Sora's Characters

Name: Sora Destiny
Birthday: Feburary 27 1997
Gender: Male
God Parent: Nike
Claimed: No
Mortal Family: Michelle Destiny

History: Sora is the son Of Nike, and the son of Michelle Destiny , He lives is other worlds until Camp half blood calls him. Sora has stopped the wielder of darkness from taking over the world many times. He is the only keyblade wielder in the world.
Physical Appearance: He seems to portray more of a typical teenage boy's looks. Sora has spiky brown hair.Sora's appearance does not change that much throughout the series besides growing taller, a slightly different hair style, tanner skin, a slightly deeper voice, and having more matured looks.
Personallity: Sora has a typical brave and heroic personality, meaning he'll willingly risk his life for people he doesn't even know yet, as shown when he tries to save Ansem the Wise from the explosion, to no avail. He's extremely loyal to his friends, and has been shown to be extremely forgiving, and is He constantly thinks positive and is therefore highly optimistic. Throughout his journeys, he readily puts aside his own personal goals to help those in need.
Fatal Flaw: None
Talents: Can Summon Keyblade No matter how far away it is.Fire
Blizzard:
Thunder:
Cure:
Aero :
Gravity:
Stop:
Magnet:
Reflect:
Weapons: Keyblade, Magic,
Years In Camp: 1
Year-Round or Summer:Year Round

Hello Sora! Welcome to CHB!

Although I love Kingdom Hearts, please remember that Sora is a son of Nike. His powers don't include magic, unlike Hecate's children. You can have a weapon shaped like a keyblade, but nothing too powerful that can summon the elements. And is Michelle Destiny his step mother? Nike is a goddess, not a male god. Also, a demigod has to HAVE A FATAL FLAW, no questions asked. Please add more flaws to his personality as well, and elaborate on "matured looks".

Other than that, pretty good job.

Yeah I made some mistakes I meant to Put Jain but then I changed it to Nike, completly forgetting to edit Michelle Destiny. I also didn't really knew what you meant by fatal flaw however now I understand.

Name: Sora Destiny
Birthday: Feburary 27 1997
Gender: Male
God Parent: Nike
Claimed: No
Mortal Family: Michael Destiny

History: Sora is the son Of Nike, and the son of Michael Destiny , He lives is other worlds until Camp half blood calls him. Sora has stopped the wielder of darkness from taking over the world many times. He is the only keyblade wielder in the world.
Physical Appearance: He seems to portray more of a typical teenage boy's looks. Sora has spiky brown hair.Sora's appearance does not change that much throughout the series besides growing taller, a slightly different hair style, tanner skin, a slightly deeper voice, and having more matured looks.
Personallity: Sora has a typical brave and heroic personality, meaning he'll willingly risk his life for people he doesn't even know yet, as shown when he tries to save Ansem the Wise from the explosion, to no avail. He's extremely loyal to his friends, and has been shown to be extremely forgiving, and is He constantly thinks positive and is therefore highly optimistic. Throughout his journeys, he readily puts aside his own personal goals to help those in need.
Fatal Flaw: None
Talents: Can Summon Keyblade No matter how far away it is. And Can open any door.
Weapons: Keyblade, Magic,
Years In Camp: 1
Year-Round or Summer:Year Round

I want to thank and appologize to the moderators, and admins who literally had to walk me through this. I can say that this forum has the nicest moderators, and admins.


Name: Michael Lighthand
Age/Birthday:13
Gender:Male
God Parent: Apollo
Claimed: No
Mortal Family: Louise Lighthand
Years in Camp:1
Brief History: Michael was stuck in a deep sleep. He was in the temple of Apollo. On the wall there was writing saying If you are a son of apollo You must go to camp half blood, But you must pull the sword" must pull out the sword so you can summon it anytime in battle." Then more writing appeared on the wall. "You will be guided to camp halfblood by a satyr."
Physical Appearance: Michael, Has blonde spiky hair, and blue eyes. He has a L on his Forehead, and both palms. He has the nicest face to friends, but the most terrifying face to enemys. He almost represents both Apollo, Poseidon, and Zeus Combined.
Personality: Michael, Is a kind boy who always stands up to his friends, and is always there help anyone despite anything.Michael does trust almost anyone, but his enemies. Michael is Impatient whenever his friends are in danger. Michael can have a short temper if he is mad about something. He is strategic, and is a independent genius. He will always figure out a path to victory. He is fast as thunder.
Fatal Flaw: Michael isn't cautious when his friend's are in danger. Michael doesn't often wait more then an hour before just leaving and proceeding despite anything.
Pets: a dog named Genie
Talents:Can Summon His sword despite distance
Weapons: ForeLight: Sword Made of chromium
Year-Round or Summer:Year Round

