I really need someone who will make a good prophecy!!

Hey guys! Storys called Rise of the Empousi] This plot might sound a little familiar to some of you who role-play on here;)
Shana is the only daughter of Hydros, the god of fresh water. She arrives at CBH. A great prophecy is formed long before she came, but nobody except Chiron and Mr D know. She, Lizzie, Stella, Kat, and Jason (Not the Jason from the second series of real books) sneak out of camp and go to the mall. But they are attacked by four Empousi at threw different times. Alarmed, they rush to camp and decide that the number of Empousi population are rising and must be searching for something. They tell their findings to Chiron, and he tells them the great Prophecy, and they get a quest.(<--I need a prophecy that fits this plot) But what they don't know is that Abzu, A water lord (real in mythology) who threatened to take bak the creation of man kind by a flood (who is imprisoned under Mesopotamia, but now California *coughcoughcauseofalltheearthquakescough*) is rising, and will flood the earth, and the only way she can be fully powered is what the monsters are searching for, for her. The demigods soon discover the aqua sword, that has To the Best Warrior engraved on it, on their quest, what is the thing the Empousi are looking for. Then the Emposi come after them and capture them.(They have noooo idea about Abzu)

In the story Stella is actually bad, and Jason is the love interest.
So I need a prophecy. Thanks!!

Oh yeah, and you'll know who you are who helped create this story line (it's altered) without knowing.

And I need it to rhyme and be a little bit hard to understand because it's not going to make anysense to the demigods. Just so yah know, there are 2 Hermes kids (yeah I know) a Dionysus kid(Stella), a daughter of Erebus( Kat and Erebus is god of darkness) and it has to include the child of Hydros, of the child
Of the fresh (water) or child of the lake

Something like that in part of it. Thanks. If you need more info tell Me.


Obviously these aren't my Charries talking. I'm just making it colorful=]

5 shall go on a dangerous quest

To seek out the water lord

A mighty sword shall come to hand

A love and a traitor from friends form but the daughter of fresh water shall save the day.


How's that? Their kinda like poems. What do you think of it?

Five will go forth from the land of the gods

To find the weapon of kings against all odds

Beware the giant who hides beneath his throne

Waiting to devour with water and stone

Continue west to the Offspring of Fresh Water

But do not forget Hecate and her Daughters!

How's that?

its not the best but whatev:)

To many lines. There has to be four lines. Cut it down a few. Pretty good otherwise.

Of the children of the gods, five shall travel west

To find The Child of The lake and a forgotten sword

Of love, betrayal and blood shall they meet on their quest

To vanquish the darkness, The Great Water lord.

Idk? Does that work.

These are all good:) I can't decide which one :D

I think System's is the best. It's just my opinion....

Five together shall seek the sword
and fight together to stop the lord.
Child of Water, beware, the vine shall betray,
In the end the champion shall never give way.



Not my best, But whatever!