his siblings. He can make most vines, especially grapes, grow like crazy, in any shape he likes. He can make grapevines grow anywhere. Things like shaped and growing vines make him very tired, especially if he's trying to make them grow in a place they would normally be unable to grow in.
Jacob also has a small power over mad people - he can make them say short sentences sanely, which is handy for when he visits his mother. But that's the only thing he can do, and it's very hard for him. Sometimes it doesn't actually work.
Pets: Jacob has a pet Cat, called Gopter. Gopter is a small tabby, who loves to lie in his water bowl. Extremely loyal, he spends most of his time in the Dionysus cabin, on Jacob's bunk, though he does enjoy chasing bugs in the strawberry fields.
Weapons: Though he isn't a fight-y kinda guy, Jacob has a celestial bronze sword called Joe he uses in CTF and other events. It's a normal sword - it doesn't do anything special like turn into a carrot.
Other: Jacob is a year-round camper, but he often makes trips to see his mother, and to the mortal hospital.
Last edited by Zelly27 on Fri Jul 08, 2011 5:54 pm; edited 4 times in total |
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| | Subject: Re: Zelly27's Character(s) Fri May 13, 2011 7:43 am | |
| Everything looks pretty good, but I don't understand how ADHD and Dyslexia could be a flaw for a demigod. ADHD is their battle reflexes, which could be very useful; dyslexia helps them read ancient Greek as well.
Nonetheless, everything looks pretty good. Great character! I can't wait to start roleplaying with you. (: | |
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| | Subject: Re: Zelly27's Character(s) Fri May 13, 2011 12:10 pm | |
| ^like what Bre said, I don't get the ADHD and Dyslexic as a flaw. O.O
Oh, love your charrie. It's good to see some new members to have awesome charries. x] | |
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| | Subject: Re: Zelly27's Character(s) Fri May 13, 2011 1:26 pm | |
| Thanks :)
I put them has flaws because I wrote that from mortal point of view, where it would be a flaw/issue/bad trait :D
... And the reason I did that is because he doesn't know he's demigod yet :)
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| | Subject: Re: Zelly27's Character(s) Fri May 13, 2011 4:08 pm | |
| I think it's good with the revenge thing, though. ^^ | |
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| | Subject: Re: Zelly27's Character(s) Fri May 13, 2011 7:03 pm | |
| Welcome to Camp Half-Blood! Hamish is accepted! |
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| | Subject: Re: Zelly27's Character(s) Mon May 16, 2011 1:09 am | |
| - Jimmy Lance, Son of Apollo:
Jimmy Lance
Full Name: Jimmy Joseph Lance
Nickname: J.J (Given by Satyr)
Age/Birthday: 6 Years Old, Born 15th June
Gender: Male
God Parent: Apollo
Claimed: Yes
Mortal Family: Anita Lance (Deceased)
Years in Camp: ...
Brief History: Jimmy was born to Anita Lance, a musician. After his mother was killed by an ABUSIVE STEPFATHER, he ran away, and was lucky enough to meet a satyr. He developed a very close relationship with the satyr on their journey to Camp Half-Blood.
One night, they made a fire on the banks of the Mississippi, and to cheer Jimmy up on that cold night, John, the satyr, played his pipes, and Jimmy started singing (he is an excellent singer). It was then, when the boy’s spirit was at its best, he was claimed by his father.
It was also then, that John gave him his first weapon: a celestial bronze dagger, in a perfect size for Jimmy.
Physical Appearance: Jimmy is about a metre tall, with blond hair, and bright blue eyes. He never tries to, but often has older girls marvelling at his cuteness. He is not very skinny, but definitely not fat, he is a healthy weight. Clothing doesn’t matter to him, so he is usually found in anything he can find in his pile of clothes.
Personality: Jimmy is a very bubbly boy, who loves to play and laugh. He is often wearing a huge grin. A real smile. He is not one of the people who smiles half-heartedly, he smiles with his whole face. His eyes, his mouth, his ears…
He loves sporty things, especially soccer, and swimming. He is frightened of heights. Well, not really heights. More of falling.
Fatal Flaw: Trust - Jimmy tends to trust most people, though it might be because of his age. It could quite possibly be the end of him.
Other flaws: He, like all boys of his age, loves lolly-type-things, especially Ice-Cream. Say no, and you'll be sorry.
When Jimmy throws a tantrum, it is a tantrum. With the screaming and the crying and the banging and the hitting stuff with his head... Kinda like a toddler...
Pets: Jimmy has no pets, but longs for a puppy.
Talents: Singing, Doing his Michael Jackson dance moves, Soccer, Swimming, and making people laugh.
