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Mark_Son of Hermes
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 |  Subject: SonOfPoseidon's second Character  Tue May 31, 2011 1:13 am | |
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Paul John (PJ) FlanaganAge/Birthday: 16, November 4, 1994 Gender: Male God Parent: Hephaestus Claimed: Yes Mortal Family: Mother - Claire Flanagan Years in Camp: New Arrival Brief History: PJ isn't greatly popular but he's not a loner. He been on the track team for 3 years and always runs track when he can. one day, while running his 5th lap, he notice someone in the bleachers and that someone turns out to be no other than his not-so secret crush, Rebecca Filles, when he saw her, he stopped running and joined her. As they were talking, PJ found that she wanted to kiss him as much as he wanted to kiss her. They were about to kiss, when the grass in front of the bleachers burst into flames. PJ was wondering what just happened when the fire disappeared leaving an area of burnt grass. Physical Appearance: PJ is 5'8 with short, black hair and large hazel eyes. He wears a "stay cool" shirt and gym shorts. He has white teeth and a great body. PJ has that athlete look. He is white but because he always in the sun, he has some color to his skin. Personality: PJ is a nice guy but sometimes has no idea where he's going. He always looks out for his friends and will get back at anyone who hurts them physically, emotionally, or mentally. He's smart but get distracted from time to time and forgets a lot of stuff that he's supposed to remember. He has ADHD but no Dyslexia. Fatal Flaws: PJ gets too into what he's doing and will get angry if he can't reach his goal. Pets: if you count Lacerta, his mechanical lizard that he built himself, then yes. Talents: PJ is great inventor (Bringing back Lacerta) and a fast runner (bringing back those 4.75 laps) Weapons: A metal wristband that turns into a shield when pressed and a click-pen that turns into a hammer. Year-Round or Summer: Summer Other: PJ is afraid of heights and he has pyrokinesis. 
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Mark_Son of Hermes
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| | Subject: Re: SonOfPoseidon's second Character Tue May 31, 2011 2:42 am | |
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Banana
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| | Subject: Re: SonOfPoseidon's second Character Tue May 31, 2011 3:42 am | |
| Yo! Nice charrie, but could you perhaps keep all of your character forms in one topic? Thanks. | |
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Angel
The Puppet Master
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| | Subject: Re: SonOfPoseidon's second Character Tue May 31, 2011 7:31 am | |
| You need to expand on his physical appearance a bit more. At least one more sentence, please! ^^ | |
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Mark_Son of Hermes
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| | Subject: Re: SonOfPoseidon's second Character Tue May 31, 2011 10:56 am | |
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Mark_Son of Hermes
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| | Subject: Re: SonOfPoseidon's second Character Tue May 31, 2011 9:37 pm | |
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| | Subject: Re: SonOfPoseidon's second Character Wed Jun 01, 2011 7:25 am | |
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Mark_Son of Hermes
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| | Subject: Re: SonOfPoseidon's second Character Mon Jun 06, 2011 3:16 pm | |
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Demitri GarciaAge: 16 4/9/94 Gender: Male God Parent: Apollo Claimed: Yes Mortal Family: Tyresa Garcia (Mother) Years in Camps: 3 Brief History: Tyresa met Apollo at an art gallery when he walked up to her and said that he couldn’t tell which was more beautiful, the art or the lady staring at the art. They hit it off and the rest of the night was the best night Tyresa had. After a wonderful night Apollo revealed himself as the Greek God Apollo and gave her not only the ability to see through the mist but also Demitri. When Demitri was just turning 10, he was given a present by an electrician who was fixing the light at his house. When he was 13, he was attacked by his English teacher who turned out to be a minotaur, a random person, who turned out to be a satyr brought him to Camp where Apollo claimed him right as he got there. Physical Appearance: Demitri is 5’6 with spiky, brown hair and gray eyes. He’s a little tan but very muscular and athletic. He wears a white t-shirt and blue gym shorts with Air Speed shoes and a bronze pendent with a sword in the center he wears around his neck. He has very white teeth and a bright smile. He has been sometimes said to have look just like his father and other times not. Personality:He hits on every girl in Aphrodite cabin, boyfriend or not. He very much likes his father, poetic, flirty, and very annoying. He almost never pays attention but if it important he’s all ears. If anybody messes with his family and friends they will regret it. Other than that he is a very nice guy and very good-looking. Fatal Flaws: He is too proud of himself and hits on every girls he thinks are hots Pets: None Talents: A great swordsman and guitar player Weapons: a bronze pendent around his neck that his father gave him as an electrician with a sword in the center that when pressed grow into a sword Year-round or Summer: Year-round Other: Demitri is a great singer and a great healer 
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Mark_Son of Hermes
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| | Subject: Re: SonOfPoseidon's second Character Mon Jun 06, 2011 3:19 pm | |
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Nico
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| | Subject: Re: SonOfPoseidon's second Character Mon Jun 06, 2011 3:39 pm | |
| Dude, it had only been 3 minutes. Just be patient. | |
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SeaSeaweedbrain
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| | Subject: Re: SonOfPoseidon's second Character Mon Jun 06, 2011 6:24 pm | |
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Mark_Son of Hermes
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| | Subject: Re: SonOfPoseidon's second Character Mon Jun 06, 2011 11:59 pm | |
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Angel
The Puppet Master
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| | Subject: Re: SonOfPoseidon's second Character Tue Jun 07, 2011 12:02 am | |
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!Clove!
