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Name: Taylor Alison Speed
Age/Birthday: 13/ August 13th
Gender: Female
God Parent: Hermes
Mortal Parent: Tara Speed
Years in Camp:1
Brief History:Taylor was born in Chicago Illinois where she lived in a apartment with her mom. At school Taylor was known for her athlet talents and Her good grades, So basiclly she was popular. But Taylor was a differnt type of popular meaning: She was always nice to everyone. Oneday Taylor's mom told her about camp. After this Taylor gathered her things and ran away to camp.
Physical Appearance: Taylor has long dirty blond hair that she wears in a ponytail. She has blue/green eyes. Taylor is very fit/Athletic/ Muscular she is also around 5'6''. Taylor always wears athletic type clothing.
Personality: Taylor is very kind and nice. She can also get cocky but only during sports. Taylor can also be very adhd at times. Whenever Taylor sees a snake she often will spaz out. Alltogather Taylor is a nice, kind, sorta cocky, very adhd girl thats always looking for fun or someone to prank or friends.
Pets:None
Talents: Running, Soccer,Baseball, Basketball, Volleyball, Track, Dancing.
Weapons:A CB dagger
Other:Flaws:She is overly competive at times, She is very hyper also at times and she is terrified of all reptiles.

Can you please use four sentences to describe Taylor's personality?

Sorry, I edited the form.

Sorry for my stupidness, but where would the flaws be? Since I dont see clearly a place on the form where it says flaws.

Ahh well, I edited and put them in the notes.

Okhay thanks!, and I added the flaws to the others btw.

WOAH! Alex Rider!? I LOVE THOSE BOOKS! I'm on Skeleton key right now <3 :D

Lol, Same here!

Name:Maeve Noel Anderson
Age/Birthday: 12/ May 1st
Gender: female
God Parent: Unclaimed
Mortal Parent: She has no idea and know one knows who they are.
Years in Camp:1
Brief History: Maeve was left at a orpanage a few days after her birth. She lived at the orphanage her whole life. Whenever Maeve was adopted some sort of acident always happened which resulted in Maeve being sent back to the orphanage. By the time Maeve turned 12 their was no hope of her being adopted anymore. But the one day a Young Man came and said he wanted to adopt Maeve. So the papers where signed and Maeve gathered her things and went off with the man. Once they were in the car they man told her that He was a satyr. He also told Maeve about camp and how one of her parents was a greek god. The satyr whos name was Kris then drove Maeve to camp.
Physical Appearance:Maeve has long dark brown hair that she wears in a ponytail. She has dark brown eyes and she wears contact lenses. Maeve is thin, but she is very strong also. She is around 5'3'' in height which is pretty well sized for her. Maeve always wears Jeans and some type of shirt normaly a tee shirt and sometimes a hoddie and baseball cap oh and she wears either running shoes or converes.
Personality: Maeve is very shy at first and very un-trusting at first also, but once she gets to know a person she becomes less shy and more friendly. She is very secretive and hates to tell people what she might be doing, and let alone a secret but sometimes she will tell but not often does she tell someone. Maeve also has a slight temper which you might notice if you choose to mess with her or you make her mad.
Pets:None
Talents: Running, Karate, Skate boarding, Jumping, Like ninja stuff and tumbling.
Weapons:3 Celstail bronze ninja throwing stars, 1 cb dagger and a 3 foot cb sword.
Other:She is ninja xD.

I am going to make Jett and Kelsey like just poof or whatever I guess, I didnt plan them that well, I might bring Jett back later but idk but as of now, they dont really exsist.

Name:Natalie Rose Pike
Age/Birthday: 17/ Januray 1st
Gender: Female
God Parent: Nemesis
Mortal Parent: Ronald Pike
Years in Camp:2
Brief History:Natalie was born and also grew up in, Langley Virginia which is infact the home of the C.I.A headquaters. From a early age Natalie was watched by the C.I.A to see if they could use her because they found that she had a good chance of being a great spy. When Natalie was 5 she learned Karate and by age 8 she was a black-belt, At Age 12 Natalie could drive a car, By age 14 she could fly a plane and do other things such as Defuse a bomb, Pick-pocket someone, Detect traps and even handle a weapon. When Natalie turned 13 she became a C.I.A Agent. From this point onwards Natalie went on missions for them and completed every single one of them. Then when Natalie turned 15 she was attacked by a monster and managed to kill it. But her dad sent her to camp so she would be safe.
Physical Appearance: Natalie's Physical Apperance changes very often but this is how she normaly looks. She has shoulder length Black hair that curls slightly but its not that curly that she often wears in a ponytail. She has black eyes, that are very mysterous looking, yet very beautiful. Natalie has a small build, She is around 5'7'', And skinny but however she is muscular. Natalies normal outfit would be A pair of Tenis shoes, A pair of athletic shorts and or sweatpants and jeans, A tee shirt and a hoodie.
Personality:Natalie has a very mysterous, Secretive personality like shes hiding stuff which she is. However Natalie is a very great actress, So she can act very well. She is also very quiet.
Pets:None
Talents: Karate, Running, Pickpocketing.
Weapons:None yet.
Other:Her flaws: She is terrified of heights and flying, She is very sensitive, She cant swim, She has a fear of most animals, She can be clumsy, She is alergic to: Eggs, Milk, Beef, Flour, Pineapple and Coconut.

Your new character seems a bit too perfect. She has a large amount of extraordinary talents, and very few flaws to balance them out. Not only that but it doesn't really seem like she's a demigod.
She doesn't seem to have inherited many Nemesis related talents or traits. It really just seems like she's a super pro child spy. Which is really cool, don't get me wrong! But it's sort of the wrong roleplay...

Also, her past is a bit difficult to understand, since from the very beginning, you're left with the question "Why did the CIA raise her?"
All in all, if you tone down the talents, give her some flaws and explain her history in more detail, that'd be great!