Thanks, I actually just edited that. Thanks for the suggestion

Ok Its officially done now. Did I make any mistakes this time?

(Yes i know the name is kinda close to the other character but oh well)
Name: Michael LightForge
Age/Birthday: 19
Gender:Male
God Parent: Haphaestus
Claimed: Yes
Mortal Family: Jenna Pantheona
Years in Camp:10
Brief History: Lightforge was trapped in Medieval times. The Prophecy containing valuable information said “ In order for one to become a demigod he must overcome his trials which would last 9 years.” In those 9 years he would have to make 10000000000000000 Swords before the 9 years ended (500,000 of at least of each metal) or death would occur. Once the limit was reached Lightforge awoken at Half Blood hill. Supposely people say he was a rock near half blood hill
Physical Appearance: Lightforge’s eyes are always shining like a forge. LightForge has blonde spiky hair. With yellow eyes. He is always seen with his diamond helmet in battle.
Personality: Lightforge is a determined spiritual boy. Who is a little brat sometimes who won’t take no as an answer when ever it has to do with his friends. Lightforge is always cheerful even in battle. Lightforge can be impatient a lot, because he has no patience at all.
Fatal Flaw: If he is hit by Sphalerite, he will be drained of his powers, unable to move, or use his sword. Poison will occur after a while after not being treated to. Tons of enemy’s will appear as a aftermath.
Pets:None
Talents: Can Interact with any metal. Can make a thin round sphere with air holes made of Metal around friends or himself. Can make anything with metal (that has to do with weapons)
Weapons:Antimony Sword
Year-Round or Summer: Year Round

1.) You didn't spell 'Hephaestus' right.
2.) His history is just... no. Just no. Change it all. If you wanted him to be stuck in medieval times. At least have him go to an inn called 'The Lotus' or whatever.
3.) Forges don't shine.
4.) 'With yellow eyes' is not a sentence.
5.) He can't have a diamond helmet. Plus, I think that would be considered a weapon perk and you'd have to buy that.
6.) His fatal flaw isn't even a fatal flaw. I don't even know what it is.

Just redo this character. Sorry, just redo it and make him a normal human being. I don't know what roleplay this character is from, but this isn't the correct site for him.

Ok sorry for the confusion....

You can do it! Good luck! *grin*

(Sorry For the late response, my computer recently broke :( )
(Please Note that Barrowed Flame Doesn't Exist I made it up) o.o
Ahrim Dark Wielder
Name: Ahrim Darkwielder
Birthday: February 27 1998
Gender: Male
God Parent: Nyx
Claimed: Yes
Mortal Family: Linda Ladd
History: Not much History is known about Ahrim. He was originally was from Greece. Until he came into a dark temple, and was chosen by a very dark sword called StormBringer. Shortly after he was invited to lead an organization called Barrowed Flame. He was sent on mission usually in the US. However when the Leader was betrayed Ahrim had to take over, the first order of business was to, temporarily suspend Barrowed Flame. His mother was in the organization but was shortly elimated by someone who is unknown. He then went to Camp Halfblood. And Stayed there for 3 years until and start recruiting gifted campers who they would test during there quests. The sole purpose of the organization, was taming monsters souls. They never managed to accomplish this.
Physical Appearance: Ahrim is a very dark figure. He has blue eyes with gray hair with pale skin. Ahrim is often seen wearing a black cloak. The black cloak was the uniform for Barrowed Flame, along with markings that were on the blade of Stormbringer. He is also seen wearing a blindfold but yet can see very well.
Personality: Very doubtful, Scary, and Impatient. Ahrim can sometimes be a bully because his sword has consumed his emotions thefore he is very very gloomy and dull. Ahrim has no feelings which makes him very scary. (He doesn't have a heart)He is quiet most of the time again because of the sword.
Talents: Resistant To Dark Powers.
Can use darkness to travel.
(By that I mean he will survive but still take damage)
Fatal Flaw: Shy to ask questions, Storm bringer can take control of him at random times and make him do things that he wouldn't intentionally do.
Weapons: Storm Bringer: Stormbringer's edge is capable of cutting through virtually any material not protected by potent sorcery (Besides Celestial Bronze,) and it can drink the soul from any monsters open wound. However it won't work on humans instead it will daze them
Years In Camp: 4
Year-Round or summer: Year Round

