Sophia and Maddie's EMO POEM.

Subject: Sophia and Maddie's EMO POEM. Thu Jan 06, 2011 7:24 pm

"THE BLOODY KNIFE

She laughs
He smiles
The first time for a while
She tells him, "No"
He cries

His heart
On fire

The knife glistens
His skin opens
A heart on his wrist

He smiles
From the pain."

Explanation? My friend, Sophia, and I made an "emo" poem about our "friend", ~~Cypress~~Bob. He got rejected by a girl he liked, and carved a heart in his wrist, with a knife. That might not be exactly it (the poem), Sophia and I gave him the poem xD But yeah...
(the cutters name has been changed so you won't know it xD)

Guest

It's nice; I was expecting more mystery, but I love it. You emo Moo. xD

Subject: Re: Sophia and Maddie's EMO POEM. Thu Jan 06, 2011 7:28 pm

BUT IT'S ACTUALLY TRUE xD

Guest

I NEVER SAID IT WASN'T. xD Add more description, though. I like all the descriptive-ness.

Subject: Re: Sophia and Maddie's EMO POEM. Thu Jan 06, 2011 7:32 pm

Yeah, but we wanted it to be more emo like. 'Cause I guess "emo" poems aren't like, "He asked her out, but was rejected. Tears. Blah blah blah" all descriptive-like.
We also wrote about our friends' love and our duck-looking enemy. Both sort of emo xD

Guest

"I watched scarlet liquid flow down the thin membrane,
piercing my porcelain skin;
staining the ugly imperfections
that I may say is my life."

I wrote that because I like writing emo. xD This is what I mean.

Subject: Re: Sophia and Maddie's EMO POEM. Thu Jan 06, 2011 8:35 pm

Amazing xD

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I love how the topic title is black and unreadable. :D

Subject: Re: Sophia and Maddie's EMO POEM. Thu Jan 06, 2011 10:21 pm

Uhuh[:

Subject: Re: Sophia and Maddie's EMO POEM. Fri Jan 07, 2011 5:02 pm

Interesting xP

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