My Arrival (please talk to me!?)

I smile. "Anytime's good with me." I realize I was still smiling. I was seriously starting to like this guy. "Where do you wanna go?"

"Woah, four years?" I say to Kat. "Is it really fun here?" Judging how she looked happy from four years, I could tell I was going to have a great time. I jump off my bunk and stretch.

I smile to Kat. "Bye, see you there!" Then to Jason, I say, "Sure, sounds great!" I couldn't believe I was going on a date! I smile. "We Are[i] alowd off campus, aren't we?"

I smile as he kissed me. He went to sleep, so I guess I should too. I lay down and fall asleep. I dream of Jason (00C gtg to bed for real past midnight:))

Ally, please don't double post like you did in Page 2.

Lord Blazy, this the last sentance here is powerplaying --

A bigger smile lit my face. " What about tomorrow at this resturant in New York?" I asked with a big smile. She said yes.

I'm sorry I have to keep showing up in this topic, but please follow the rules. It makes everything run smoother.

umm actually she said SURE before i posted that,so please read the replies first,i asked her out on page two and she said sure,so its not powerplaying,i actually made sure it wasn't. I meant she said yes as in she said she would go out,not that she would go to the resturant,sorry,my punctuation wasn't clear,

You're having two of your characters ask out two different girls, and no one is using colors to show what character their using. So it looks like he's asking out the same girl two or three times.

ummmmm........................i am only using one character here..............you really don't make sense to me

I sit up in bed. "I'm Ally." I held out my hand for Keith to shake. "Sooo...how long have you been staying here?" I ask. I brush my hair because I just woke up.

I think I blushed when Jason changed shirts, but I tried to hide it. "I'm not really sire who my god parent may be. I really doubt it's Hermes because I really don't have any thriving skills or something. And I have a bow and arrow," I say, taking it out. I hold it up to show him. "I did archery before I got here. And I dunno," I shrugged. "I guess if I'm a daughter of Hermes...then...I don't know..."

"Sure," I smile. I go into the bathroom to change. I come out wearing a black and white polka-dot bikini. "Race ya there," I laugh, and take off.

I chased after her,being a son of Hermes,i easily caught up. I looked at her bikini "A bikini?" I smiled and kept running. Interesting

(Wait Lake or Beach?)

(There is a beach right?)

(yeah haha let's go there I'll post a topic)

(i see it)