Jake Hawk (Character Acceptance Needed)

Half-Bloods
Name: Jake Hawk
Age/Birthday: 12/February 17 1999
Gender:Male
God Parent: N/A
Claimed: No
Mortal Family: Sally Hawk (Mom)
Years in Camp:None
Brief History: I used to live San Francisco with my mom at my aunts house but we had to leave 3 years ago. My mom wouldn't tell me why and she wouldn't let me see my aunt anymore. We moved to Washington D.C. where I went to RT McDonald Private School for two years. Then, two years ago, I was picked up from school by my mom and went straight to NY city where we moved into an apartment. To this day she still wont tell me what happened. Then last week funny things started happening; mom came home with a new car...twice, she hired a personal guard for me who disapeared and we couldn't find him, we moved to a different apartment, and (to top it off) my mom disapeared and Nathan appeared. Nathan introduced himself as a distant cousin of mine who would take me to his Grandparents farm in New York. I asked him if he knew where my mom was and he said something about 'FBI Agent'...yeah, uhuh. We came here on busses, trains and Taxi's changing rapidly every time he got a scared look on his face and we ended up here; a place he calls Camp Half-Blood where kids hide from monsters that have been released from Tartarus after they reform unless they fade...and now my head is spinning.
Physical Appearance: I am five foot 6 and weigh about 115 lbs (although I have prbably lost 10 pounds recently). I'm not really muscular although I'm very fast and agile. I have Brown hair and brown eyes. I dress to the occasion no matter what I'm doing. You could sometimes catch my mind wondering absent mindfully messing something up.
Personality: I'm quiet unless I know you really well. People tend to like me unless I dont like them. I'm cheerful and happy most of the time, and serious when I'm doing something important. So far everyone I've met at Camp Half-Blood says I'm supposed to have ADHD, but I can alway concentrate well in school.
Fatal Flaw: I still don't quite understand what everyone means by this. But they say I'll find mine eventually.
Pets: I use to have a cat! But I dont think that counts...
Talents: Um...Guitar, Knuckle-ball...that kind of stuff?
Weapons: I know how to shoot a gun really well.
Year-Round or Summer: um...
Other:

you should add some more to Physical Appearance ande Personality, needs to be 4 sentences minimum. and you need to have a god parent aswell

couldn't I add that after I'm claimed? I mean it gives the option of 'Claim or Unclaimed: Yes or No' so that implies that the character doesn't know who his God parent is. Besides I kind of want to get use to the way this works before I 'get claimed' because really only I can change that. Other wise that would be Powerplaying. So I could let that slip for now right? Or is it an unwritten rule for two parts of Charrie Sign-up form to contradict themselves on a daily basis?

Sorry, Oly. But you need at least four complete sentences in Physical appearance. You'll need at least one more sentence.
And just our of curiosity, what godly parent were you planning on?

Oh yeah I meant to say I was going to fix the Physique. And I haven't decided on anything yet. Though I'm familiar with ALL of the Greek and Roman Gods, I was going to let the character develop itself (of course through my manipulation) and eventually get Jake claimed. Though I do have some favorites which may end up swaying a final decision.

we do need to know which god you plan on using before we can approve it, because some of the gods are either foribidden, or have special requirments, and that way you wont be able to chose the most powerful god out there.

Arch is right, could you possibly list a few options of what you had in mind? No Roman gods though...since out site is "Pre- The Last Olympian", the Roman Camp isn't known about yet. The Roman restriction may change in the future, but for now they're off limits.

I was thinking Hephaestus, Athena, Nyx, Dionysus, Hecate or Ares. That is I really wouldn't consider Zues, Poseidon, ( Big Three), Hera, Artemis or Hestia (Maidens) or any others cause I dont like them really :(

Alright, since you seem to know the basis of what we allow and what we don't, he's Accepted. ^^ Thanks for humoring me, Oly. xD

YAY! Thank Ya'll!