Weapons: Celestial Bronze Dagger
Year-Round or Summer: Year-
Round
Last edited by Zelly27 on Mon May 16, 2011 1:22 pm; edited 1 time in total |
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| | Subject: Re: Zelly27's Character(s) Mon May 16, 2011 7:36 am | |
| Nice character! Maybe just a few more flaws personality-wise though? |
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| | Subject: Re: Zelly27's Character(s) Mon May 16, 2011 1:25 pm | |
| That's odd. I had added a few more in last night, and they've dissapeared. And I can't remember what they were DX
Anyway, I've added two more on, don't know if that's enough...
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| | Subject: Re: Zelly27's Character(s) Tue May 17, 2011 4:37 am | |
| You want me to tell you again the flaws I offered Zel? | |
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| | Subject: Re: Zelly27's Character(s) Tue May 17, 2011 6:12 am | |
| Yes, please, Death. That would be awesome :D |
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| | Subject: Re: Zelly27's Character(s) Tue May 17, 2011 7:07 am | |
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| | Subject: Re: Zelly27's Character(s) Tue May 17, 2011 10:29 am | |
| - Spoiler:
He loves to play, and definitely, like all 6 year olds, he hates to work. He isn't very comfortable with a serious atmosphere to live in, and he quite gets a little too over whelmed with life's fullest whenever he gets some sugar in his system.
Well, he's already accepted, but I think it doesn't hurt to write some flaws down... | |
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| | Subject: Re: Zelly27's Character(s) Fri Jul 01, 2011 6:00 am | |
| - Mitch Harvard:
Full Name: Mitch Josh Harvard
Nickname: None
Age/Birthday: Born 25th May, 2011, Robert is aged 12.
Gender: Male
God Parent: Aphrodite
Claimed: Yes
Mortal Family: Robert 'Robbie' Harvard
(Father)
Years in Camp: Two - Mitch has been at Camp since he was ten.
Brief History: Robbie Harvard caught the eye of Aphrodite in his first month of being on the New Zealand rugby team. Together, the pair created the life form known as Mitch. The baby appeared on Robert's doorstep in a cradle coloured to look great against the child's eyes.
During his time with his father, Mitch followed his father to all his games. Robbie, not wanting to put his son through the thing called 'Fame', kept him in the background. During games, he would watch his father play on a TV, at the Stadium, but not in the stands. During this time, he would kick around a rugby ball of his own, often to the displeasure of the owners of the stadium.
He first started playing rugby from a young age, it being his passion.
When Mitch was at the age of 10, Aphrodite contacted Robbie through a dream, and told him about Camp Half-Blood - a subject never spoken of in their very brief union. She said that Mitch was now at the age a lot of the campers were at when they entered camp. So, for a holiday, Mitch's father took him to the United States, where Robbie revealed to Mitch his true parentage. Reluctantly, the ten year-old agreed to go to Camp, where he met his siblings.
Physical Appearance: Mitch has dark hair, and straight, black eyebrows to go with it. His eyes are a deep brown colour, the home-y colour of earth. In height, he is about average for his age group, if not a little bit taller. His skin is olive-shaded.
Unlike a lot of his Aphrodite siblings, he is not strikingly beautiful, or handsome, nor does he care for fashion. In many ways, he is the opposite his siblings physically - he prefers to go out and do things, and has a body made for going out and doing things, instead of having a body made for sitting around and fixing up make-up.
Personality: Mitch's personality is a outgoing one - he has no problem socializing or saying, "Yes," to new opportunities. He gets annoyed quite easily, and has a super-glare ready for those people that annoy him. It's a full-on, steady, super-emotional stare. It has a similar affect to charmspeak - but it doesn't make people do what he wants, it forces the, to do what he wants with emotion. They remember everything they've done.
Mitch is loyal to his friends. Super, super loyal. (More on this later)
He is in love with rugby, a love passed on by his father. Because of this, he doesn't care about a little bit of mud here, or a little bit of grass growing there...
Mitch is a sport-lover. So, naturally, even though he isn't the best at it, he loves it at the arena at Camp. He loves it just because it is fun, not because it's something he's really good at (in fact, most people could beat him in a fight while he's at his current skill level. But that doesn't mean he can't fight. He is best at defense, and dodging swipes - this is due to his rugby playing, and ADHD. But he still isn't that good, and most people can beat him.)
He has never dated anyone, but he's the sort of person where if he loves someone, he would never cheat on them. It ties in with his loyalty thing. True, unwavering love.
Fatal Flaw: Loyalty - Mitch is loyal to his friends and family in a very powerful kind of way. To get
family member or friend back, he would do anything.
Pets: None.
