Happypegasus' character can't wait to rp

Name: Joy Hemmel
Age: 7 Birthday: November 2
Gender: Girl
God Parent: Dionysus
Claimed: not yet
Mortal Family: Beth Hemmel dead
Years in Camp: none
Brief History: mom killed. Sent here to find dad. Misses mom. Has moved a lot.
Physical Appearance: golden brown braids. Chocolate eyes. Two dimples. Tan skin. Jean capris and green ruffly tank top( now a camp shirt)
Personality: very happy. Bouncy. able to make friends. Loves nature and animals. Fav color green.
Fatal Flaw: trusts too easy scared of undead and bugs except for pretty ones like fireflies.
Pets:n/a
Talents:Hides easily, makes friends easy, agile
Weapons: none now( will be knife and crossbow)
Year-Round or Summer: year round
Other: likes ponies

Can you make full sentences, and not 2-5 word sentences?

Yeah, I was trying to fit it all, sorry.
I'll rewrite it:
Name: Joy Hemmel
Age: She is 7 years oldand her birthday is November 2
Gender: Joy is a girl (maybe a little of a girly girl)
God Parent: Her god parent is Dionysus
Claimed: She is not claimed just yet
Mortal Family: Mary Beth Hemmel, her mom, is dead
Years in Camp: absolutely none
Brief History: Joy was really close to her mom, even though they kept moving a lot. Her mom got her head bitten off by a monster. Before that happened she told Joy to go to CHB and meet her dad. Joy really misses her mom
Physical Appearance: Joy has two medium length golden brown braids. She has a lot of freckles on her nose and cheeks and chocolate brown eyes. The cutest feature of her is probably her two dimples that appear when she smiles (which she does a lot). She likes going barefoot and wears a ruffely green shirt (now it will be camp shirt) and jean capris.
Personality: She is always smiling and makes lots of friends. She is very sympathetic. She loves nature and likes being outside all the time. She loves animals too, so you might find her in the stables.
Fatal Flaws: She trusts too easily. She is also really afraid of the undead and of ugly bugs (the only pretty ones are fireflies and butterflies and ladybugs) Also is severely allergic to dairy. She is naive and can't tell when something is a sensitive subject for someone. She will daydream if you bore her. She is a little nosy too.
Pets: none right now
Talents: Joy is very agile and can hide easily too. She is also really good at making friends.
Weapons: None now, will be a knife and crossbow.
Year-Round or Summer: Joy lives at CBH year round.
Other: likes ponies :D

Okay, looks good now. Maybe add a few flaws though? And you don't have to post the template again, you just have to edit the first one. :3

Ok and there's 3 flaws they are just hard to see she trusts too easily, is scared of undead and of bugs. If that's not enough I'll find something else like allergic to dairy or gets sunburn easily.
Actually I like that. I'll add allergic to dairy on my charrie thing.

Welcome to Camp Half-Blood!

Joy is great! All she needs is a few more flaws.

Fears and allergies generally aren't considered flaws, at least not serious or personality flaws. Flaws are more of things like stubbornness and uncontrollable anger. But Joy seems like a mellow type of person, so I would choose flaws that are quieter and a little more subtle, like secretly being a little more selfish or quick to dismiss someone as a threat or being unable to tell whether someone is hostile or not, or being naive. That's just some suggestions, you can come up with your own flaws for Joy!

Ok I'm gonna put being naive, but I meant with the fears like, if she was facing one of the giant ants or one of the undead in the Underworld, she would be of no use. Thank you for the suggestions! I'll add a couple more flaws and then you can check it over and ok it! Thank you so much I love the Percy Jackson series!
Ok I added naive, being unable to tell when something is a sore subject, nosy, and daydreams if you bore her. Those are pretty big so I hope that'll be good. I'm sorry that I made a kinda Mary/Gary stu. That was never my intention.

That's awesome! Thanks for editing! She's accepted!
And no no, it's perfectly fine! Just because I asked for a few more flaws didn't mean she was a Mary-Sue! xD

Booyah!!! Thank you!!!!! I'm heading to doing now!!!! Hip hip hooray!!! ( I'm kinda excited... XD)