Not trying to be impatient or rude but I have been waiting about 2 weeks and I still haven't gotten a response whether something Is wrong with this character or not. I have seen other characters after I posted this got approved at least a week ago. Just wanted to get someones attention on this character. In case nobody even saw the post.

Well, sorry for the late response. I really don't know about that secret organization Sora, and as good as it sounds, I'm in no decision to approve it without knowledge of an admin. Sorry. :\
But I could tell you that he'll need one more sentence on his appearance and a few more for his personality. Might want to elaborate? Why is he a bully? why doesn't he have feelings of pity or happiness? Does he have a family to begin with? And his fatal flaw isn't really something for personality wise. Could he be really cold and untrusing? Really shy and he couldn't work in a group no matter what? Just some points you might find helpful.

Again, sorry for the wait. Hope you'll consider these points!

I think it would also help if you broke down his personality traits and explained them a bit more. Maybe write a short paragraph on how that personality trait affects them. I also don't believe that his fatal flaw is really a flaw in his personality. I think something like 'complete ruthlessness' would be a good suggestion. His history is much like a gary-stu. Also, could you include something about his mother? I think I would like to knpw about her too.

Ok edited.

(I recopied that last one knowing that It was a fail so I made one that wasn't that godly like the other one)
(Please Note that Barrowed Flame Doesn't Exist I made it up) o.o
Name: Karil DoubleHand
Birthday: February 27 1998
Gender: Male
God Parent: Ares
Claimed: Yes
Mortal Family: Beth MetalFlower
History: Not much History is known about Karil. He was originally was from Greece. Until he came into a dark temple, and was kidnapped.His memories were erased, The group then told him that he was in a family Called The Barrow Brothers. They were all connected somehow no matter what god they were inherited from. Shortly after he was invited to the organization called Barrowed Flame. He was sent on mission usually in the US to take out the monsters that was the biggest threat. However when the Leader was betrayed the organization, Saix had to take over, the first order of business was that saix did temporarily suspend for Karil only therefore hiding him from any Hunters looking for The Barrow Brothers, He erased Karils Memory again, the only thing he left remaining was that he had 6 brothers. He planted a fake memory that He had to find these 6 brothers before the 3rd Titan war started, just knowing that he was associated with the prophecy.He then went to Camp Halfblood. The sole purpose of the organization, was taming monsters souls. They never managed to accomplish this.
Physical Appearance: Ahrim is a very dark figure. He has blue eyes with gray hair with pale skin. Karil is often seen wearing a black cloak. The black cloak was the uniform for Barrowed Flame, along with markings that were from the organization Barrowed Flame He is also seen wearing a blindfold but yet can see very well.
Personality: Very doubtful, Scary, and Impatient. Ahrim can sometimes be a bully because his sword has consumed his emotions thefore he is very very gloomy and dull. Ahrim has no feelings which makes him very scary. (He doesn't have a heart)He is quiet most of the time again because of the sword.
Talents: Has a Skill Mastery in The Archery skill.
(By that I mean he will survive but still take damage)
Fatal Flaw: Shy to ask questions, his memory's can take control of him at random times and make him do things that he wouldn't intentionally do, but he would have a vision while this happens.
Weapons: Dark Bow: Can fire a dragons spirit at the target
And 2 handed crossbow.
Years In Camp: 4
Year-Round or summer: Year Round