what's this? a new charrie? that still needs approving?

okay, here we go!
Name:Cathy White,
Age/Birthday: March 20th 1996
Gender: girl
Time at camp: 2 years
God parent:Iris, goddess of the rainbow and messaging
Mortal Parent; father: Jack White
Physical Appearance: Dirty Blond(e) shoulder length hair with blue and purple streaks in straight bangs, bangs stop just above her eyebrows, a little chubby, blue-green eyes, few freckles across face, slightly below average height
personality, a little clumsy and crazy. loves acting, always loves to meet new people. Confident but confidence wavers when she is unsure of herself, or her friends.
Pets:A hamster, named Jimmie. Jimmie is dark Orange with a few multi-colored paint specks on him from Cathy using the speckling effect on her paintings.
weapons, a braided multi-coloured bracelet on her wrist forms a sliver shield with streaks of paint across it when you press the sliver bead in the center. Her Necklace, which is her name each letter a different colour, if you press the engraved ‘ phi ’ on the back turns into a 1 1/2 foot celestial bronze sword.
Talents: She acts, and some of her paintings have been displayed at her mortal school in Maine.
Other: Step-mother Ally Smith-White, whom she despises but puts up with for her dad. Step brother Thomas Smith. Thomas is the same age as her, and they get along pretty well, but there is times when the have a real brother/sister relation ship(i.e. wrestling over the remote, arguing over something that really doesn't matter)
OK! there it is!! :) is too Mary-Sue-ish? Or does it need more Mary-Sue-ish qualities? just tell me what needs to be adjusted!!

You need to stick with one color, hun.

Once you've done that, accepted.

Name:Cathy White,
Age/Birthday: March 20th 1996
Gender: girl
Time at camp: 2 years
God parent:Iris, goddess of the rainbow and messaging
Mortal Parent; father: Jack White
Physical Appearance: Dirty Blond(e) shoulder length hair with blue and purple streaks in straight bangs, bangs stop just above her eyebrows, a little chubby, blue-green eyes, few freckles across face, slightly below average height
personality, a little clumsy and crazy. loves acting, always loves to meet new people. Confident but confidence wavers when she is unsure of herself, or her friends.
Pets:A hamster, named Jimmie. Jimmie is dark Orange with a few multi-colored paint specks on him from Cathy using the speckling effect on her paintings.
weapons, a braided multi-coloured bracelet on her wrist forms a sliver shield with streaks of paint across it when you press the sliver bead in the center. Her Necklace, which is her name each letter a different colour, if you press the engraved ‘ phi ’ on the back turns into a 1 1/2 foot celestial bronze sword.
Talents: She acts, and some of her paintings have been displayed at her mortal school in Maine.
Other: Step-mother Ally Smith-White, whom she despises but puts up with for her dad. Step brother Thomas Smith. Thomas is the same age as her, and they get along pretty well, but there is times when the have a real brother/sister relation ship(i.e. wrestling over the remote, arguing over something that really doesn't matter)
there we go :) ok, thanks!

Accepted

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