boncorock9fizz's charactors

Half-Bloods
Name: Emma Thompson
Age/Birthday:12, May 02 2000
Gender:female
God Parent: Apollo
Claimed: Yes
Mortal Family: Becky Thompson,Step-father Jhon Thompson
Years in Camp:4years
Brief History: I've always been different but when I statrted to hear about the greeks and the gods I thought maybe I could fit in with them.
Physical Appearance: Dark blonde hair,hazel eyes,peach skin,about 5ft.2in.
Personality: I love archery and helping people I love to ride horses and I'm a pretty good teammate in any sport really. I love to just be outside and run.
Fatal Flaw:Can't let go of friends, always needs them safe.
Pets:horse, and dog
Talents:Singing,riding horses,sports,archery
Weapons:bow and arrow or sword if neccessary
Year-Round or Summer:year-round
Other:

Half-Bloods
Name: Emma Thompson
Age/Birthday:12, May 02 2000
Gender:female
God Parent: Apollo
Claimed: Yes
Mortal Family: Becky Thompson,Step-father Jhon Thompson
Years in Camp:4years
Brief History: I've always been different but when I statrted to hear about the greeks and the gods I thought maybe I could fit in with them.
Physical Appearance: Dark blonde hair,hazel eyes,peach skin,about 5ft.2in.
Personality: I love archery and helping people I love to ride horses and I'm a pretty good teammate in any sport really. I love to just be outside and run.
Fatal Flaw:Can't let go of friends, always needs them safe.
Pets:horse, and dog
Talents:Singing,riding horses,sports,archery
Weapons:bow and arrow or sword if neccessary
Year-Round or Summer:year-round
Other

Just wondering why there are two of the same characters X3

You need four sentences (complete) On the brief history, physical appearance and personality. Second, you need more flaws in his personality. Not everyone is perfect, so try to make your character like that too. Fix that, and an admin should accept him soon!