percgirl16's characters

Half-Bloods
Name: Diane Solis Omega
Age/Birthday: 12/ August 17
Gender: Female
God Parent: Apollo
Claimed: Yes
Mortal Family: Dani Omega
Years in Camp: 1
Brief History: Her father left their family the day her best friend moved to town, when she was five. Been on one quest to find her best friend, Josh, who is also a half blood. She learned to play all percussion instruments when she was 3. She was never kicked out of school but is always in trouble for something. Like most half bloods, she has dyslexia and ADHD.
Physical Appearance: Diane has soft, brown hair and gold rimmed eyes. She wears glasses and almost always has a tan. She is short and of average weight. Often has a distant look in her eyes.
Personality: She loves to be out in the sun. Music is her all time favorite pass time. Loves sports but is generally only interested if they are life threatening. She always puts her friends before herself.
Fatal Flaw: Too concerned about her friends' safety
Pets: None
Talents: Music, heals faster than mortals, and good with bow and arrow
Weapons:Pitch pipe that changes to a bow with a never ending supply of arrows
Year-Round or Summer: Summer
Other: Has a prophecy to connect the gods through being with Josh

The fourth sentence in her appearance isn't a complete sentence. And what do you mean she's too concerned about her friends' safety? Like Percy's loyalty? What you put down for her personality isn't exactly a personality. You're just stating things she likes to do. Although, 'She always puts her friends before herself,' is a good example of her personality!