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| | Subject: Re: SonOfPoseidon's second Character Sun Jun 12, 2011 4:36 am | |
| Nice Charrie, I hope we can roleplay after my charrie gets accepted. | |
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Mark_Son of Hermes
Posts : 1371
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| | Subject: Re: SonOfPoseidon's second Character Fri Jun 24, 2011 4:51 pm | |
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Keithley Mason (Keith)Age: 15 October 4, 1994 Gender: Male God Parent: Hermes Claimed: Yes Mortal Family: Chloe Mason – Mom Years in Camp: New Arrival Brief History: Keith is the Captain of the track team. He’s never stops practicing whether it’s raining, snowing, or just blazing hot. One day while running the track, a Hellhound came out of the bushes and attacked him. He ran to the equipment room trying to hide and found a bronze Frisbee. When trying to reach for it he accidently flipped it and a sword landed in front of him. He picked the sword up, opened the door and sliced the hellhound vaporizing it. A satyr saw the whole thing and took him to camp where Hermes claimed him instantly. Physical Appearance: Keith is 5’8 with spiky blond hair and Turquoise eyes. He has a white shirt with the sleeves cut off, Green gym shorts, and sketchers rebounds. He always has a brita water bottle so that way he has fresh water every time. He has a natural skin tone but is a little tan because of the sun. Personality: Keith has an open mind but when he’s bored, all he thinks about is running the track and breaking the record for the fastest time running a mile. He is very supportive of his friends. He hates bullies and people who will pick on innocent people. He has a great memory but can’t really read because of his dyslexia. He thinks of the entire track team as his family even though he really only has his mom. Fatal Flaws: Keith is a little too trustworthy Pets: None Talents: Keith is a fast runner Weapons: A bronze Frisbee that was revealed to be a sword when accidently flipped off the shelf trying to fend off a hellhound. Year-round or Summer: Summer Other: Keith has ADHD, is Claustrophobic,and can read ancient greek 
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Nico
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| | Subject: Re: SonOfPoseidon's second Character Fri Jun 24, 2011 4:57 pm | |
| There are just two things I saw.
1) Maybe add some personality flaws?
2) His fatal flaw isn't very fatal. It's like a fear. I would recommend changing to to something like: He tends to push himself too hard and past his limits. | |
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Mark_Son of Hermes
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| | Subject: Re: SonOfPoseidon's second Character Fri Jun 24, 2011 5:21 pm | |
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Mark_Son of Hermes
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| | Subject: Re: SonOfPoseidon's second Character Sat Jun 25, 2011 12:55 pm | |
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Angel
The Puppet Master
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| | Subject: Re: SonOfPoseidon's second Character Sat Jun 25, 2011 4:55 pm | |
| Scott James, you need to stop double posting. We will get to your character when we can, double posting is against the rules here and if you do it again there will be consequences. Stop. Please.
Your new character is Accepted. | |
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Mark_Son of Hermes
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| | Subject: Re: SonOfPoseidon's second Character Thu Jul 21, 2011 4:24 pm | |
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Scott JamesAge: 16 born April 15, 1995 Gender: Male God Parent: Poseidon Claimed: Yes Mortal Family: Mother, Quinn Lapler, Step-dad, Eric Lapler, Half-Brother, Daniel Lapler Years in Camp 1 year Brief History Scott was a popular kid in school. He had many friends and was captain of the swim team. He had two free blocks where he spent it in the school pool practicing. One Saturday, while practicing at the aquatic center, the captain of the rival school's swim team and acted like he was the best of everything. Scott was so mad that unknowingly he made the water spout out and splashes them. Right there, Scott knew something weird was going on. Physical Appearance: Scott is a little over 5'7. He has short, spiky, brown hair and large blue eyes. he has great skin and a excellent body. he has a scar on his upper right arm. Scott is just another good looking guy. Personality: Scott is great guy but has a bit of a temper. He always protects his friends no matter what and would do anything for them. He is a person who would definitely kicks someones butt if he needed to. He's nice just don't get him mad, I PROMISE you. Fatal Flaws: Gets distracted easily, mostly by very pretty girls. Pets: A fish named "Ocean" because he was literally as blue as the ocean Talents: besides swimming, Scott can sing a little. Weapons: Scott wears a shell around his neck that can turn into a sword when pressed. Year-Round or Summer: Summer Other: Everything you need to know is above 
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Nico
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| | Subject: Re: SonOfPoseidon's second Character Thu Jul 21, 2011 4:26 pm | |
| Did you send him to an Admin? | |
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Mark_Son of Hermes
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| | Subject: Re: SonOfPoseidon's second Character Thu Jul 21, 2011 4:31 pm | |
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Nico
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| | Subject: Re: SonOfPoseidon's second Character Thu Jul 21, 2011 5:02 pm | |
| Did you PM him to an Admin, then get the Admin's okay before posting him here? The Big Three Process. | |
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Mark_Son of Hermes
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| | Subject: Re: SonOfPoseidon's second Character Thu Jul 21, 2011 5:05 pm | |
| Well I thought I could just post him since I've been here for more 2 weeks and have more than 500 posts and I have been an active member I thought that was all you needed. | |
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Nico
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| | Subject: Re: SonOfPoseidon's second Character Thu Jul 21, 2011 5:07 pm | |
| No. That's the requirements to even make a Big Three character. You must follow the Big Three Process now that you're qualified, which can be found in the Character Template section. | |
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