hikari 101's character Christina

Posts : 5 Join date : 2012-03-04

Half-Bloods
Name: Christina Brookes
Age/Birthday: She is 13 and her birthday is May 12, 1998
Gender: Female
God Parent: Thanatos
Mortal Family: Cici Brookes
Years in Camp: 6
Brief History: When she was two she almost fell to her death. She had just started preschool and her class had a snake for a class pet. The snake got loose and headed straight for her. On her fith birthday she saw her first monster. Her instincts immediately kicked in and she pick up a spoon and started whakking the monster with it. Then she jumped on it and grabbed a knife and cut the thing in half. A week after her sixth birthday she had found a sayter, in a park. the sayter became her best friend. He told her mom that there was a caamp for special people like her and she needed to go there. The sayter to her to lonng island but before he got to the boundries with her they were attacked by a pheonix. The sayter did not make it with her so she broke down and cried.
Physical Appearance: She has long blonde hair with black and brown specks. Her eyes change color depending on her mood so sometimes it is very hard to tell what her natural eye color would be. She wears a camp half blood tshirt and jean shorts.
Personality: Basicaly she is a loner. She will not even sleep in her cabin because she doesn't trust anything or anyone but a couple people. She is uassually happy. When she is mad or sad run away because she is deadly.
Flaw: She is alone, and sometimes a little frightened she feels shuned even in camp halfblood
Pets:wolfpup
Talents: reviving dead, archery, swordfighting, communicating with the dead.
Weapons: anything
Year-Round or Summer: yearound

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Subject: Re: hikari 101's character Christina Wed Mar 07, 2012 9:11 pm

I'm pretty sure Chaos is a titan.

You can't have a hellhound or a griffin or a phoenix until you have like 1000 drachmas.

Her history is very poor. The sentence structure isn't very good. Can you please elaborate.
same with her appearence and personality.

I don't understand her fatal flaw...

Subject: Re: hikari 101's character Christina Thu Mar 08, 2012 9:24 am

Atlas is a titan, but I don't think that Chaos is, but he's a little powerful for your first character.

Posts : 5 Join date : 2012-03-04

thanks for the suggestions What a Face

:D

Subject: Re: hikari 101's character Christina Thu Mar 08, 2012 5:38 pm

It's better, but you need full sentinces for her Appearance and Personality

Posts : 5 Join date : 2012-03-04

please say yes now

Subject: Re: hikari 101's character Christina Sat Mar 10, 2012 8:38 am

Sorry, I can't. I'm not a mod or admin. Can you change one thing? She's a little powerful right now. Can you make her powers with the dead tone down a little?

Subject: Re: hikari 101's character Christina Sat Mar 10, 2012 10:27 am

I'm pretty sure the admins won't allow you to "revive" the dead.

Subject: Re: hikari 101's character Christina Sun Mar 11, 2012 3:17 am

Reviving the dead is off limits because it goes against rules that even gods have to abide to, much less demi-gods. Chaos is not a titan however. He is a minor god, which gives all the more of a reason to tone down the powers. Same goes for Thantos. I've been on this site for around a few months, and so far, we don't RP with our powers much, so I don't think that you need to make such powerful characters. That's just my opinion though.

-Cherrie

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