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Lightning
Posts : 1855 Join date : 2010-02-13 Age : 27 Location : Lost in Tumblr
| Subject: Re: The 80's Fri Mar 23, 2012 9:42 pm | |
| Kyros- Spoiler:
Age/Birthday:15 1.1 Gender:Male God Parent: Machai - Daemon Spirit of Combat and Battle Claimed: Yes Mortal Family:Viki Hawthorne Years in Camp:First Brief History:Kyros was taken at an age so young he could't remember who his family is. The women named Maria was the cook who fed him at the cages. He was taken and force into illegal Child fights to the death. It was either that or die yourself. Before he hit the age of 12 he had killed just a handful of boys just like him, but the numbers in the group were getting shorter, and the crowd loved him and his friend Lucent, demanding that he was present at every event. The modern day gladiator challenges were to face either black market animals, other kids, or sometimes drunk grown ups. He escaped along with his friend Shylock and Lucent. Shylock Had died the day before. He was the one who supplied him with the spoon he later saw Lucent turn to a shank weapon. He escaped and weeks later the police stopped the group. Physical Appearance: Kyros wears a long Renascence style assassins wardrobe. It is white with red lining and a long hood, and long sleeves. He is about 5' 7" and 130lbs, almost all muscle, large hands grip swords that can flow from his sleeves for easy use, and for quick equip. He has golden hazel eyes and a smooth, tight skin. He can bend and move faster than most people and can creatively combine moves from different combat styles. Personality: Kyros has a tough shell around him, but loves to hang around people. He never drops a dare, challenge or bet and always does whats in his power to win. He was taught that life sucks butt and you cant change that. His combat training he makes him analyze any situation like it is his last. Fatal Flaw:He Doesn't really trust people because of the abduction. Pets:none Talents:He can use any weapon with a masters expertise and is a black belt at 10 different combat styles most of which he doesn't even know. He grew up knowing them, being in the Colosseum Raiders* Weapons:His hands and fists, and usually uses others weapons against them (see video) Year-Round or Summer:Year round Other:Color = #098765*same as Lucent https://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=Wo6Q14vBB1c#t=77s | |
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Zan Mega Asshole Duo
Posts : 10035 Join date : 2010-05-04 Age : 27 Location : butthole PA
| Subject: Re: The 80's Mon Mar 26, 2012 8:07 pm | |
| You already have seven characters. Unless you bought an extra slot. In which case, can you put that in the 'other' part of his template?
His personality is hardly a personality. You need to actually describe his personality traits. Also, I'm not sure his weight is appropriate for his height and the build at which you described him.
I researched Machai and the Machai are spirits. Plural. You need to pick one.
In Blu's character thing, you said he runs away to the Seam? That's a place in Panem from the Hunger Games world. Sorry, you have to change that. | |
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Lightning
Posts : 1855 Join date : 2010-02-13 Age : 27 Location : Lost in Tumblr
| Subject: Re: The 80's Thu Mar 29, 2012 9:31 pm | |
| I can buy an extra slot? where and how many? | |
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Crispy Bacon THE YODELMEISTER'S APPRENTICE
Posts : 1616 Join date : 2011-07-22 Age : 27 Location : 1800 got junk
| Subject: Re: The 80's Fri Mar 30, 2012 3:23 pm | |
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Lightning
Posts : 1855 Join date : 2010-02-13 Age : 27 Location : Lost in Tumblr
| Subject: Re: The 80's Sat Mar 31, 2012 10:19 pm | |
| I bought one XD can you go look or whatever it is that happens?
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Crispy Bacon THE YODELMEISTER'S APPRENTICE
Posts : 1616 Join date : 2011-07-22 Age : 27 Location : 1800 got junk
| Subject: Re: The 80's Sun Apr 01, 2012 11:12 am | |
| Hm, as Zan said, the Machai are spirits so.. I would recommend changing to be Ares or Cratus?
I think being about to use any weapon expertly and knowing 10 martial arts is little much.. I would say reduce it to either 2 - 4 martial arts because even 5 is a lot, even for someone with his background. | |
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Turtle
Posts : 809 Join date : 2011-08-12 Age : 28 Location : Classified.
| Subject: Re: The 80's Tue May 29, 2012 3:06 am | |
| Uh, Lightning? You might want to change Sean Mahey's immortal parent. Cause, you know, Ouranos was killed by Kronos in the Greek creation myth.
((Additionally, I move for a ban on Ouranos characters for the aformentiomed reason. I'll make a topic in the chat.)) | |
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Prince Hawk
Posts : 2001 Join date : 2010-07-30 Age : 31 Location : Camp Half Blood, Hogwarts, Narnia
| Subject: Re: The 80's Tue May 29, 2012 5:10 am | |
| Turlte is an immortal god, therefore he cant actually be killed. Blu and Alec should RP together, they would get along so well. Also if Chase and Duni are single, could I dibs them.
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Turtle
Posts : 809 Join date : 2011-08-12 Age : 28 Location : Classified.
| Subject: Re: The 80's Tue May 29, 2012 10:05 am | |
| In some variants of the myth, he is dead permanently. In others, Kronos cut his balls of. Either way, he can't have kids. I know my mythology, ok? I pretty much grew up on this stuff. | |
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Lightning
Posts : 1855 Join date : 2010-02-13 Age : 27 Location : Lost in Tumblr
| Subject: Re: The 80's Wed May 30, 2012 7:13 pm | |
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