Fallendemigod's Characters (needs aproval)

Name: Jake Masters

Age/Birthday: 16, april 3rd 1996

Gender:male

God parent:khione

Claimed: Yes

Mortal family: Christopher Masters(Father) Cynthia Masters(Sister)

Years in camp:0

Brief history: Jake grew up in northern Maine with his Dad and younger sister. From a young age, Jake
had a very strong Demi-God Aura, drawing monsters quite often. His Dad never believed his sons wild stories of the monsters attacking him, by thirteen, His Dad was sending him to counselors, believing he had schizophrenia . He ran away from home at sixteen, but through a vision by his Mom led him to camp half blood.

Physical appearance: Pale skin, which is usually icy to the touch. He has Grey eyes that glow white when using Demi-God powers. He has white hair which is chin length. He has snake-bite piercings on his lower lip. And silver stud earrings. He has a Lean build, and is about 5'11 weighing about 150. He has a tattoo of a crescent moon on the back of his neck.

Personality: Cold, calculating, and sarcastic. Jake rarely shows whats going on in his mind. While being sarcastic, He is protective of his friends and would easily die for them. He could be seen as arrogant by many people, as he is very confident in him self and his abilities. He has a very hard time showing his emotions, and hides behind his sarcastic demeanor. He tends not to trust many people, as his past relationship with his Dad was full of his Dad disbelieving him.

Fatal flaw: His fatal flaw is his inability to trust people, and even worse, when he trusts people and is betrayed, he has a hard time getting over it. Once trusting a person though, he can easily be manipulated through the ones he cares about.

Pets:None.

Talents:He is fair with a bow, but excels with a sword. He also has an icy aura, capable of cooling the air around him. He has the ability to freeze water to a degree, and has some limited control of ice and water.

Weapons: Blessed silver short sword, and a white oak bow.

Year-round or summer:year around

Other =:none

He's really good, but his fatal flaw isn't really fatal. I'd say his would be personal loyalty, since he'd die for his friends. (But you can use whatever.)

So is he aproved?

No, you need to change his fatal flaw like I suggested.

My bad i forgot to hit send when i edited it, Alright is it good now though?