My new Charactor

Name: Michael green Jr
Age/Birthday: 16/ october 23rd
Gender: male
God Parent: Aphrodite
Claimed: Yes
Mortal Family: Michael green Sr
Years in Camp:2
Brief History: His father was extremely rude and tried to teach him to be strong and manly. But that just wasn't Michael's style. He met his mother once, when she felt that he was having his life ruined by his father and talked to Michael Sr. However she talked to him later. He got so angry when she appeared and explained everything to him. He attacked her saying he hated women like her. So she decided to punish him, because she felt that he was being extremely rude. He was given 3 chances to apolagize and blew it. So she augumented his fatal flaw to make it where he couldn't be around boys who weren't children of gods, also he would have to do whatever they say. He recently discovered his powers.
Physical Appearance: He has blonde hair that is short and silky. His eyes are clover green, he is about 4 ft 5. He has a birthmark in the shape of a twilight on his left arm. He has soft skin. He bleeds easily but has a great fashion sense for some reason. He has sharp teeth.
Personality: He tries to be up beat despite his curse. He makes friends very fast. His list of enimes is large though. It includes almost every goddess. He tries to make up for his hatred by hanging out with everyone he meets. He gives up a bit too easily on his goals in life. Inside he thinks he's a failure.
Fatal Flaw: He hides his personallity too well.
Pets: none.
Talents: He can see connections of emotions being formed when he wants to.
Weapons: A knife
Year-Round or Summer: Year round.
Other: He almost never leaves the cabin but when he does he only goes around other children of aphrodite. He never leaves the cabin because he doesn't want the curse to affect him.

how is this.

Your user is Joseph Sol?? Do you read the Gallagher Girls series? (if you dont, Joseph Solomon is a character in the series.)

That's pretty much just coincidence.

~I think Sel is saying, that you should broaden up details. Like, why did Aphrodite come back? Why was the curse on him and not his father? Why not leave the cabin? If you want to see what a full character sheet would be best to have a guide by, just look at the character topic of the elder members. I'm sure you'd get a clue on why he isn't accepted yet. (: if you have more questions, pm me, and I'll gladly help.

Yea, that's what I meant. Sorry. Also, the Jr and Sr. parts go after the last name.

Oh well I can take a third look at him if you want and this isn't good.

Accepted! Interesting character.