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 The Broken Heart || by My Older Brother, Jayson.

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Baby Lex
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PostSubject: The Broken Heart || by My Older Brother, Jayson.   The Broken Heart || by My Older Brother, Jayson. I_icon_minitimeSun Jan 16, 2011 10:11 am

My older brother, Jayson, had just got dumped by Holli, his girlfriend, and I raided his room. Prepare to be not-so-amazed!

The Broken Heart

She walks up
I stare, smiling
She frowns.

"What's wrong?" I ask
"I can't do this," she says.
I get what she means.

The door closes
And I'm left
With only my damaged heart.


OMG Amazing, right?
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PostSubject: Re: The Broken Heart || by My Older Brother, Jayson.   The Broken Heart || by My Older Brother, Jayson. I_icon_minitimeWed Jan 26, 2011 10:09 pm

--Lol, poetic. Epic. BOTH.--
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PostSubject: Re: The Broken Heart || by My Older Brother, Jayson.   The Broken Heart || by My Older Brother, Jayson. I_icon_minitimeThu Jan 27, 2011 3:31 pm

I LOVE IT. Rmeinds me of Seth... Except sad... So... epically emotional! Your brother has skills!
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PostSubject: Re: The Broken Heart || by My Older Brother, Jayson.   The Broken Heart || by My Older Brother, Jayson. I_icon_minitimeThu Jan 27, 2011 6:16 pm

...Wow?
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PostSubject: Re: The Broken Heart || by My Older Brother, Jayson.   The Broken Heart || by My Older Brother, Jayson. I_icon_minitimeThu Jan 27, 2011 6:23 pm

It's good. Ilikeit.
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PostSubject: Re: The Broken Heart || by My Older Brother, Jayson.   The Broken Heart || by My Older Brother, Jayson. I_icon_minitimeMon Jan 31, 2011 6:09 pm

--It is like the things I would write when I'm mad. Still epic.--
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