Halo, Daughter of Apollo (waiting approvel)

Subject: Halo, Daughter of Apollo (waiting approvel) Sun Oct 17, 2010 1:42 pm

Name:Halo Rine Kartima

Age/birthday:Age:12 years B-day:Sep. 19

Gender:Female

Years in camp:9 years

God parent:Apollo

Mortal parent:Jack(real name Jackie) Wane Kartima

Physical appearance:Brown hair and brown eyes, she normally has her hair in a braid, skinny she is 4ft 11in and 20lbs under weight so she is now 70lbs

Personality:she nice but if you get on her bad side you will regret it, she is strong and a fast runner, she trys to be one with nature

Pets:a silver doe(female deer)and a silver female wolf, she got the silver doe from Artimis for being at camp for 6 years and staying away from boys as much as she can and she got the silver wolf from Apollo as a 12th year b-day gift

Weapons:bow and arrow and knife and Soward

Talents:can shoot well and run fast and can battle with a soward and knife

Other:has great time with Animals who loves her, the reason she came to Camp at age 3 was because her mother was killed with the rest of her family and she only had her father, so Apollo sent a messenger to bring her to camp

Guest

First order of business, you deserve a great big hug for being a fellow Hunger Games fan. (hug)
Second of all, I would suggest to have your character approved faster, add more to her personality besides, "nice"; add more to her physical appearance; explain why she has been at camp since she was 3; why she has a wolf and a deer; and how these are taken care of while she is at a camp.

ok i'll fix it and i love the hunger games

i fixed it

Er FYI, the charrie isn't accepted yet.

Its not my fault it hasn't been accepted yet they posted and i fixed and told them i fixed it . So, no one said anything about it.

I realize that, but you may not roleplay until an admin approves it. Be thankful because the admins may have forgotten about this form, so I posted so they could approve Halo ;]

Please accept it

Halo, how many chares have you made? It would be easier if you made one topic for all of your characters, so the admins don't have to search.

ok i made 4 but only 3 topics

Could there be more detail ._.

i added a little more detale

I'm not a good speller so tell me if I'm mistaken but isn't it spelled sword not soward

please don't take this offensively I'm trying to help. I herd that admins approve faster if every thing is spelled correctly.

Not true. It does bug the snot out of me when grammar and correct spelling isn't used, however it's not true.
Accepted.

thank you

HA ha ha. well you know what they say" belive half of what you see and a quarter of what you hear." just some rumor my freind started I'll corect hime later. sorry about that, for now on I'll try to make sure that I use proper gramer and spelling.

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