Imani's Confusing characters.. (Needs acceptences!)

What, on my computer it's five sentances

You use capitalized words after commas. Perhaps you are confusing them for periods? :3

Edited. -.- *eyetwitch*

Lydia should RP with my charrie carter

Name: "I am Maria Ramirez"
Age/Birthday: Last time I checked, I'm 17.
Gender: I have long hair, I'm a female duh!
God Parent: Well... my dad is the demigod son of Ares and my mom is the demigod daughter of Hecate..
Claimed: Yeah, the symbols were diffrent.
Mortal Family: Chelsea Morales-Ramirez(Mom)
Jose Ramirez(Dad)
Victor Ramirez- 15 (Adopted brother, and he is also a demigod!)
Years in Camp: Ever since I was born...

Brief History: Well.. It all started when my dad asked my mom out on a date. It was 1994, Then after the date they started going out (This happened in camp). They were voted this weirdest couple in the whole camp. But they ignored their friends and half-siblings, So my mom went into my dad's cabin and they were all alone... You know what happened and a year later my mom had me! Well my mom and dad took turns to take care of me so they lived in my grandparents
Physical Appearance: At least 4 sentences. Be sure to include details!
Personality: At least 4 sentences. Be sure to include details!
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