The black hole called me.

Subject: The black hole called me. Sun Jan 30, 2011 2:00 pm

I hunkered my bahootie down in the bushes. " Jade couldn't have gone to far." I heard a gruff man voice say. True but I'm smarter than your average bear or average human, I thought smirking. "Hey." A voice whispered in my ear, causing me to almost reveal my hiding spot. "It's me, Jade. You know Rocky." He said flashing me with a white smile. "Oh, you nearly gave me a heart attack." I hissed under my breath. He shrugged. I listen and sighed. "let's beat it Rocky." I said stalking off. Now for all of you who haven't caught on just yet, my name is Jade. The other fellow just so happens to be my best friend Rocky. We've lived in Montana at a place called Heaven's Home For Children. In short an orphanage for kids like me and Rocky. We're smarter than most peaple, we are little einsteins. Only one catch. We aren't allowed to leave. None of us ever get adopted, and when we are 18 we have to work here. That's why Rocky and I are leaving here for good. Turning around I see Rocky following me, his blonde shaggy hair glistened in the moon light. I waved for him to come on. Again a grin that ok, i'll confess, sends me into a pile of girl drool. he hurried up next to me and we crawled through the underbrush to the fence. "Ok ready?'' I asked pushing aside my wavy red hair. "Yup." He said. We both quickly climbed the fence and then. "We're free! Rocky, we are FREE!" I shouted in glee. Rocky wrapped his arms around me in a bear hug. "Yeah we are, Jade." he whispered

Subject: Re: The black hole called me. Sun Jan 30, 2011 3:27 pm

It was kind of confusing at the beginning, but it seems pretty good so far :]

Subject: Re: The black hole called me. Sun Jan 30, 2011 4:15 pm

thanks

Subject: Re: The black hole called me. Mon Jan 31, 2011 6:08 pm

--Nice start. :D --

Subject: Re: The black hole called me. Mon Jan 31, 2011 6:13 pm

thanks

Subject: Re: The black hole called me. Mon Jan 31, 2011 6:47 pm

I like it... :D--Ninja

Subject: Re: The black hole called me. Tue Feb 01, 2011 1:48 pm

thanks.

Subject: Re: The black hole called me. Sat Feb 12, 2011 10:21 pm

K new story.

My tears flowed silently. I was silent and yet all I wish some one would scream or yell. I took a breath and put the gun's barrel to my right temple. Closing my eyes I prayed a silent prayer. Just as I was about to pull the trigger, hands grabbed me and the gun. Voices blurred. " Silvvy! Why did you try to-" my mom started to choke up. I stayed silent.

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