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JoshHandegard
Posts : 16 Join date : 2012-02-15 Age : 28
| Subject: Ahem... My charrie form. [needs accepting] Wed Feb 15, 2012 9:24 pm | |
| Half-Bloods Name: Joshua Allan Handegard Age/Birthday: March 5th, 1996 Gender: male God Parent: Ares Claimed: Yes Mortal Family: Won't go in depth with this Years in Camp: 0
Brief History: After years of getting in trouble at school for fights, bad mouthing teachers, and just a bad life, Ares the God of War, took pity upon his son. Ares appeared to Josh as he was walking through the downtown streets of New York. Ares was in his normal garb for this era, biker styled clothing, Harley Davidson, Etcetera. He gave josh an Enchanted Spear that morphed into a cellphone for travel, and a sword that turned into a Baseball bat when not in use.
Physical Appearance: Short, dark hair, glasses. He is your average run-of-the-mill multi-racial boy. Though his physical appearance is average, his style of clothing is much different. He usually wears dark clothing, either Band tee's or scary graphic skull shirts. He has a comfortable pair of Combat boots, and is usually seen in regular jeans and a hoodie of some sort. He ALWAYS has his beanie (sock hat) on, he hates letting his hair loose, it gets in his eyes and gets in the way of battle.
Personality: Humorous at times, but when angered or he feels threatened, he goes into DEATH-STARE mode. Meaning he pretty much glares around as if he was looking for something to fight.
Fatal Flaw: Anger, like a true child of the War God
Pets: Pitt-Bull named Titan, (Ironic, I know.)
Talents: Parkour, Battle-Tactician, Fantastic all around fighter
Weapons: Celestial Bronze Spear, Celestial Bronze Longsword
Year-Round or Summer: Year round
Other: None
Last edited by JoshHandegard on Sat Feb 18, 2012 5:01 pm; edited 2 times in total | |
| | | AnonymousFawkes5
Posts : 100 Join date : 2012-02-14 Age : 28 Location : Mordor. And yeah, I DID simply walk in.
| Subject: Re: Ahem... My charrie form. [needs accepting] Wed Feb 15, 2012 10:57 pm | |
| Even though I'm new here, too, I might advise that you put a bit more work into your personality, it does say at least 4 sentences. | |
| | | Skye THE YODELMEISTER
Posts : 3654 Join date : 2011-06-25 Age : 28 Location : The Stratosphere
| Subject: Re: Ahem... My charrie form. [needs accepting] Wed Feb 15, 2012 11:42 pm | |
| Yes, as Anonymous said, he needs 4 sentences for personality. I'm not so sure about the cell phone, though... It's not something demigods use, as it attracts monsters like yelling out, "I'M A DEMIGOD COME EAT ME!" :D
But If you take away the cell phone, add the sentences, I can accept him! | |
| | | JoshHandegard
Posts : 16 Join date : 2012-02-15 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Ahem... My charrie form. [needs accepting] Thu Feb 16, 2012 8:02 am | |
| Half-Bloods Name: Joshua Allan Handegard Age/Birthday: March 5th, 1996 Gender: male God Parent: Ares Claimed: Yes Mortal Family: Won't go in depth with this Years in Camp: 0
Brief History: After years of getting in trouble at school for fights, bad mouthing teachers, and just a bad life, Ares the God of War, took pity upon his son. Ares appeared to Josh as he was walking through the downtown streets of New York. Ares was in his normal garb for this era, biker styled clothing, Harley Davidson, Etcetera. He gave josh an Enchanted Spear that morphed into a combat knife for travel, and a sword that turned into a Baseball bat when not in use.
Physical Appearance: Short, dark hair, glasses. He is your average run-of-the-mill multi-racial boy. Though his physical appearance is average, his style of clothing is much different. He usually wears dark clothing, either Band tee's or scary graphic skull shirts. He has a comfortable pair of Combat boots, and is usually seen in regular jeans and a hoodie of some sort. He ALWAYS has his beanie (sock hat) on, he hates letting his hair loose, it gets in his eyes and gets in the way of battle.
Personality: Humorous at times, but when angered or he feels threatened, he goes into DEATH-STARE mode. Meaning he pretty much glares around as if he was looking for something to fight. It used to be, that most would say he is a very fun person to be around, but after the discovery of his heritage, all he has been able to muster is anger and offensive humor.
Fatal Flaw: Anger, like a true child of the War God
Pets: Pitt-Bull named Titan, (Ironic, I know.)
Talents: Parkour, Battle-Tactician, Fantastic all around fighter
Weapons: Celestial Bronze Spear, Celestial Bronze Longsword
Year-Round or Summer: Year round
Other: None
The cellphone wasn't for use, it was to conceal the spear. But i changed it out with a combat knife. :) | |
| | | JoshHandegard
Posts : 16 Join date : 2012-02-15 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Ahem... My charrie form. [needs accepting] Fri Feb 17, 2012 5:00 pm | |
| O.o .... wondering if any Mods are going to respond...? | |
| | | Zan Mega Asshole Duo
Posts : 10035 Join date : 2010-05-04 Age : 27 Location : butthole PA
| Subject: Re: Ahem... My charrie form. [needs accepting] Sat Feb 18, 2012 10:52 am | |
| I think it would be better if you did fill out his mortal family form. By the way, my oldest character has a baseball bat sword. xD It's modeled after mine. But, I think your character is good! Just one question... what's a parkour? | |
| | | JoshHandegard
Posts : 16 Join date : 2012-02-15 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Ahem... My charrie form. [needs accepting] Sat Feb 18, 2012 4:57 pm | |
| Parkour, in a nutshell is free-running. Climbing things people would find too difficult, making your way around things that would seem impossible. Like scaling a building or hopping roof-to-roof. stuff like that. | |
| | | Theseus12
Posts : 185 Join date : 2012-02-08 Age : 31 Location : The planet nirn
| Subject: Re: Ahem... My charrie form. [needs accepting] Wed Feb 22, 2012 5:25 pm | |
| You mean clambering around like in the game inFamous? | |
| | | JoshHandegard
Posts : 16 Join date : 2012-02-15 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Ahem... My charrie form. [needs accepting] Mon Feb 27, 2012 11:16 pm | |
| No, not like that. The closest description I can give you of parkour is freerunning, (I.E running on a rooftop, sliding over vents and the like very smoothly... climbing up surfaces some would think way too hard, etc.) BUT THIS CHARRY SERIOUSLY NEEDS ACCEPTING D: | |
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