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Join date : 2011-07-26
|Subject: Shiona's Characters Mon Jul 23, 2012 11:37 am|| |
Name: First and Last Name: Leanne Peirce
Age/Birthday: 13/3rd July
Mortal Family: First and Last Name/s: David Peirce (dad), Jessica Peirce (step sister), Amy Peirce (step mum)
Years in Camp:2
Brief History: At least 4 sentences. Be sure to include details!:
Grown up with Jessica who is 8 months younger than she is and was claimed when she was 10. She refuses to know her step-mum as family because she always wanted a real mum and she has become quite distant from her dad since he never told her about her true identity. She has never met Athena but does get messages from her very often. Leanne had a troubled childhood when she used to wake up screaming in the middle of the night and some nights she wouldn't go to sleep at all.
Physical Appearance: At least 4 sentences. Be sure to include details!:
Leanne has hazel eyes and chestnut hair which looks like it glows in the sunlight and comes to the middle of her back. She is middle height and has a slender body which works perfectly with the jeans a t-shirts she always wears, she will never wear a dress unless Jessica had told her to, but, since she hadn't, Leanne had never worn a dress .
She has soft peachy skin which goes with her rosy cheeks and pink lips. She smiles a lot with dimples included, but hides her true feelings.
Personality: At least 4 sentences. Be sure to include details!:
Can be fiery when put to the test but is nice at heart:heart: . Despite being kind she keeps herself to herself and nearly always has a mysterious atmosphere around her. Leanne is bubbly around her friend, she only has Jessica:Nico: . All together she is trustworthy and bubbly but is really mysterious and can become very explosive.
Fatal Flaw: Explosive
Pets: A staffy dog called Tara
Talents: She is good at telling how people are feeling inside despite what they look like on the outside
Weapons: A bow and arrow
Year-Round or Summer: Year-Round, she cant stand her step mum
Other: She can speak french and german but her main language is english
Last edited by Shiona x on Mon Jul 23, 2012 3:20 pm; edited 1 time in total
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|Subject: Re: Shiona's Characters Mon Jul 23, 2012 12:34 pm|| |
Hey, welcome to camp half blood! Everything looks good but you need to have four complete sentences in Appearance and Personality! She seems a little too Mary-Sue ish. Add a few flaws here and there. (: