Fates Charries

Half-Bloods
Name: Fayte Marshell
Age/Birthday: 15, June 12th 1995
Gender: Girl
God Parent: Athena
Claimed: Not Yet?
Mortal Family: Dad: Jason Marshell, Stepmom: Sara Marshell Stepsister: Jamie Marshell
Years in Camp: 0- New
Brief History: Her dad raised her, when she was 9 her dad got Married to Sara. Sara was nice-ish. She wasnt mean but allways talked to Fayte like she was not smart. It annoyed fayte VERY much. Her dad one day, mysteriously brought her here and left. She lived in New Jersy and people useally didnt treat her to bad but she was sort of a misfit.
Physical Appearance: She has Long/Mid-length Blonde hair. She has the regular Athena-type gray eyes. Her skin is pretty nice. It is pale but not to pale. She is pretty tall with long legs, she isnt really strong but shes not TOO weak. She is about 5'4.
Personality: Over all Fayte is nice. She is a fierce fighter and likes to make friends. She is a smart and quick thinker. She also works very hard. She is used to being a person nobody really notices, like at hr other schools. When they do notice her it is useally bad. She trys a bit hard to not cause ANY drama.
Fatal Flaw: Too Trusting and doesnt know when to give up sometimes. She is very good to fight with a sword and not very good with a dagger. She is also not to good at sneaking around.
Pets: Um...Not yet i guess..
Talents: Good at fighting and thinking.
Weapons: Sword and shield.
Year-Round or Summer:Year-Round.
Other: Nope.

Good, I guess. But you should add more flaws, and this is kinda copying Annabeth. I'm not saying to change her looks or anything, but she "Ran away" just like Annabeth did, her step-mother didn't want her, etc. As a flaw, you should put something like "Although she is good at close up fighting, she isn't the same with, lets say a sword. She would be good, but not the best. She is much better with a dagger, and isn't that accurate with bows."

Cool Okay Lol haha Ya I realize that now! Um.....I'll just make her dad "mysteriously" drop her off here!

LOL Okat Thanks :)

Haha I thought its sounded like a cool place! :) I live in missouri :P Gross

I would suggest adding a bit more detail to her. Instead of putting in sentences such as: "Her skin was nice," and then following up with only one sentence explaining why, perhaps add in a couple more. Let's take the example I just used. Answer some of the following questions: Did it have any interesting markings on it? If so, from what experience? Does she have long arms or long legs? How does her skin feel? Is she muscular or like a bean-pole? Why?

Things like that. You mentioned Sara was nice-ish. How? What did she do? Why did her dad bring her to camp? Add in those critical details. Once that's done, just drop me a PM or give me a shout on the C-Box and I or another admin will approve it. (:

Haha Okay :) Thanks!

Can you give us a little more information on personality please?

Goodness you people are damanding! jkjk :) KK i did!

YAYA!!! FINALLY! I passed the time by makeing my Bieber Fever aware-ness poster :)