Talents: Mitch has his super-glare, and is also a excellent rugby player. He also has ADHD and Dyslexia, like most Demigods.
Weapons:
Year-Round or Summer: Year-Round.
Last edited by Zelly27 on Sat Jul 02, 2011 5:48 pm; edited 1 time in total |
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| | Subject: Re: Zelly27's Character(s) Sat Jul 02, 2011 1:25 am | |
| He's a great character. Look over it one more time (just for cause) and It's accepted.
ACCEPTED | |
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| | Subject: Re: Zelly27's Character(s) Mon Jul 04, 2011 2:47 pm | |
| goodbye, goodbye to all of this
jacob hoffer
i've got this golden ship; oh say it can save me
Full Name: Jacob John Hoffer
Age: Born 16th of October, Jacob is aged eleven.
Godly Parent: Dionysus, God of Wine.
Years at Camp Half-Blood:
History: Jacob Matthew Hoffer was born to to Laura Hoffer, a young party animal. She was unstable, she had money troubles, and was always going out partying. She caught the attention of Dionysus, God of Wine. They were together for a week, and during that time, Laura got pregnant. Then Dionysus, under the name of Jacob Clark, disappeared. Laura had a nervous break down. She went mad. Jacob Hoffer was born in a mental institute.
He was, of course, taken away from his mother at once, and placed in a orphanage, where he caught the attention of a Satyr, who took him to Camp Half-Blood, where Jacob was claimed by his father, the moment he stepped over the boundary line. He was eight at the time. He met his father for the first time.
After two years at Camp, Jacob began to feel weak, dizzy, and sick. He was diagnosed by mortal doctors to have Leukaemia, a cancer of the blood cells. It made him sad, and he ended up hiding in his cabin a lot. But then his siblings took (though they had to force him to let them take him) him to the beach, where they had tried to make him happy again by just giving him a good time. They were successful.
But now, he doesn't let it let him down. He hasn't died. His siblings are party animals who always manage to cheer him up. His disease has given him a new look on life. It has made him one of the most optimistic people you can find.
Physical Description: Jacob wouldn't be described as fat, but stubby. He isn't that tall, because of his fathers genes, but quite short. He has short blond hair (short because of chemotherapy) and deep-blue eyes, almost purple. A grin is usually found on his face. Jacob is a optimist (see history section).
Personality: Jacob is a outgoing person, who loves to go out and fun. He doesn't let his disease get the better of him (though he did once - see history section). He inherited many traits from his father, including his love of partying and social occasions. He is quick to get annoyed, but when he is, it isn't that visible. He isn't the 'I'm gonna beat you up' annoyed type, but the 'I'm gonna stare at you and say stuff type.
Talents/Powers: Jacob has the power over vines common in most of his siblings. He can make most vines, especially grapes, grow like crazy, in any shape he likes. He can make grapevines grow anywhere. Things like shaped and growing vines make him very tired, especially if he's trying to make them grow in a place they would normally be unable to grow in.
Jacob also has a small power over mad people - he can make them say short sentences sanely, which is handy for when he visits his mother. But that's the only thing he can do, and it's very hard for him. Sometimes it doesn't actually work.
Pets: Jacob has a pet Cat, called Gopter. Gopter is a small tabby, who loves to lie in his water bowl. Extremely loyal, he spends most of his time in the Dionysus cabin, on Jacob's bunk, though he does enjoy chasing bugs in the strawberry fields.
Weapons: Though he isn't a fight-y kinda guy, Jacob has a celestial bronze sword called Joe he uses in CTF and other events. It's a normal sword - it doesn't do anything special like turn into a carrot.
Other: Jacob is a year-round camper, but he often makes trips to see his mother, and to the mortal hospital.
Last edited by Zelly27 on Fri Jul 08, 2011 2:43 am; edited 2 times in total |
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| | Subject: Re: Zelly27's Character(s) Mon Jul 04, 2011 3:06 pm | |
| He's good, he just needs one more sentence for personality, and then I'll accept him! | |
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| | Subject: Re: Zelly27's Character(s) Thu Jul 07, 2011 2:28 pm | |
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| | Subject: Re: Zelly27's Character(s) Thu Jul 07, 2011 7:22 pm | |
| I don't see any other sentence. It's still 3 sentences long. That (...) thing doesn't count as a sentence, since it was connected to the sentence before it. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Zelly27's Character(s) Fri Jul 08, 2011 2:36 am | |
| Wha? I'm sure I added something.
OH. I SEE. I added to the spoiler and not the normal bit.
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| | Subject: Re: Zelly27's Character(s) Fri Jul 08, 2011 3:46 pm | |
| Okay! Thanks for editing! He's accepted! | |
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