Burnt Toasts Characters

Character Requests, 1, Brooks Gillt

Half-Blood
Name: Brooks Gillt
Age/Birthday: November 22nd, 1996
Gender: Male
God Parent: Ares
Claimed: Yes
Mortal Family: Amy Gillt, Mother (deceased) James Gillt, half-brother
Years in Camp: 1
Brief History: Brooks Gillt, an ordinary child- wrong. Leaving home after his mothers death, his friend, Kyle, a satyr had succesfully escorted him to Camp Half Blood. His mother was a pacifist, so after being claimed by Ares, he begins to question his family. He wasn'tvery good at making friends, but something told him he needed to learn, now that he was surrounded by muscular bullies. Books had a feeling he wouldn't be liking Camp HalfBlood. His ethnicity is indian. Chiron pities him.
Physical Appearance: Short black hair. Hazel colored eyes. Thin lips, with a small scar running down the left side. Thick earlobes. Brooks is 6'1" 112 LBS. Brooks has no freckles. Standard articles of clothing: Solid red shirt, black sneakers, and jeans. Brooks will where this when he doesnt find himself forced to wear the regular Orange Camp Halfblood T-Shirt.
Personality: He used to be funny, charming, and fun to be around. After his mothers death, he seems very shy, less energetic, and just.... dull. He has been that way ever since he got to camp. (Since his mom died before that.) So thats how people think he has always been- boring and sad. Some of his hobbies are playing basketball, fishing, and hunting. He hates reading, music, and getting up early.
Fatal Flaw: Greed
Pets: None.
Talents: Running, hunting, and fighting

Try being more descriptive on physical appearance and personality. Add details:

Suggestions for physical appearance~
freckles?
blemishes?
weight?
favorite clothing?


Suggestions for Personality~
outgoing or shy?
likes?
dislikes?

Thank you for the suggestions. I edited it, feel free to read it over again.

I'd still like maybe a long sentence or two on physical appearance. It's just that it looks so short to me. xD The clothing they wear always makes a long enough sentence. ;)

Accepted!

Name: Ian Wess
Age/Birthday: June 12th, 13
Gender: Male
God Parent: Aphrodite
Claimed: Yes
Mortal Family: Jennifer Wess, StepMother, Brian Wess, father, Hannah Wess, half sister
Years in Camp: 0
Brief History: Ian Wess was born on June 12th, 1997. Aphrodite, the goddess of love and beauty had given birth to him. She was a proud mother, but as usual, te time came when she had to leave. It was hard for Ian's father, Brian Wess. They were madly in love, ands they both were practically in tears when Aphrodite had left.

Two years later, Brian had met a certain Jenniffer Khan, who ended up marrying him after countless dates, deciding that they m,ade a perfect couple. Ian had always believed that Jennifer was his mother, which made it harder for him as a he progressed through his childhood.

Ian started having second thoughts on there 'Happy family', five years after his half sister, Hannah was born. They dispised eachother, yet in every fight the two had had, Jennifer had sided with her perfect daughter.

When Ian was 12, a month away from 13, his father had pulled him aside from there 6:00 dinner, and told him that they had to leave. Apparently, his "mother" seemed to understand just fine, and with that, they were gone. Brian had got his child in the car quickly, and was anxious for them to leave. He said something about a Gorogon, as they pulled away from the driveway. And with that, as they descended a long journey Ian never knew they would have, he explained about Camp Half Blood.


Physical Appearance: Short red hair, with freckles covering practically every part of his skin. An average sized nose, and lucious hazel eyes. He has a thin body type, and a straight posture. His eyebrows are hard to notice, but they are there. His preferred article of clothing would be his green undearmor, and silky blue jeans. His lips are red, thin, and soft.


Personality: Some would say that he is a perfect match as an Aphrodite child, others... not so much. He likes looking fancy, and occasionally looks into mirrors to make sure he doesnt look like the stupidest child on earth, but he is probabaly the most sporty child at camp, at the same time. Ian also loves the occasional attention from other girls at camp. Ian is definataly not shy, and very outgoing. He is also very independant, and can think of anything of a situation. Some would probabaly mistake him as a son of Athena. Yet, it is very easy to annoy him, and when he gets annoyed, he might get.... well, mad. Ian also isnt the very best... school student. However, when it comes to the Aphrodite Cabin, he believes that Aphrodite isnt about being beautiful, but spreading beauty.


Fatal Flaw: Ians fatal flaw is definataly putting himself in front of his friends. He would give up his life to protect them. And, even without knowing it; much much more.

Pets: A hare, he caught with his bare hands after arriving at camp. He named it snowflake, even though it was the middle of summer.

Talents: Basketball, Flirting, Playing Chess, Reading others thoughts by looking at very unnoticable things they do in there expressions.

Looks good! Maybe a few more flaws personality-wise, though?

Haha, yea. Now that you mention it, he is a little TOO good personality wise. Well I edited it. And, I have a question, can I have a son of Zeus, but hes unclaimed and cant really do anything until I meet the requirements? :/

Sorry Toasty, but rules are rules. You could only have your characters limited to every god except any demi-Titan, or a Big Three Character. Stay online and active, you'd get your son of Zeus in no time!

Okay! :D

Thanks for editing, he's accepted!