Echo92's New Character! NEEDS ACCEPTING!!!

Subject: Echo92's New Character! *NEEDS ACCEPTING!!!* Mon May 07, 2012 6:12 pm

Name:
Anthony Collins

Age/Birthday:
16; December 14, 1996

Godly Parent:
Khione

Mortal Family:
Steven Collins (father) Jennifer Collins (stepmother) Hunter Collins (Older Brother) Kevin Collins (Little Brother) Hannah Collins (Little Sister)

Claimed:
Yes

Years at Camp:
Zero

Personality:
Anthony mostly keeps to himself. He can get peppy at times, but he stays calm most of the time. He is picky. He hates really happy people, considering he's goth. If you bother him, he will probably scream at you.

Physical Appearance:
As the picture shows, he has black hair and dark brown eyes. He has a few piercings, but not too many. He is goth, the only in his family who is. Anthony is also blind, but he deals with it.

History:
Anthony was born blind. His stepmother, Jennifer, was a jerk to him. His father, Steven, tried to get Jennifer to warm up to Anthony, but she never did. She thought he was a waste of time, since he was blind. To creep away from his stepmother, he became goth. She kept an even bigger distance, which is what he wanted. He also kept to himself. His older brother, Hunter, helped Anthony out in his younger years, leading him to place he couldn't get to himself. Hunter is a big role model to Anthony. When Anthony was 14, he got his first girlfriend. Her name was Kathrine. He thought they would be together forever. Then, one day they were walking home, when a monster took Kathrine and ran away. Anthony ran in the general direction of her screams, but he ended up getting hit by a car. He went to the hospital, and got out just fine, like nothing had happened. Two years later, he ran away. He hated his stepmother, and couldn't stop thinking about Kathrine. He ran all the way to Long Island Sound. He could smell the strawberries, and he was starving. He ran towards the entrance of camp, and scarfed down the strawberries. Chiron took him in.

Fatal Flaw:
Grudges. He has so many grudges, he can't keep count. He hates his stepmother, the monster that took Kathrine, and many other people.

Preferred Weapon:
Anthony prefers a short sword he made out of dry ice and bits of celestial bronze, in honor of his mother.

Other:
N/A

Anthony Collins is Accepted!

Last edited by Echo92 on Tue May 15, 2012 10:31 pm; edited 1 time in total

**NEW CHARACTER**

Name:
"Name's Tracy."
Tracy Lillian Guo

Godly Parent:
"My dad's Hermes."
Hermes

Mortal Family:
"I have my mom, Katie. My stepdad, Peter. I have two younger siblings, a sister named Grace and a brother Collin. Their twins. But they all died."
Katie Guo (mother) Peter Guo (stepfather) Grace Guo (sister) Collin Guo (brother)

Age/Birthday:
"I'm 16. My birthday is March 20."
16; March 20

Claimed:
"My daddy loves me! And that means yes."
Yes

Years at Camp:
"I've been at camp for 1 year now. Not a big achievement."
1

Personality:
Being a daughter of Hermes, Tracy has mastered picking locks and all that other BS. She is mostly peppy, but she can get too peppy and pass out. She does get serious at very important moments, but all her friends and family she is just joking around, since she is almost always making jokes. Tracy is a funny, nice, and smart girl. She can act dumb in moments of pressure.

Physical Appearance:
Tracy has brown hair, normally filled with small streaks of bright colors. She has black eyes. She is skinny for a girl at her age. She is also very healthy, except for a few birth problems, but they are gone now, so yeah.

History:
Tracy had good toddler years. When she reached the age of 8, she was a victim of bullying. Kids would call her fat and make fun of her hair. Tracy had no friends in the next 2 years. Then, in 6th grade, a new boy came to her school. She befriended the boy. It turns out the boy's name was Jason. Everybody got mad since Tracy got a friend, so they insulted her even more. One day, when a bully came up to Tracy and Jason, Jason broke the kid's arm. Tracy loved what happened that day, even if she did get suspended. In her middle school years, she spent her most of the time with Jason. Tracy also started straying from her family. They would go on trips that Tracy didn't know about. They would also fill her with all their junk. Whenever Tracy got home, she was forced to clean up the stuff they had thrown into her room and sort things out. She didn't know why her family was acting like this. The following year, Tracy found out that they had been possessed. She tried to get rid of the demons, but they overwhelmed her family's bodies. They eventually died from the haunting, and Tracy had to go to an adoption. Jason was with her every step of the way. Jason broke Tracy out of the adoption center. It turns out he was actually a satyr. He took Tracy to Camp Half Blood and trained Tracy personally. She has been at camp for a year now.

Fatal Flaw:
Grudges. She hates so many people, or things. Like the demons in her family, or the bullies at her elementary school.

Preferred Weapon:
"I like using knives. Makes me faster, I think. Also a lot easier to carry."
Knives

Other:
"That's it!"
N/A

Well, first things first. She is a good character. Great detail. However, satyrs are not often girls, so if you could change that, it would be great. Also, a fatal flaw cannot be "sensitivity of her past." if you could change those things it would be great (:

All fixed Kat!

Accepted!

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Echo92's New Character! *NEEDS ACCEPTING!!!*

Echo92's New Character! NEEDS ACCEPTING!!!