my character request

this is my first characters
they are twins

Name: Jack Smith
Age/Birthday: 27/10/1998
Gender: male
God Parent: athena
Claimed: No
Mortal Family: carly smith (twin sister) daniel smith (father) laura smith (mother)
Years in Camp: 0
Brief History: he and his family have been living on the road ever since he was born.But after years of travling on the road
they settled down in a small town and begain a normal life. but on the first day of school they keep seeing weird things like
this girls dog (which every one say's is tiny and cute) but all that they saw was a big brown bloodhound thing.Then after weeks
of weird and crasy stuff in the town there parets take them to camp half blood.But when they where almost there they where attacked and their
parents sacrficed themselves so they could get to camp
Physical Appearance: he has short brown hair.he is 156 cm . alot of the time he wears jeans and a ski jacket
and he wears converse all star sneakers.
Personality: he is funny and is always making people laugh but he is still very smart he just does not act like it.
but the only thing he hates most is when people compare him to his sister.
Fatal Flaw:he can be very self-centered and sometimes only car about him self
Pets: a eagle called eagle
Weapons: Bow and arrow with 2 daggers.
Year-Round or Summer: year round


Name: carly Smith
Age/Birthday: 27/10/1998
Gender: female
God Parent: athena
Claimed: No
Mortal Family: Jack smith (twin sister) daniel smith (father) laura smith (mother)
Years in Camp: 0
Brief History: she and her family have been living on the road ever since she was born.But after years of travling on the road
they settled down in a small town and begain a normal life. but on the first day of school they keep seeing weird things like
this girls dog (which every one say's is tiny and cute) but all that they saw was a big brown bloodhound thing.Then after weeks
of weird and crasy stuff in the town there parets take them to camp half blood.But when they where almost there they where attacked and their
parents sacrficed themselves so they could get to camp
Physical Appearance: She has long brown hair. She is 150 cm . Alot of the time she wears jeans and a ski jacket
and she wears converse all star sneakers.( like her brother)
Personality:She is very serious but she is still very smart but the only thing she hates most is when people compare her to her brother .
Fatal Flaw:She can be unfriendly at times
Pets: A little Chihuahua that follows her every where
Weapons: long sword with a daggers.
Year-Round or Summer: Year round

If you want your characters accepted quickly you're going to have to add more detail and capital letters. and check spellings (shord = sword)

Hello. You need our brief history, physical appearance, and personality longer and everything basically needs more details. Try your best to use correct spelling and grammar! :]