*Piper's* characters

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Name: Adella Drew
Age/Birthday: 16, 1/20
Gender: female
God Parent: Athena
Claimed: Yes
Mortal Family: Doug Drew, Doug's new wife Jennifer, Doug and Jennifer's kid Stuart.
Years in Camp: 10
Brief History: Doug Drew, Adella's dad, knew Athena was a goddess. He was a greek mythology historian and they met in Paris, France. Doug put Adella in camp when she was 6 years old. She's lived there all her life and goes home on winter breaks. Doug often feels nervous around Adella because he fears she is more powerful then him.
Physical Appearance: Curly black hair, stormy blue eyes. 5"6
Personality: Adella can be outgoing and friendly. But at times she can become stressed and her temper will flare. She's sometimes clumsy and does not think before she acts.
Fatal Flaw: She's clausterphobic
Pets: a light brown pegasus named Spirit
Talents: She's smart and a whiz at archery
Weapons: bow and arrow
Year-Round or Summer: Year Round except for winter
Other: She is in love with Apollo

Nice character! All she needs is about three more sentences for her appearance and one more for her personality. Also, phobias generally aren't a fatal flaw, so maybe switch her fatal flaw over to her temper or maybe stubbornness?

Name: Adella Drew
Age/Birthday: 16, 1/20
Gender: female
God Parent: Athena
Claimed: Yes
Mortal Family: Doug Drew, Doug's new wife Jennifer, Doug and Jennifer's kid Stuart.
Years in Camp: 10
Brief History: Doug Drew, Adella's dad, knew Athena was a goddess. He was a greek mythology historian and they met in Paris, France. Doug put Adella in camp when she was 6 years old. She's lived there all her life and goes home on winter breaks. Doug often feels nervous around Adella because he fears she is more powerful then him.

Physical Appearance: Curly black hair, stormy blue eyes. 5"6, she has a scar in the shape of an arrow. She's skinny. You can probably find her wearing skinny black jeans, her orange camp t-shirt and her bows and arrows strapped on her back.

Personality: Adella can be outgoing and friendly. But at times she can become stressed and her temper will flare. She's sometimes clumsy and does not think before she acts. She's always welcoming to new arrivals.


Fatal Flaw: Sometimes stubborn, a clumsy.

Pets: a light brown pegasus named Spirit


Talents: She's smart and a whiz at archery

Weapons: bow and arrow


Year-Round or Summer: Year Round except for winter

Other: She is in love with Apollo

Is she approved?

Yes, sorry about the delay in response! Thanks for editing, she's accepted!

Thanks so much!!

Name: Cella
Age: 15
Gender: female
Years at Camp: 13
Brief History: Her mother was a nymph and her father was a human. She grew up as a human but found she had wierd powers. Her father put her in camp and she has been living there ever since. She likes camp and would not dream of leaving.
Dwelling: Star nymph
Physical appearence: Dark brown hair with starry violet eyes. She's tall and graceful. A scar is on her shoulder and she is always self concious when people stare at it. You can usually find her wearing a sleeveless sun dress, with light blue stars on it.
Personality: Cella can be shy, adventurous and caring. She hates seeing people hurt because once a monster beat her and her old friend (giving her the scar). Her friend did not make it but she did and that is one of the main reasons she loves helping hurt demi gods.
Talents: healing, singing and making friends with animals.
Weapons: bow and arrows.
Other: She's always dreamed of a demi god hero falling in love with her.

Looks good! She just needs one more sentence for her personality and a few more flaws for her personality.

Ok, thanks :D

Name: Cella
Age: 15
Gender: female
Years at Camp: 13
Brief History: Her mother was a nymph and her father was a human. She grew up as a human but found she had wierd powers. Her father put her in camp and she has been living there ever since. She likes camp and would not dream of leaving.
Dwelling: Star nymph
Physical appearence: Dark brown hair with starry violet eyes. She's tall and graceful. A scar is on her shoulder and she is always self concious when people stare at it. You can usually find her wearing a sleeveless sun dress, with light blue stars on it.
Personality: Cella can be shy, adventurous and caring. She hates seeing people hurt because once a monster beat her and her old friend (giving her the scar). Her friend did not make it but she did and that is one of the main reasons she loves helping hurt demi gods. Her temper can flare at times and it causes her to get angry and sometimes wilt. So, do NOT anger her! ;)
Talents: healing, singing and making friends with animals.
Weapons: bow and arrows.
Other: She's always dreamed of a demi god hero falling in love with her

Thanks for editing! Accepted!

Name: Elissa Murphy
Age/Birthday: 16. 1/6/
Gender: F
God Parent: Khione
Claimed: Yes
Mortal Family: Thomas Murphy
Years in Camp: 4
Brief History: Thomas Murphy is a famous ice skater and often spent his days at the rink. One time he was there he met a young lady named Katie (Khione). He fell deeply in love with her. Elissa was born 2 years later. Once Khione left everything fell apart for Thomas. He spent more days at the rink and less time with his daughter. Then one day he shipped her off to camp and decided not to talk to her again.
Physical Appearance: Petite, tall. She has blond hair and ice blue eyes. She can usually be found wearing jeans and a white tanktop. She has long eye lashes. She has a little bit of freckles.
Personality: Kind, shy and gentle but if you try to pry to much into her past she can get a temper flare and get angry. You can usually find her at the beach, alone. Elissa holds her friends very close to her heart. She has always wanted a boyfriend but thinks she's to shy to have one. She's very affectionate.
Fatal Flaw: Temper and clumsiness.
Pets: None
Talents: Ice skating.
Weapons: A silver dagger.
Year-Round or Summer: Year around,
Other: None

Nice character! All she needs is one more sentence for appearance and three more for personality.

edited! :)

Thanks for editing! Accepted!

Name: Andrea Brown. Nickname: Andy.
Age/Birthday: 16. Birthday: 5/5/95
Gender: F
God Parent: Iris
Claimed: Yes
Mortal Family: Bobby Brown.
Years in Camp: 15
Brief History: Andrea was born in England. Bobby was extremely poor so he decided to send Andrea off to camp. She and her nanny, Emma, took a plane to get there. The plane crashed and fell from the sky. Iris begged Zeus to save Andrea's life so he had Aeolus make a wind current and bring her to camp. Emma died.
Physical Appearance: Andrea has light brown hair and brown eyes. She's 5"4. She likes wearing sundresses, so you can usually find her with one on. She also wears headbands every other day. She has a rainbow necklace that she always wears.
Personality: Andrea is kind, caring and watches out for others. She likes helping people and often doesn't even think of herself. Though if you get her really mad and start insulting her she will get violent. She does not like seeing people hurt. She is also very proud and won't admit when she is wrong.
Fatal Flaw: She's a klutz
Pets: A german sheperd named Scout.
Talents: Drawing and singing.
Weapons: A bow and arrow.
Year-Round or Summer: Year around.
Other: Nope

Looks good! I would suggest adding a few more flaws personality-wise though.

Edited

Accepted. Next time, challenge yourself. Try to be even more descriptive on your characters and in role plays! :]

Thanks for replying so fast!

You're welcome! :]