Horselady2243's Characters

Name:Nephele
Age:365 but looks about 19
Gender:Female
Brief History:She never knew her parents as they had abandoned her at birth. She grew up in the wild, learning how to fend off monsters and use a bow and arrow. She met several other centaurs during her journey and they told her about Camp Half-Blood. Deciding that it was in her best interests to go there, she set off for Camp. Finally reaching it, she is nervous and catious but also happy, for here was a place where she could settle down and finally have friends and companions.
Physical Appearance:
She has long cascading black hair decorated with a green headband. She has a beautiful buckskin coat and brown skin, along with intense grass green eyes. She wears an outfit that she made herself, it is green and she has an armband to go along with it.
Personality:She is a very sweet and caring person. She takes care of her own problems and is very hardworking. She loves all the creatures in the forests except for the vicious attacking monsters. She is very shy when it comes to introductions and so is very formal, only doing what is necessary to be polite before moving on.
Talents:She takes care of wild animals and they tend to flock around her. she can understand their language, whatever it may be, and reply back in kind. She keeps several faithful animals by her side always - a wolf, a hawk, and a lynx. Even though they are faithful to her, they are still wild animals and disappear on their own for days at a time, but they always find their way back to her.
Weapons:She has a bow and arrow set that she made herself, and has some throwing stars that she carved out of wood that are almost as dangerous as knifes. Although she doesn't have one, she knows how to handle a sword and even some dagger techniques that she picked up over the years.
Other:None.

She needs more flaws. Like a lot more flaws. Right now she's a Mary-Sue character.

How about this one?

Name: Summer Andrews

Age/Birthday: 14/1 June

Gender: Female

God Parent: Apollo

Claimed: Yes

Mortal Family: Lea Andrews

Years in Camp: 3

Brief History: Summer and her mother had a very rocky relationship. This is mainly because when Summer was 10 Lea go arthiritis. This may not sound like a big deal, but Lea thought it was the end of the world. She instantly quit her job and found one she could do at home. Then she basically sat around and typed on her laptop or did nothing all day. Maybe she thought moving would bring death upon her, who knows. Lea forced Summer to do all the cleaning and cooking and everything else around the house. She tried to make Summer quit school, but here Summer put her foot down. Instead she had to do piles of work when she came home. Lea demanded gourmet meals that Summer obviously couldn't cook. When Summer failed to complete tasks to Lea's perfection (as she often did) she would scold Summer and send her to bed without dinner (provided she'd finished making Lea's of course). One day Summer couldn't take it anymore. She left her home and never looked back. Summer didn't have a particular destination in mind but she found herself walking to a certain place. This place turned out to be Camp Half-Blood.

Physical Appearance: Summer is averagely pretty, if you know what I mean. She has one defining feature that everything else works around. This defining feature is Summer's eyes. They are a luminous golen colour. They look like someone shoved the Sun into her eyes, as one of her teachers so charmingly put it. These extraordinary irises are framed by black eyelashes of average length. Summer's nose is on the smaller side and turns upwards at the end. Her lips are turned upwards at each edge. This gives her the appearance that she is always smiling. Even when Summer is expressionless she seems to have a small smile. Summer's hair is chocolate brown and falls in a silky waterfall to just abover her hips. It is slightly wavy and can be curled or straightened. Although straightening it wouldn't make much of a difference. She used to have a fringe that she grew out. It didn't completely work though. So now Summer has a long side fringe on her right side. Her skin is a very light goldy colour and she doesn't have any freckles.

Personality: Summer is generally a happy person. Not many people have seen her unhappy and even less people have seen her without a smile upon her face. Summer tries her hardest to remain happy all the time. Bitter feelings remind her of her mother, and Summer detests that. There are a couple of things that will always spark her anger though. One of them is someone askingabout her family or history. Another is someone insulting her. She absolutely will not stand for that. If someone's insults her friends they get the same result. Summer is also a very independent person. She hates accepting help from people, believing she can do anything on her own. That's why she never uttered a word about what her mother was putting her through. Summer is quite a bright child. She is also very practical. Summer loves the sun and Summer. It's an ironic surprise that she was born on the first day of the season she was named after. At night Summer refers darkness. She can't sleep when there's lots of light so she likes it to be pitch black.

Fatal Flaw: Pride

Pets: None

Talents: Archery and healing. Summer loves to heal people so it's just as well that she is good at it. Summer never learned an instrument or had singing lessons. She has a sweet yet strong voice though.

Weapons: Bow and arrows. They all morph into a single bronze bracelet.

Year-Round or Summer: Year-Round

Other:

I tried to make her more life like.

Her physical appearance needs more flaws. Like some scars or whatever.